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"His Wicked Angel" | Grover&Winget/Armaan&Riddhima (Page 3)

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Posted: 23 May 2011 at 12:28pm | IP Logged
Updated my comment on page 1, ladies!
Amazing work, beautifully written - and tragic concept! LOVED IT.

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Posted: 23 May 2011 at 1:08pm | IP Logged

I'm baccck to edit the second time cos the first time I clicked something and my whole post went akjhdjshfjhg#! But anyway :D Since I love you both so much I shall write all over again even though I am sickiee << Do you feel sympathetic towards me? I hope so! :( :P

 

So let me begin, firstly, that VM is SO good! Noha did an absolutely brilliant job with it and I can really tell why you guys may have been inspired from it. It's so creative and the concept is so unique, I love it! It makes me wish I was so creative with these sort of dark concepts but anywho, its brilliant!

 

The character or should I say bhoot of Ridhima kinda scares me, haha! No, but on a serious note her character was beautiful in a weird way. :| My absolutely favourite part of the OS was the part where she kept asking Armaan to prove his love for her. It was intriguing how she asked him questions so innocently and then Armaan had no other option but to abide her. It was almost like he was blindly in love with this Ridhima and would do anything for her that was seriously amazing! I loved the way she kept saying "You did it Armaan!" it's like she was pleased with what he was doing. For Armaan it was like a compliment. He started to think he was doing the right thing for her which led to whatever he did in future for her. His character of a psychotic killer honestly was portrayed so well! Till the very end I had no clue what was going to happen with his character and the way he died in the end was EXTREMELY shocking but I loved it! I don't think I would've loved it as much if you guys hadn't killed him LOL :P It goes well with the concept perfectly so (I never thought I would say this) I'm glad you killed him! :D

 

When I was reading it, I was glued to it. I knew something was mysterious but I couldn't figure out what it is.. the way you guys both wrote the piece my eyes didn't waver for a second (though I was on msn at the same time and kept speaking when I was shocked but that doesn't count :P). This is by far the best piece you've ever written in terms concept AND the way you write. It was brilliant and I don't think I can put it into better words to explain to you guys how much I love this OS of yours. I'm deffo gonna come back to this and read it again!<3

 

Muaaah! I love watermelon and Rabieees Di so muchooo!<333  



Edited by TheMelody. - 04 June 2011 at 7:26pm
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Posted: 23 May 2011 at 1:42pm | IP Logged
A very well written story! The concept and everything was amazing. The vm is really really good :)
The story was so intense and I really enjoyed reading it! It really was a perfect OS and you guys are just WOW!
Hope to see more OS and FF's from you guys...because you guys are truly talented and amazing at writing stories!
Beautifully written :)


Edited by Samiyah258 - 24 May 2011 at 9:58am
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Posted: 23 May 2011 at 3:40pm | IP Logged
OMG OMG OMG! THEE VM WASS AWESOOMEEE <3 
ANND THEE OS WASS BEYOND IMAGINATIION!
IIT WASS AMAZIING
HATSS OFF RABSYY & SARYY <3 
YUWW GUYSS AREE THEE BESSTT BESSTT BESSTT WRITERS.
YUWW TWWOO AREE REALLY REALLY TALEENTED <3
NO-ONEE CANN WRIITE LIIKE YUWW GUYSS =]
LOVEEDD THEE WAYY YUWW PORTRAYEDD EVERYTHIIN.
ARMAAN DIID ALL THATT TO PROVEE HIIMSELFF
RIDDHIMA DEMANDIIN SOO MUCH
TOOOGOOODD <3
I CNNT SAII ANYTHIIN ELSEE
P E R F E C T !
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Posted: 23 May 2011 at 9:25pm | IP Logged
Res!

Edit: OMFG! This was sooo deep! First offf, the VM...It's just outta this world, I'm literally speechless about it. Hands down Noha, that was a master piece! Now the OS,,, goddayummm! That was one crazy OS right there lol. But it was so intense and just...woahhh! :O WUVED it, amazingly written! Clap
Writeee moree! :)


Edited by Simmy003 - 24 May 2011 at 2:30pm
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Posted: 23 May 2011 at 10:00pm | IP Logged
definitely one of its kind OS..u gals r too good...

loved it to d core..and the vm is jus outstanding
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Posted: 23 May 2011 at 10:04pm | IP Logged
EDITED on Page 1!

Edited by MaitreeluvKajen - 24 May 2011 at 4:54am
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Posted: 23 May 2011 at 11:23pm | IP Logged
omg tht wz so different
lol definitely crazy n psychotic bt unique at the same time

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