"His Wicked Angel" | Grover&Winget/Armaan&Riddhima - Page 2

hey
amazing one...
just can't find any word 2 describe dis...it waz very much intriguing
tc
shaaz

-Edit-  Edited by Angel-Pebby - 12 years ago

wow!

amazing OS...very well written guys...keep it up

omg my jaanus u guyz r too much  i love what u two wrote, its extremely well written. its soo sooo sooo good. im soo proud of u my angels. Edited by noha450 - 12 years ago

Wow...Very well-written!!!

I'm baccck to edit the second time cos the first time I clicked something and my whole post went akjhdjshfjhg#! But anyway :D Since I love you both so much I shall write all over again even though I am sickiee << Do you feel sympathetic towards me? I hope so! :( :P

 

So let me begin, firstly, that VM is SO good! Noha did an absolutely brilliant job with it and I can really tell why you guys may have been inspired from it. It's so creative and the concept is so unique, I love it! It makes me wish I was so creative with these sort of dark concepts but anywho, its brilliant!

 

The character or should I say bhoot of Ridhima kinda scares me, haha! No, but on a serious note her character was beautiful in a weird way. :| My absolutely favourite part of the OS was the part where she kept asking Armaan to prove his love for her. It was intriguing how she asked him questions so innocently and then Armaan had no other option but to abide her. It was almost like he was blindly in love with this Ridhima and would do anything for her that was seriously amazing! I loved the way she kept saying "You did it Armaan!" it's like she was pleased with what he was doing. For Armaan it was like a compliment. He started to think he was doing the right thing for her which led to whatever he did in future for her. His character of a psychotic killer honestly was portrayed so well! Till the very end I had no clue what was going to happen with his character and the way he died in the end was EXTREMELY shocking but I loved it! I don't think I would've loved it as much if you guys hadn't killed him LOL :P It goes well with the concept perfectly so (I never thought I would say this) I'm glad you killed him! :D

 

When I was reading it, I was glued to it. I knew something was mysterious but I couldn't figure out what it is.. the way you guys both wrote the piece my eyes didn't waver for a second (though I was on msn at the same time and kept speaking when I was shocked but that doesn't count :P). This is by far the best piece you've ever written in terms concept AND the way you write. It was brilliant and I don't think I can put it into better words to explain to you guys how much I love this OS of yours. I'm deffo gonna come back to this and read it again!<3

 

Muaaah! I love watermelon and Rabieees Di so muchooo!<333  

Edited by TheMelody. - 12 years ago

A very well written story! The concept and everything was amazing. The vm is really really good :)
The story was so intense and I really enjoyed reading it! It really was a perfect OS and you guys are just WOW!
Hope to see more OS and FF's from you guys...because you guys are truly talented and amazing at writing stories!
Beautifully written :)
Edited by Samiyah258 - 12 years ago

OMG OMG OMG! THEE VM WASS AWESOOMEEE <3