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SS: Gopi's Ehsaas Last Part updated pg 56 (Page 33)

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Posted: 13 June 2011 at 11:44am | IP Logged
Its such well written story that I had to revisit Shilpa, loved the update esp the way Gopi reminisces the past, the very restless Rashi and the cautious Kokila. 

Just love the way you developed the whole entry scene very matured and real... Keep up the good work !!!

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Posted: 13 June 2011 at 10:17pm | IP Logged
wow...what a update...it was mega awesome...i was out of the loop for the past couple of updates and just got caught up again...all the updates were awesom shilpa...cant wait to see what happens next

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Posted: 14 June 2011 at 9:51am | IP Logged
Originally posted by queenyuks

Yay! You updated!

I love when Koki catches that chudail Raashi. Koki in MIL mode is awesome.

And I like how you're making Ahem realize the impact of his behaviour.

I loved this part Shilpaben. I can't wait to read more.

Yuks
 
 
Hey Yuks, Thanks so much. You always manage to keep my spirits up, even when I am at my worst. I love Koki as MIL, especially when she is grilling Rashi. As for Ahem, what can I say I love the guy, but he is ass on the show, so I try to make him opposite in the FF. I am glad you like him this way.
 
Originally posted by winter30

The story , just gets better and better , love it. Another fab update.Your Ahem is so mature senstive, unlike the TV Ahem who just throws tantrums lol
 
Thanks so much. TV Ahem is an immature kid, I like to show him as a sesitive guy.
 
 
Originally posted by swasthi

Gopi returning to MM and the memories flooding back.

Old habits die hard for Rashi.
 
Koki there at every turn to protect Gopi.
 
Ahem, Ahem, Ahem now realising what it means to share Gopi but has unfinished business with Kinjal, it seems.
 
 
Thanks Swasthi. Rashi will never change, she will always remain, selfish, greedy withch. I love Koki/Gopi relationship. As for Ahem and Kinjles unfinished business, yeah he is going to have to do something about that.
 
 
 
 
 
 
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Posted: 14 June 2011 at 9:56am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Nafisa_blossoms

It was a little boring, but I suppose the next update will be spicier. But I understand it needed to be done, would have been nice if you included a fight in there, for example some fight with Urmila and Kinjal, or Kokila and Rashi, was too tame, at the doorway, afterall Kokila doesn't know the whole conspiracy of knowing UrShi arranged for the abduction of Gopi and GoHam are now pretending they don't know, so she could have lit into Rashi, as she normally does when she suspects foul play. But thats just me wanting some excitement.

But otherwise you have written the discovery of the necklace very well (with the card), what I like is the yearning of Aham to breach the distance between Gopi and himself, wanting to be with her alone as he was used to. 
 
Hey Nafisa, I am sorry it was little boring for you. A fight between Koki and Rashi? As far as I know there has never been any real fight between Rashi and Koki. Its been mostly Koki yelling and glaring and Rashi scared little mouse, who will make excuses and hide behind Hetal and Jigar, and frankly I am tired of all that, it never changes, and I refuse to write a scene like that, its already been overdone on the show. I just want Koki to be aware of Rashi's acts and thoughts and act accordingly to protect Gopi.
 
Thanks for your help on the necklace incident, it was your post that lead me to write it the way I did. Thanks for the comments.Big smile
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Posted: 14 June 2011 at 10:03am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Traxy101

So lucky I found this update,  I adore your story, I really do. You capture everything perfectly
 
Thanks so much for liking the story, I will do my best to continue it the same way.
 
Originally posted by Jake-neil

This time i will write my own comment as no.2 decided to bash on.1. Btw i the FF is just awesome but you hurt me by making Koki torture my love
 
 
 
LOLFinally, I was wondering what you would say to this update. I don't mean to hurt you, but your Rashi just doesn't behave herself, will you do something with her please. I will warn you and say there will be more hurt coming your way. Thanks so much!
 
Originally posted by lovtv

loved it shilpa!  you're great at keeping story going...keeping fresh, interesting and exciting.

Thanks enjoyed every word! 

More?

Please?
 
Thanks so much Shelly. Let me just tell you I really, really miss you on the forum, I hope things changes soon on SNS, so you can come back. Thank you so much for your wonderful comments. Will try to bring you the next part tonight.Smile
 
 
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Posted: 14 June 2011 at 10:04am | IP Logged
Originally posted by simi91

dont yu bored us
i enjoy reading it


 

Thank you so much for the reassurance Simi. I am so glad you liked it.
 
Love the post.
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Posted: 14 June 2011 at 10:10am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ANJ4

my favorite part is the necklace... Love the way you  wroote that... How ahem feels... thanks
 
 
 
Thank you so much Anju, I am so glad you liked the update.
 
Originally posted by art80

Awesome update Shilpaben. I am glad you updated. Loved the way Rashi is being noticed by Koki and the way Ahem is feeling to love, protect, and care for Gopi. And how can I forget the jealous AhemWink. Totally in love with your story. Please update soon!!!!!
 
Thanks so much. This is how I want the SNS Koki to be, she knows how Rashi is, she should keep a closer eye on Rashi. I love to make Ahem jealous, he will loose his cool soon enough. Watch for the next update.
 
Originally posted by soni4eva

luvd da update it was totally awsome n fanx 4 da pm Smile

 
Thanks so much. And you are welcome for the PM.
 
Originally posted by evad

The penny dropped for GB, just loved it hope you'll make him grovel. Wonderful update
 
 
Thanks so much Eva, yep our golden boy is going down, he will have to loose that cool eventually, he needs to put all that intesity to positive use.
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Posted: 14 June 2011 at 10:16am | IP Logged
Originally posted by khansk

Shilpa!! I love your story!
Update soon okay i want to see what happens next!
Gopi was great but Aham was better!
Great update!
 
 
Thanks Sara, you are awesome, I love this Ahem myself, wish he was like this on the show. >sigh<
 
 
Originally posted by angelirebelli

Didn't want the update to end Shilpa... 

Loved it... it was a great play of emotions and reactions.

Love the protective Koki .

Keep 'em coming gurl !!!
 
Angeli, I love you, you know that, thanks for all your encouragements, I am so glad you liked the update.
 
 
Originally posted by Eesha2

Oh boy Shilpa what a treat! I can't believe I missed an update before this one. Fabulous chapters. I cannot wait to read more and see what that Rashi and Urmi have up their sleeves (because I'm sure our wonderful Aham won't let them succeed). Update soon.
 
Thanks Eesha. Urshi are never up to good, but I don't plan for them to win any of their games.
 
P.S. I am going to sound like a broken record, but I have to tell you. I miss you.

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