Originally posted by: queenyuksRaashi... grrr😡
But forget about her. Holy $#!% Ahemji smooched Gopi😲
Im beyond shocked right now
Not that Im not overjoyed or anything. Because I am. But just getting over my shock/surprise of the kiss.
That was hot *fans self*
Awesome part Shilpaben. You have magic hands. I need to find you another superwomen trophy. One doesn't seem to be enough it seems
Yuks
Originally posted by: khanskShilpa! Just woke up and i found this!
My day is going to go great!
That GoHam scene was hot! Rashi shall pay for this, the witch al ways causing problems!
I love your story so much!
Btw, all your updates are worth the wait!
Originally posted by: angelirebelliwow... what an update !!!
U missed the mark when you mentioned I would like the update, its far from that I simply loved it... it was magical, so easy to get transported to SNS land... U r a smooth operator Shilpa, love your play of emotions ..Loved Aham and the way he is working towards their relationship. Gopi is still vulnerable, which she has to be given her circumstance. Loved the way she uses the word "inadequate" to describe herself... that was genius!!!As for Rashi, she is just being herself...It was so real Shilpa, ...👏👏👏
Originally posted by: ANJ4You are right ... it was magical between gohem ... the kiss and everything else... such a nice and uplifting update... I am in Lala land with you ff and todays epi... Thank you so much.
Originally posted by: Jake-neilWell the Raja scene was good owing to my imagination. Like i said Rashi keeps the passion alive in Jake. Lol!
@yuks
here is a white handkerchief for you. Which says 'i love you jakeji' 🤣
Originally posted by: shaina.sharmawow wonderful marvelous gohem scene
as per rashi i want to kill her pls continue soon
Originally posted by: Nafisa_blossomswow a lot of feeling your writing, from the mandir to the breakfast table to upstairs, all those scenes Aham was soft and understanding to what Gopi is going through, even Kokila is at it, so understanding as what is required by Aham.
Rashi as usual is stirring the pot to cause friction between GoHam, very much like the way she does in the show.But your Aham who is so feeling and understanding will easily see through any negativity towards their relationship that Gopi will be displaying.Good part.
Originally posted by: shobi12500what an update very nice shilpa
Originally posted by: neetusidhuwowo shilpa fantastic update...loved it...
Originally posted by: winter30Wow,Another fab.Update . I just loved the bedroom scene. Feeling myself going hot under the collar. Can't wait to see more romantic scenes you have instore for us.
Originally posted by: Bloem123wow loved the Update !
Originally posted by: tvfreak86keep going!! its awesome
Originally posted by: Traxy101Wow, loved this chapter. It's so romantic how they're love is almost forbidden in a way and he has to make up excuses just to smooch his wife. Really can't wait for the next chapter.
Originally posted by: Eesha2Argh that Rashi. I could just smack her silly. 😡 Poor Gopi. Hopefully she talks to Aham quickly and clears up all the doubt. Wonderful update Shilpa. Can't wait to read more. Update soon.
Originally posted by: magi11superb update...
Originally posted by: swasthiWhat a fabulous kissing scene - with so much of depth and emotions.
Your Ahem is certainly hotting up to Gopi. Looking forward to the evening scene.In the meantime, Ahem is still to not only approach Kinjal on showing respect to Gopi but also for him to verbalise his apology to Gopi and bring them both on a level field.Looking forward to the next update.
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