Shilpaben, you are making me fall for this Ahem after every update of yours. I really loved the way you portrayed his character. I absolutely enjoyed reading this part. I am in Gohem dreamland after reading your update.
This content was originally posted by: shobi12500nice updates shilpa very good
This content was originally posted by: winter30Wow !!! Just love it . Your update was smokin hot.๐ณ
Loved the Gohem romantic scenes. Just loved it. Im in lalaland ๐
This content was originally posted by: Jake-neilMy imagination is running wild๐.. Definately reminds me of someone who i miss currently. Wish that hottie was here to know what i'm exactly imagining for us.. Thats was a nice treat. The forced leave is really a blessing for us. Now can we discuss what happens next? Or should i take the subject to wifey?๐.. This chapter is definately dedicated to my girl. Ms. Lodge, the ice queen might freak out(sorry Ronnie couldn help the comment..lol)
This content was originally posted by: angelirebelliBravo Shilpa, that was very visual indeed...๐ Fabulously written, very sophisticated... *superlikes*
As usual fantastic update, the feelings were just perfect, the emotions right. It is absolutely impossible to avoid getting lost in the flow..I am sure this sounds so very commonplace - Loved it, awesome, too good for words...๐๐๐@ Reggie - Assumption is the mother of all f*** ups !!!
This content was originally posted by: tvfreak86OMGGG its too good
This content was originally posted by: aamirkhanfanwow! awesome update...just hoping that nothing happens to gopi
This content was originally posted by: Traxy101Very, very nice chapter, can't wait for the next one. You have Gopi and Ahem express their love for each other absolutely beautiful
This content was originally posted by: swasthiOne heck of an update!!
As this FF is a product of an Indian serial it will be highly unlikely that we will see scenes like this in the serial.Thanks to you Shilpa and other writers on this forum who write FFs and OSs that grant many of us to indulge in this imagination with our favourite characters.
This content was originally posted by: ANJ4My imagnation is on overtime...Can't stop thinking about it...WOW...I think I will have to come back to this after i have cleared my head. thank you.
This content was originally posted by: Nafisa_blossomsawesome update. kidnapping up next and bye bye to UrShi and hello sweet jail.
This content was originally posted by: vaishali667superb update shilpa keep rocking i loved it awesome
This content was originally posted by: kamygod update shilpa... what is urmi and Rashi's fate? waiting for the next..
This content was originally posted by: soni4evasuperb update luvd it
i hope rashi n urmi get caught soon eagerly w8in 4 da nxt update x
This content was originally posted by: queenyuksloved Loved LOVED the update
My imagination ran further away with me than you probably intended๐ณ
Shilpaben, I love how you do scenes like these. You do them so artfully.
Someday I will be a great author like you
Too bad I couldn't read this sooner. I absolutely loved this.
Thanks to you and to king for this treat
Yuks
This content was originally posted by: art80Shilpaben, you are making me fall for this Ahem after every update of yours. I really loved the way you portrayed his character. I absolutely enjoyed reading this part. I am in Gohem dreamland after reading your update.
This content was originally posted by: ANJ4WOW ... I have just read this again ...OMG what a love scene... I think I am going to find my ahem (hubby) and you can use you imagination too... Good nite ...signing off.
This content was originally posted by: thejazzgal.slovey update shilpa ben!!
loved it!!
aww soo sad gopi hav to leave the house... :(
but loved the whole update!! finally GoHem r 1 now..
plzz do ocnt soon
muuah!
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