Loved all the scenes Shilpa..you are an awesome writer..
Originally posted by: sunshine33
oh wow, very very nice chapter. Well written and nice pace. Already wanting the next chapter ..thank you for the update.
Originally posted by: Bloem123
Thanks for the great Update~!😃
Originally posted by: winter30
Just have to say what another fantastic update 😃 Love your vm its so sweet, love the song too.
Aww, love how Ahem is so caring towards Gopi. Poor Gopi, I hope Ahem can bring back light into her life.Can't wait till the next update.
Originally posted by: queenyuks
Excellent Shilpaben, just excellent
You are not only a great author, but also a champion VM maker. How do you do it?
You should send that superwoman trophy to be be shined.
That Raashi😡 I hope she's dragged down the stairs by her hair and kicked out of Modi Bhavan. Seriously
I'm surprised Gopi didn't react in any way to Ahem's comment about carrying her to a room and ravishing her😳😆
The author of this post would've jump into his arms that instant😉
Waiting for more Shilpaben
Yuks😆Thanks Yuks. I bet you would jump in Ahem's arms if he offered to ravish you😉But don't worry Gopi will get her chance, and Ahem won't leave her a choice next time.I will send my superwoman trophy to you so you can shine it yourself😃
Wow!! A sterling update.
We will have to wait many years for the real Ahem to get to this state - loving, caring, adorable, supportive and 150% all for Gopi.What a fab VM too - good choices of some key moments - showing Ahem feeling 'I am there for you no matter what'.Looking forward to the demise of Urmilla and Rashi next.
Originally posted by: soni4eva
dat was a reliii reliii nyc update cont soon
Originally posted by: Nafisa_blossoms
hmm very nice update Shilpa, heart to heart between Aham and Gopi, what has he got to do to prove his love, to be attentive to her for a start, not be too picky when she has made an effort to please him he must in turn show his appreciation for that effort, also some flowers and other gifts would be nice too.
Apart from the mushy stuff of the GoHam romancing each other. What I'm looking forward to is the reaction of the monsters to seeing her alive and questioning her and to see how smart will Gopi be in faking innocence. Also Gopi proving she isn't as naive any more when they try a kalakari on her.
Originally posted by: Traxy101
Have I told you how much I love your story? Seriously, it's everything I would love to see on SNS. Keep up the amazing work and I'm waiting for the next update
Originally posted by: Jake-neil
Excellent Shilpaben, just excellent
You are not only a great author, but also a champion VM maker. How do you do it?
You should send that superwoman trophy to be be shined.
That Gopi😡 I hope she's dragged down the stairs by her hair and kicked out of Modi Bhavan. Seriously
I'm surprised rashi didn't react in any way to jigar's comment about carrying her to a room and ravishing her😳😆
The author of this post would've lifted her in his arms that instant😉 and had some fun
Waiting for more Shilpaben
JAKE
Hey Shilpa excellent update. Their conversation was very cute. Now if only we can see this VM on tv. I loved loved loved your vm,
PS I know I miss you guys too. I've been so busy I haven't had too much time to get on here.
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