SS: Gopi's Ehsaas Last Part updated pg 56 - Page 17

nilli_r

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Posted: 12 years ago

wow..wht an amazing update!!

loved it!!!!

continue soon plzzz :)

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choti_rani

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Posted: 12 years ago

That was a wonderful update Shilpa. How is Aham going to get Gopi to trust him again. Can't wait to read on. Update soon dear.

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art80

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Posted: 12 years ago

Again, a very nice update. Loved it. Please continue soon...

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ANJ4

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Posted: 12 years ago

That was fantastic, they should use your writing on the show ., that is how good it was. Love very word you wrote... I hope jigarji does not forgive rashi...they were going to kill gopi. If rattie and urmil has murder on their mind ... they will be ready to kill as any time... If I could describe this last chapter in one word it would be WOW

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vaishali

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Posted: 12 years ago

very nice update How is Aham going to get Gopi to trust him again really
fantastic,fabulous part loved it

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ll-Shilpa-ll

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: soni4eva
[da update was superb
plzz cont soon

Thank you Soni!

Originally posted by: Jake-neil
My poor Rashi, again a vamp.

Thanks Jake bhai, that's exactly how I wanted to portray her.😃

Originally posted by: aamirkhanfan
great part...never realised that urmila is so much evil

Thanks! Urmila of SNS is cruel, so I believe she has a possibility of being evil

Originally posted by: sunshine33
Very well written chapter. I am really liking the pace of your FF. I hope the next update is really soon...just now getting caught up on my reads.

Thank you sunshine, I am glad you liked the pace of the story, I don't want to bore people.

Originally posted by: angelirebelli
On the dot , just as promised...

Aham, the lover boy, is fab for a change.. Gopi well is just Gopi, always putting others first...

Loved the update Shilpa !!!

Thanks Angeli, so you like Ahem as lover boy, then I hope you like the next part.

Thank you everyone!

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ll-Shilpa-ll

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: simi91
wow such sweet &adorable
with big heart still thinking

about others

gohem scene so cute

my love how the story shaping

up

Thanks Simi, running out of words to compliment your posts. Its fantastic.

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ll-Shilpa-ll

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: winter30
I just want to say your a fantastic writer. I love the way you portray Ahem and Gopi's chemistry. It is really well written. Looking forward to the next update 😃

Thank you so much. Yeah I love them on and off screen.

Originally posted by: swasthi
The attraction between Ahem and Gopi is nicely worded, and from Ahem's viewpoint.

Waiting eagerly for the next update.

Thanks, I am glad you liked the part.

Originally posted by: Nafisa_blossoms
Wonderful Shilpa.

Thanks Nafisa!

Thank you so much everyone!

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ll-Shilpa-ll

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: queenyuks
Nothing to say anout Urmi and her chudail daughter. Both should have a tragic accident

Then we'll see who has the last 'Haye Haye'😆

As for Ahem, as much as I love how forward he's being, he's spooking poor Gopi
He should work his kalakaari on her heart first😉

Lovely part shilpaben. Can't wait to read more

Yuks

Haye, Haye Yuks, what would my bhai say, I would get in trouble with him for sure if I killed of his two favorite people, besides that's an easy way out, they need to go to jail and suffer.

Ahem and his Kalakari, you know she won't be able to resist him for long.😆

Thank you so much my sweet sister!

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ll-Shilpa-ll

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Traxy101
What to say? I really like your story especially the rate it is going at as you can clearly see their relationship as it develops and you portray the characters and their emotions beautifully

Thank you so much, that is the best compliment, I tried may best to get their emotions across, which we don't see much of on SNS.

Originally posted by: Jake-neil
Nothing to say anout Urmi and her chudail daughter. Both should have a tragic accident

Then we'll see who has the last 'Haye Haye'😆

As for Ahem, as much as I love how forward he's being, he's spooking poor Gopi
He should work his kalakaari on her heart first😉

Lovely part shilpaben. Can't wait to read more

Yuks'

No comment!😆

Originally posted by: ayesha_78

aren't u suppose to take out yuks name out of the above post

Capt Barbossa

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great one shilpa continue on

Thanks Ayesha

Thanks everyone!

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