SS: Gopi's Ehsaas Last Part updated pg 56 - Page 16

Posted: 12 years ago
Very well written chapter. I am really liking the pace of your FF. I hope the next update is really soon...just now getting caught up on my reads.
Posted: 12 years ago
On the dot , just as promised...

Aham, the lover boy, is fab for a change.. Gopi well is just Gopi, always putting others first...

Loved the update Shilpa !!!

Posted: 12 years ago
I just want to say your a fantastic writer. I love the way you portray Ahem and Gopi's chemistry. It is really well written. Looking forward to the next update πŸ˜ƒ
Posted: 12 years ago
The attraction between Ahem and Gopi is nicely worded, and from Ahem's viewpoint.
 
Waiting eagerly for the next update.
Posted: 12 years ago
wow such sweet &adorable
with big heart still thinking
about others
gohem scene so cute
my love how the story shaping
up




Posted: 12 years ago
Nothing to say anout Urmi and her chudail daughter. Both should have a tragic accident

Then we'll see who has the last 'Haye Haye'πŸ˜†

As for Ahem, as much as I love how forward he's being, he's spooking poor Gopi
He should work his kalakaari on her heart firstπŸ˜‰

Lovely part shilpaben. Can't wait to read more

Yuks
Edited by queenyuks - 12 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago
What to say? I really like your story especially the rate it is going at as you can clearly see their relationship as it develops and you portray the characters and their emotions beautifully 
Posted: 12 years ago
Nothing to say anout Urmi and her chudail daughter. Both should have a tragic accident

Then we'll see who has the last 'Haye Haye'πŸ˜†

As for Ahem, as much as I love how forward he's being, he's spooking poor Gopi
He should work his kalakaari on her heart firstπŸ˜‰

Lovely part shilpaben. Can't wait to read more

Yuks'
Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by Jake-neil


Nothing to say anout Urmi and her chudail daughter. Both should have a tragic accident

Then we'll see who has the last 'Haye Haye'πŸ˜†

As for Ahem, as much as I love how forward he's being, he's spooking poor Gopi
He should work his kalakaari on her heart firstπŸ˜‰

Lovely part shilpaben. Can't wait to read more

Yuks'

aren't u suppose to take out yuks name out of the above post 

Capt Barbossa


🀣

great one shilpa continue on
Posted: 12 years ago
Dear Shilpa ...

Am not too regular on the forum... I just come to read the updates and decide if the epi is worth watching ... 

Recently I started reading your FF ... love the way you write ! πŸ‘

Your GoHem is so sensible and adorable ... keep up the good work πŸ‘πŸΌ ...

After all FFs are the only consolation for us GoHem fans, who are being tortured by the stupid kalakaris every single day ! 

PS: Can you plz put the links to all the updates on the first page so it's easier for latecomers like me to catch up with the story ? πŸ˜³

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