SS: Gopi's Ehsaas Last Part updated pg 56 - Page 16

Very well written chapter. I am really liking the pace of your FF. I hope the next update is really soon...just now getting caught up on my reads.

On the dot , just as promised...

I just want to say your a fantastic writer. I love the way you portray Ahem and Gopi's chemistry. It is really well written. Looking forward to the next update 😃

The attraction between Ahem and Gopi is nicely worded, and from Ahem's viewpoint.

wow such sweet &adorable

Nothing to say anout Urmi and her chudail daughter. Both should have a tragic accident

Then we'll see who has the last 'Haye Haye'😆

As for Ahem, as much as I love how forward he's being, he's spooking poor Gopi
He should work his kalakaari on her heart first😉

Lovely part shilpaben. Can't wait to read more

Yuks
Edited by queenyuks - 12 years ago

What to say? I really like your story especially the rate it is going at as you can clearly see their relationship as it develops and you portray the characters and their emotions beautifully 

Nothing to say anout Urmi and her chudail daughter. Both should have a tragic accident

Then we'll see who has the last 'Haye Haye'😆

As for Ahem, as much as I love how forward he's being, he's spooking poor Gopi
He should work his kalakaari on her heart first😉

Lovely part shilpaben. Can't wait to read more

Yuks'

Originally posted by: Jake-neil

Nothing to say anout Urmi and her chudail daughter. Both should have a tragic accident

Then we'll see who has the last 'Haye Haye'😆

As for Ahem, as much as I love how forward he's being, he's spooking poor Gopi
He should work his kalakaari on her heart first😉

Lovely part shilpaben. Can't wait to read more

Yuks'

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