Originally posted by: queenyuksI bet this is Urmi-Raashi Kalakaari. I know how the mother-dauther's mind works
Shilpaben! What a lovely part.
Poor Ahemji doesnt know what to do with himself.
He's like a child who demands attention. If he doesn't get it, then he immediately starts to behave.
SNS Gopi needs to stop giving him attention
I cant wait to read more! Find out about Gopi
Yuks
Originally posted by: soni4evalyk always awsome update
i wonda wer gopi desapeared 2 plzz update soon
Originally posted by: angelirebelliJust love it...I am so liking this suffering Aham... 😊
Pl don't let Gopi fall prey to more Kalakaariz... she deserves peace !!!
Originally posted by: ANJ4That was fantastic . OMG ... I loved update #3 ... I love the way you left us hanging., that was great...IWANT MORE.
Originally posted by: neetusidhuwowo...that was great...it was really sad to see gopi going about her routine normally especially after her decision to leave...excellent cant wait to see why she doesnt go to nani's house...
Originally posted by: Eesha2Oh I could kill that Urmi and Rashi. 😡 What have they done with Gopi! And Ahem, big sigh. I don't even know what to do with him anymore. Excellent update Shilpa. Loved it. Eagerly waiting to read the next part.
PS oh please please make Aham suffer. He needs to feel exactly what Gopi has been feeling.
Originally posted by: atopWow, I am loving the pace and the way the story is flowing..You surely know how to keep your readers hooked and wanting for more..
Yeh dil maange more aha...I just loved the way Gopi ignored Ahem and though it must have been very difficult for her but it was much required and aah! even Ahem's inner voice is tired of him and did I see him wanting to hear his inner voice?Gopi disappeared already? That must be Urmi and Rashi's plan..argh! These two will never behave.I hope Gopi is fine and am just eager to read more.Luv atop
Originally posted by: Nafisa_blossomsI bet Gopi has run off with the Doodh waalah (joking) most likely Urmila snatched her. I liked your joke in the fan fic..."Aham went into the room to work on the new project, he had only one year to work on it".
Please update soon.
Originally posted by: shobi12500very nice shilpa keep it up
Originally posted by: Jake-neilBeautiful! Inner voice rocks. I was thinking RaJA FF should also have inner voice of Jake..lol!
PS: someone is burning
Originally posted by: aamirkhanfangreat part...where is gopi?
Originally posted by: jdotswow nice story...wonder what ahem will do now...
Originally posted by: winter30You've got me hooked on this ff, can't wait for the next part
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