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MG FF: Life Has Its Own Secrets - Discontinued (Page 3)

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Part 2

 

Geet's marriage was fixed with Dhruv. Even Geet had no objection.  The family had decided and fixed the engagement in five days time with just close families invited. It was Monday and Geet went back to her work. She worked at the Khurana hotels. During its staring period Khurana hotel was just a mere restuarnt. Tej Khurana worked hard all through his life and made turn this restaurant in a five star hotel and today they own a hotel in every corner, infect took over some. And now his son's Dev and Maan are taking over. Geet rushed in just to see her friend Pari waiting for her at the reception with her hands crossed. Geet met pari at her college. At the first meet they had liked each other and from that day they became friends. Pari has also visited Geet's home and consider Geet's family as her own as she was an orphan. Geet smiled and went and hugged her. "Good morning Pari." "Good morning ko maro goli, aur tu late kyon hai?" pari asked in annoyance. "Late?" Geet looked at her watch "par mein toh time se phele hoon." "Lekin mein tum se phele hoon, so you are late. Ok forget this, yeh baato, how was the boy?" Pari asked suddenly turning excited. Geet told her every tiny detail. "Tum bhahut buri ho ho tumhe pata hai, mujhe invite bhi nai kiya."Pari complained. "Pata nai Dhruv ne tum kya dekha? I mean tumhe pasand kaise kiya?" she added thinking. "Kyon ki do minute ke liye mila tha na is liye." "Poor guy." Pari said giving a pity look on her face. Geet hit her on the shoulder. At that time her phone rings. "Hello, ji sir? Yeah sir, ok." Pari turned to Geet. "Diamond ki exhibition ki arrangement ho gai nah?" she asked walking ahead while Geet moved with her and replied. "Yeah." "Good, boss ne detail mangi hai, tumhe andar bulaya hai." k woh sab is file mein hai, tum check kar lo." Geet  handed the file she was holding to Pari.

 

Brij came out of his room, with a file in his hand. "Maa, aap ne meri blue file dekhi hai kya?" he asked looking around. "Bhai, aap ke haat mein bhi blue file hai. Red nai." Meera said coming out of her room. "I know, par yeh mera nai hai." Rano came and took the file and had a look. "Yeh toh Geet ki File hai. Lagta hai same colour ke waje se mix ho gaya hoga aur woh teri file lete gai." "Kya?" Brij almost shouted. He grabbed the file and ran out of the house while Meera and Rano stood watching confused.  "Ok maa, mein bhi chalti hoon, computer classes ke liye late ho jayega." Meera said hugging her mom and left. Brij ran and stopped a taxi and went to khurana hotels. "Yeh Geet ko bhi meri file le jani thi? Agar us ne dekh liya toh? Nai nai, yesa nai ho sakhta." He mumbled to himself worried. "Driver please drive fast."

 

"Ab itna acha ladhka mila hai, haat se jane may dena."Pari said walking towards the exhibition room. "You know you are very lucky. Mujhe dekh, abhi tak ek ladka ne 'hi' tak nai bola. So kab mila rahi hi apne is 'Dhruv' se?" pari added opening the file. Geet hits her playfully and walks ahead. Pari went through the file and went after Geet. "Geet yeh koun si file layi ho tum?" she asked turning the file towards her. "Kyun, kya huwa?" Geet asked  confused. "Is mein toh London ke immigration paper hai." "London ke immigration papers? Waha koun ja raha hai?" Geet asked surprised. "Uhh tumhi dekh lo." Pari replied handing the file to Geet.

 

Brij reach the office and asked for Geet. One of the staff told him the way and he went running in the direction. Geet open the file and was shocked. Brij reached and called out to her. "Geet?" he went to her "by mistake tum meri file le ai ho." "App London ja rahe hai bhaiya?" geet asked in an appalled voice. Pari excused herself and left. "Answer me? Aap ja rahe ho, woh bhi humesha ke liye?" Geet asked again." "haan." brij replied bluntly. "Lekin aap yese kaise? Aap kyon ja rahe hai bhaiya?" "Apna carer banane." "Carer banane? Hum sab ko chod kar?" geet said in a teary voice "apna carer bhi toh nai chod sakta." "Lekin phir Mummy papa, aap ke bina...?" Brij raised his hands and cut her in between. "Please Geet, mom dad ko apni zindigi mein jo karna thaw oh kar chuke. Lekin meri life toh ab shuru hui hai. Aur mujhe apni life banai hai, phir chane jaise bhi." He replied coldly looking away.  "Lekin aap yaha bhi toh..." "Kya hai yaha? Uhh? Mujhe yaha rehe ke ek middle class life nai jina papa ki tarah, ke har bar kuch lene se phele yeh sochna padhe ke lun ki nai, budget mein hai ya nai. Bas Geet, nai jina mujhe is tarah. Mein nai chata ke jab mein jao toh log kahe key eh middle class jar aha hai. Tang agaya hoon mein in sab se. Mujhe upay jana hai, samjhi tum?" "Lekin papa mummy ke umeedhe hai aap se?" Geet managed to say as tears fell down. "tih yeh unki galti hai, mein nai kaha tha mujh se umeedhe rakh ne ko." "Bhaiya please? Aap ek bar khud ko unki jagah rakh kar sochiye." "Mein ab sirf aur sirf apne bare mein sochunga." "Lekin..." "Bas geet, Bahut hogaya. Behtar hoga ki tum meri life mein interfere mat karo." Saying this Brij grabbed his file and thump her file in her hand and march out while geet stood there helpless not knowing what to do. Brij went and met his agent. He handed him the file and bribed him to make his paper process. But to his hard luck, they demanded more money forthe fees and other requirements as those were to be done legally. Brij assured them that he will somehow manage to get the money and they proceed with the papers. He came out running his hands in his hair worried. "ab mein aur paise kaha se laun?"

 

Geet ran out to the backyard of the hotel and cried. All she could think was her parent. Who will support them? Who will look after them? She was getting married and Brij is leaving. Meera was still in computer school. She had no idea what to do. Somehow she ended her day and went home. Brij was already there with the family. He had bought gifts for everyone and was giving it out. Geet smiled through her tears seeing all so happy. She only wished her family was like this forever. Brij came to her with a parcel, but Geet dragged him in his room. She tried to make him change his mind about his leaving but Brij didn't budge from his decision and left. Geet half hearted came out and looked around. All were busy in the preparation of her engagement. It was late and meera still hasn't returned yet. Rano got worried, but Geet consoled her and decided to go and get her as Brij was out. Geet went to her college and asked the receptionist for Meera. The receptionist checked the coputer and replied there was no such student as Meera Handa there, which shocked geet. "How could you say that? She school's here, please check again." Geet requested. "I am sorry, but there is no such student as Meera here." "How can that be possible, please cheack properly." Geet said getting restless. At that time she saw one of the girls coming out. "Yeh toh Rasika hai, Meera ki friend." Geet went and stopped her. "Rasika? Meera kahan hai?" Geet demanded her. Rasika was shocked to see Geet there and didn't know what to reply.

 

It was a large room with camera's placed in the centre and lights on the scenes. One man was sitting behind the camera and his assistants behind him and one of the men was holding the blower towards a girl who was giving different poses. She was wearing a silver top and a black mini skirt revealing most of her. Geet entered the room and looked around and her eyes stopped at the girl. Disgust took over her face and she shouted "Meera?" Meera turned around and stood startled on her spot.

 

Geet dragged Meera home after she changed and pushed her in her room.

 "Yeh kya gatya harkath hai Meera?"geet said in anger "Geet di! Kya galat kiya meine uhh? Kya galat? Mein khobsurat hoon, talented hoon. Arre jab mujhse bakwas ladkiyan modelling kar sakti hai toh mein kyon nai?" "Aur mummy papa? Unke bare mein nai soche gi tu?" "Unko soch ke hi toh yeh sab kar rahi hoon. Socho woh kitne khush honge jab mein model ban jaungi. Sab taraf meri photo hogi, sirf meri hi baat hogi. Imagine 'Meera handa' one of the top models, wow." Meera said dreamingly. "Meera hosh mein ao. Yaha lakho ladkiyan ati hai model bane, lekin kuch hi successful hote hai. Meera yeh achi line nai hai." Geet Held her hand trying to make her understand but Meera jerked away "Di, kam se kam mujh mein sapne dekhne ki himat toh hai. Arre aap ne toh woh bhi nai kya. Aur jitna aap char din mein kamati hai nah, utna mein ek din mein kama ke dikhaungi. Dekh lena." "Aur jis din mummy papa ko pata chala ki tu computer class ke beje yeh sab kar rahi toh to unpe kya beetegi?" "Unhe batana zaruri nai hai.Woh meri sapon ko nai samjhe ge, aur mein un se jhagda nai karna chati. Aur waise bhi, i have decided. Mein model hi banugi. Rasta bahut lamba hai di, aur mein apni manzil tak pahuchne ke liye kuch bhi kar sakti hoon, kuch bhi." Meera went and held Geet by her shoulders. "Is liye please, mere raste ka kata mat bano, please?" She jerked Geet back and left the room while geet slummed on the floor breaking down not

knowing what to do with her siblings.  

 

The Handa house was decorated and lit up. Finally the day arrived. Geet was getting engaged today. Guest had arrived and dhruv was sited on his chair which was located centrally. Few women were playing the dhol and singing while others chatted. Rano bought Geet out and made her sit on the chair next to Dhruv. Dhruv smiled and nodded at her, indicating she was looking stunning. Geet gave a weak smile and turned away. Her eyes spotted Brij who was standing with Dhruv's friends and Meera who was with the ladies singing. They looked at Geet and turned away. Their words kept on replying in her mind. Brij will leave and Meera will continue her modelling. They want to live their life. Then what about the parents? Geet looked at her parents who were standing with dhruv's parents. Tears filled her eyes. She couldn't leave them. No one will be there for them if she marries and move away. Who will take care of them?

 

Geet went in her house. Everything was shattered. Things were lying around the house. She called out for her parents. "Mamma? Papa?" but no reply came. She kept calling out and searched the entire house. Finally she spotted her mom who was sitting in the corner of her room. Geet went and held her. Rano was sitting lifeless, looking pale and weak. Her hair all messed up, cloths not properly done. "Ma, kiya huwa aap ko?" Geet shook her. Rano looked up at Geet. "Geet tu aa gai? Tujhe pata hai, Brij aur Meera humhe chor kar chale gaye. Hum kab se intezar kar rahe hai. Woh ate hi nai. Tere papa ne toh khana bhi bandh kar diya hai. Unki dawa bhi khatam ho gai hai." "Papa kaha hai?" Geet asked in a ripped voice. Rano nodded to the corner. Geet show her father sitting on the floor muttering something. He looked sick and weak. Her heart split in million pieces seeing her parent's state. She went and held his hand and tried to hear what he was saying. "Geet ke jane ke baad sab khatam ho gaya. Humare bache hume chor ke chale gaye." He kept repeating this. Geet broke in tears as her dad didn't hear her, not responding and just kept repeating the same lines.

 

"Geet?" Pari came and placed her hands on her shoulder. Geet came out of the blue and looked around anxious and looked at Pari. Pari hugged her and gave her a gift. "Congratulations meri jaaan. Sagai Mubarak ho." Geet sighed. She was just dreaming. But would it turn to reality? Geet smiled and thanked Pari and introduced her to Dhruv. They got busy chatting and Geet again looked at her parents. Her mom was setting jewellery for her with Dhruv's mom and their dads were talking to each other. Geet knew her brother and sister won't back out of their decision. She has to do something, for her parents. Dhruvs mom came with the shagun thal. She lifted a red veil and said "beta, yeh chunri is ghar ki maan aur maryada hai. Is ghar ki izzat hai aur aaj yeh tum par sajegi."  But Geet's mind was occupied with her thoughts to listen to what was happening around her. While Dhruv's mom continued and placed the veil on Geet's head. "Ab is pariwar ka  sammaan rakhna tumhara farz hai." Geet held her hand and stopped her.

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nice parts...
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brilliant start...luvd both d parts...cont soon n thnx fo d pm

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i loved both the parts...they are amazing n wonderfully written...continue soon...i cant wait for maan to be introduced...n plz plz me whenever you update...

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Originally posted by zahra15

i loved both the parts...they are amazing n wonderfully written...continue soon...i cant wait for maan to be introduced...n plz plz me whenever you update...
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nice parts...
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