Adi u updated!!! Read it just now.
I not only know ur Shaan but know ur Khanak as well. I knew she will have her eyes closed to take the moment in, to absorb it, to be engulfed in it! She is very intense & deep & nothing else could have been expected from her. Other girls look at their husbands or family or friends & smiles but not Khanak. I saw her only in this way in front of my eyes.
And the most touching part she went & hugged her parents immediately. She knows what it means to them, what dreams they have woven for her happiness & finally when that dream turned to reality no one will be more happy than they r. And also it showed how happy Khanak herself was, she dreaded the marriage or rather living with this 'guy' but also in heart of her heart she knew she can't accept anyone else but him. He captured her or rather conquered her entire being, she was captivated, enchanted & fascinated by him as well & no matter what she says she knows she would cherish this marriage with him till the very end. She doesn't belong anywhere else but with him. She has been unfortunate once but now she was given a 2nd chance & she is going to treasure it for good. And all this showed in that gesture of hugging her parents, reliving the joy & happiness & assuring them & getting assured in return that all will be well.
Lovely Adi!! π
The rest fun & games was nice to read, lightened the mood. DJ teri toh nikal padi. And baki ladkiyon tum sab bhi kya dhamaal kiya!! ππ And what a splendid gift from dadi! Mujhe dikhana zaroor!!
And Neha Akhil tere haath se gaya! π Souma is paired with him. Jaldi jaldi Adi ko bol tere liye kisi aur ke dhoonde. Ek gaya toh kya huya bahoot sara hai! π
And that one challenging look of Shaan said it all, Khanak was quiet & turned away! It was almost like 'wanna argue honey? Lets take it behind closed doors'! π
Shaan would be concerned about her was known. And I am sure he will admonish her later about that fasting. But he must be proud in a way that she did it for him or rather for their marriage showing already how dedicated she is to this. I want him to ask her again 'why, why did u fast Khanak?' & wait for her response. π He did feed her the 1st bite after the wedding. π
And he would be following her every movement & expressions, that too I know. He will try to gauge her reaction to this entire event, how & what is she feeling at the moment, trace of any happiness or exuberance, any little look that will tell him about her innermost turmoil, any sign of grief for the upcoming 'bidaai'...he will follow everything minutely. No matter whether he loves her or not his concern for her takes the top most priority. He is so solicitous as far as she is concerned & it will always remain so. I want to know how helpless he feels when he will see Khanak torn in the grief of 'bidaai'! Will he promise her to bring her back for 'pagphera' then? Will he then give in for a later flight to Bombay seeing how distressed she is?
And Prad goes up & asks her about her status?? π Man u r just as inquisitive as we girls!! π And I was expecting to see what Shaan does & how coolly he plays it out & what do ya know, he did act out chilled which got Khanak surprised as well! π Girl if u have layers then so does ur husband, it will take years to peel off & get a peak at the person lying there. Too many shades u both have in ur characters & simply understanding & knowing each other will be a journey of wonderful revelations.
I loved how the realisation is slowly sinking in her, Khanak Gujral, she is married, her husband next to her, her new home...all girls go through this phase. The 1st few months seems like a trance & then slowly it kind of settles down that this is the life that they will have to lead for the rest of their lives, with this new identity, with this man, with a new family in a new home! Lovely job again Adi.
I simply love Ritu, this girl can't get any better. I will say Kritik is a lucky guy. Initially I thought she is just one of those happy go lucky girl who is fun loving & chilled out but later found out she has a lot of substance. Her character grew in the story the most.
Yes Mr. Gujral u did steal this girl & made her ur own & she knows it too! π She tried to resist but couldn't because ur charm, ur personality, ur pursuance, ur enigma, ur magic, ur appeal didn't stand a chance for any sort of unwillingness on her part. π
Fantastic like always Adi! Keep it up! ππΌ
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