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sush1 Senior Member

Joined: 27 December 2010
Posts: 326

Posted: 05 June 2011 at 11:42am | IP Logged
i have read all ur OS especially the mehndi special.

ur DP suits ur writing it is audacious and
bodacious Wink

keep the updates comming and pm me

swan20 IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 24 February 2008
Posts: 19292

Posted: 05 June 2011 at 12:29pm | IP Logged
Nadia...i love the way you describe a particular moment...i can actually visualize it...Clap...looking fwd to know what happens next...Embarrassed
jnawaz IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 14 September 2006
Posts: 16053

Posted: 05 June 2011 at 1:13pm | IP Logged
haye blushing Embarrassed..did you really just use my name and say i was a "gifted writer" ROFL...really!? i think that 90% of what i write is utter crap...tauba...chalo...lets get to commenting...i've had this ff book marked for ages,...time to read...
Chapter 1
i died started with "the present"...LOL im only laughing cuz thats like everyone new format...meshing the past and present...dont get me wrong..i love makes for awesome story just saying...its interesting how we all use it Tongue...yeh Geet bhi naa...why is she trying to pawn him off to some Jane Doe? tauba...aagar usse nahin chahiyeh...ill take him...and omg...when she said he was eyes nearly popped out of my head!
Chapter 2
oh teri...your past is only one week thats a nice change...usually its like months if not years...LOL...i think its an IF writer thing...we like to time travel! ROFL...i HATE darjee and all men that think like that...the place for women in the kitchen and all that...pfft!! AngryAngryAngry...had anyone said that to be in the kitchen alright...adding poison to their food!! Tongue...loved how you laid out the back story of Geet and Rajji coming to Khurana mansion...and omg...Maan's coming...eee!!
Chapter 3
ROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFL...lmfao!!! tell me you DID NOT use Ian ans VIcky!? not that im complaing about that visual...but lmfao...not what i was expecting at all...i had to literally stop and make sure i was on the right forum and not TVD forum!! ROFLROFLROFLROFLROFL...and dont tell me...Nina as Rajji...are i ask...are you a Delena fan?! more thing on the pictures...pls explain why Dadai (uin her 60's) looks younger than Kaka in his 50's? LOL...the 10yr thing...creepy!! only cuz...we just got a...errm..."rishta" for me...dude is 10yrs older...i thank was not happy!! ROFLROFL...simply adored the way you did the siblings describing Maan with like a screen shot of Maan...awesome!! and haye haye...Geet ke dil mein Kuch Kuch Hua and the man isnt even in the house yet!!
Chapter 4
truly loved the relationship that Kaka has with the family...good to see them treat him like a family and not like a naukar...ClapClapClap...loved their run in!! he eh...too cute!!! kaise dono are besharam...thinking about kissing and all that...the barely know each others names...kuch toh sharam karo!! Wink
need i say...ADD ME TO YOUR PM LIST! Tongue

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priza Senior Member

Joined: 02 August 2010
Posts: 410

Posted: 05 June 2011 at 1:20pm | IP Logged
nice FF...quite interesting...can you please PM me?? do you plan to update one today?
tazeen_29 Goldie

Joined: 01 December 2010
Posts: 2426

Posted: 05 June 2011 at 1:59pm | IP Logged
  wowww!!!!!!!! wonderful  dear was fantastic ..awesome  update ...plz cont soon...
maankigeet4ever IF-Rockerz

Joined: 05 November 2010
Posts: 6440

Posted: 05 June 2011 at 4:14pm | IP Logged
aweesome first meeting...
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Joined: 04 January 2006
Posts: 8853

Posted: 05 June 2011 at 7:06pm | IP Logged
Nadia!!! only just managed to start reading the ff my god!!!! u have me at the edge of my seat constantly smiling at my computer screen LOL and u deffo lived up to the expectation of their first meeting - dupatta being an important part of their love story here as well lol - btw didn't u mean his honey brown eyes and not hazel eyes boring into hers? rajji has the hazel eyes right?

Amazing ff - loved every part - cant believe ur already on pg 80 something and u've only done 4 parts - many would have had so many parts to have finally got to that number lol but please please please update on a daily basis! altho i know the answer and the chances of that happening is very very slim - never hurts to try tho right?! lol - ok maybe not daily but atleast a few days in the week?

Btw thank u 4 the pms! keep sending lol but honestly fab job enjoyed reading them - was glad i had 4 parts to read one after another - would've been torture having to wait lol altho happening now i guess - if u havent gathered already looking 4ward to ur next part! :D

PS - sorry for the long comment!
Nanthini9 Goldie

Joined: 06 February 2008
Posts: 1505

Posted: 05 June 2011 at 7:44pm | IP Logged
Please add me to ur PM list :)

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