Originally posted by: -afsha-Loved the update
Maaneet 1st meet ke baad he ghayal higayeGeet suld sense him wah jus after few hours hahahaAwesum connection😉Loved Vicky's nautanki he is fab n his teasing is awesumMaan is carefree with familyUpdate soonLonger parts warna no long comments heheheheSee evn i can blackmail hahahahaha
Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1awesome part.
loved it.
continue soon.
Originally posted by: tere_liye_10Your writing is SOO Not Amateurish😆😉
Luvd the update😳Hmm...Cionfused On Wat 2 Sayy😕Luvd vicky's Subtle looks at Maaneet And geet Blushing😳
Originally posted by: sush1good update
can we have twist where in geet instead of falling outright into maans arms gets closer to someone else resulting in maan getting confused or fuming
btw if u call ur writing amateurish then after reading my pathetic writing what would u say?😊
Originally posted by: kash_arshDamn nadia! stop calling ur writing amateurish... 😡
gal ur writing is like which make us blush badly... which make our head run like a fast horse... heart which skips beating and cheeks that get warm n red and we get aroused so many times..wen we read ur ff's and u call ur writing as amateurish😲ohh take ur time and build their relationship first...😃n abt dis part, sooo cute..loved d family and loved d nani n especially maan geet chori ek dusare ko niharna and aahien bharna😳
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