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afsha @-afsha- IF-Sizzlerz

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

Loved the update

Maaneet 1st meet ke baad he ghayal higaye

Geet suld sense him wah jus after few hours hahaha

Awesum connection😉

Loved Vicky's nautanki he is fab n his teasing is awesum

Maan is carefree with family

Update soon

Longer parts warna no long comments hehehehe

See evn i can blackmail hahahahaha

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KrishnaSourav @KrishnaSourav IF-Addictz

+ 10

Posted: 12 years ago

awesome part.
loved it.
continue soon.

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Sara @-Saruu- IF-Sizzlerz Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

Your writing is SOO Not Amateurish😆😉

Luvd the update😳

Hmm...Cionfused On Wat 2 Sayy😕

Luvd vicky's Subtle looks at Maaneet And geet Blushing😳

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good update

can we have twist where in geet instead of falling outright into maans arms gets closer to someone else resulting in maan getting confused or fuming

btw if u call ur writing amateurish then after reading my pathetic writing what would u say?😊

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divan_arshi @divan_arshi Senior Member Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

Damn nadia! stop calling ur writing amateurish... 😡

gal ur writing is like which make us blush badly... which make our head run like a fast horse... heart which skips beating and cheeks that get warm n red and we get aroused so many times..wen we read ur ff's and u call ur writing as amateurish😲

ohh take ur time and build their relationship first...😃

n abt dis part, sooo cute..loved d family and loved d nani n especially maan geet chori ek dusare ko niharna and aahien bharna😳

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lily_k25 @lily_k25 IF-Rockerz

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

aha...after reading this..even am tempted to have a oil massage done...it really gave a soothing effect...
mate...geet's point of view hogaya...abb maan's point of view baaki hai..😉

luved everything..from vicky teasing to rajji's compatibility with maan...from daadi's coming up matchmaking plans to maaneet's secret staring at eachother...luved it...pls do continue soon..😳

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