Originally posted by jnawaz
haye tauba...im blushing 😳..did you really just use my name and say i was a "gifted writer" 🤣...really!? i think that 90% of what i write is utter crap...tauba...chalo...lets get to commenting...i've had this ff book marked for ages,...time to read...
Why are you fishing for a compliment Jaz 🤣
ofcourse your writing isn't crap...it's bloody brilliant ⭐️
Chapter 1
i died laughing...because...it started with "the present"...😆 im only laughing cuz thats like everyone new format...meshing the past and present...dont get me wrong..i love it...it makes for awesome story telling...im just saying...its interesting how we all use it 😛...yeh Geet bhi naa...why is she trying to pawn him off to some Jane Doe? tauba...aagar usse nahin chahiyeh...ill take him...and omg...when she said he was attractive...my eyes nearly popped out of my head!
LMAO... it didn't hit me until now that you are infact right... alot of people use this style 😆 and i happen to be one of them *woot woot* 😎🤣 but i definitely won't be going back and forth between the past and present all the time... that's just too dayum difficult 😆 I'm gonna keep it nice and simple 😆
LOL... Get in the long queue love 😛😆 there are millions of girls just waiting to get their hands on him ☺️🤣
Chapter 2
oh teri...your past is only one week ago...😲...now thats a nice change...usually its like months if not years...😆...i think its an IF writer thing...we like to time travel! 🤣...i HATE darjee and all men that think like that...the place for women in the kitchen and all that...pfft!! 😡😡😡...had anyone said that to me...id be in the kitchen alright...adding poison to their food!! 😛...loved how you laid out the back story of Geet and Rajji coming to Khurana mansion...and omg...Maan's coming...eee!!
😆 the FF would become to complex to write if the gap was in years or months... that's why i stuck to a week 😛😆 and you're right a good dose of anti-freeze in their food ought to kill them nice and slowly 🤣 *don't ask I watch too much of Desperate Housewives* 😆
Chapter 3
🤣...lmfao!!! tell me you DID NOT use Ian ans VIcky!? not that im complaing about that visual...but lmfao...not what i was expecting at all...i had to literally stop and make sure i was on the right forum and not TVD forum!! 🤣...and dont tell me...Nina as Rajji...are i ask...are you a Delena fan?! 😉...lol...oh oh...one more thing on the pictures...pls explain why Dadai (uin her 60's) looks younger than Kaka in his 50's? 😆...the 10yr thing...creepy!! only cuz...we just got a...errm..."rishta" for me...dude is 10yrs older...i said...no thank you...mom was not happy!! 🤣🤣...simply adored the way you did the siblings describing Maan with like a screen shot of Maan...awesome!! and haye haye...Geet ke dil mein Kuch Kuch Hua and the man isnt even in the house yet!!
Yes I am using Ian and Nina as Vicky and Rajji 😆 Ian and Nina are just so fit I had to include them in this FF 🤣 particularly Ian though... that man is just so sinfully delicious ☺️ gosh his eyes 😍 and his smile *sighs* 😍
LMAO... Daadi uses all those anti wrinkle products that's why she looks younger, but even so Nakul is still the hottest of the two 🤣
😲 you rejected the guy coz he was 10 years older 🤣 did you even stop to check out if he was fit or not 🤣
Chapter 4
truly loved the relationship that Kaka has with the family...good to see them treat him like a family and not like a naukar...👏👏👏...loved their run in!! he eh...too cute!!! kaise dono are besharam...thinking about kissing and all that...the barely know each others names...kuch toh sharam karo!! 😉
LMAO... i try to project my behoodiness into Maaneet every now and then 😉🤣
need i say...ADD ME TO YOUR PM LIST! 😛
JAZ
Thank you so much for the wonderful long comment and will definitely include you in the PM list 😃
