Okay I've read all your story recently and i have just a few words to say...
why is Geet such a wuss now? why have you made her into a complete idiot??? she started ok but I just cannot believe how stupid she is???
Okay so maan hasnt dated in the past but it is completely unbelievable that he doesnt not recognize someone who is attracted to him???
that fiasco after the kiss...WT****!!!! purleez,,,I was really disappointed by that chapter...
These two need to behave like adults...Maan is acting like a snotty nosed teenager!!!
what planet are these parents n dadi living on????
Ok rant over...
otherwise your story is very good...apart from flaws in the story listed above...ohh yeah this other dude(the baddie) I hope he is unveiled soon...dont like him at all!! I hope geet gets to know the truth about him
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