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New Maaneet FF - Love battlefield Part 3 - Page 23 (Page 8)

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Part 1

Standing at the either side of the fountain which was located in the middle of the college,College for upper class students coming from well known families of delhi.Two ganges of different section were at loggheaders again,The science and Commerce students had a tiff again and it was a well known fact how they hated each other.

The student's here follow syllabus which was not found in any book, there has always been a debate as to who was superior the science or commerce and they would go to ant extent to prove their point.Even if two siblings came to this college and they are in different section,one in commerce and other in science they have to be foes and it was written in rule book.

There is commerce group who think they are decent,There leader is Maan Singh Khurana, their group name is Claw as they were always ready to scratch the science group.Eagle claw is their symbol and they are very much proud of that.

Then there is Science group, they don't believe in having a leader they think they are equal.Their group name is wings because sky is the limit for them.They were always ready for confrontation and would not step back.

It was one of those day were they had come face to face, well that was almost everyday.Claws were chiding wings for backing out of their bet which they have lost on the swimming gala day.

Agar himmat nahin hai toh kyun panga late ho one of the claws taunted and everyone was in fit of laughter.The claws were ready to tear the wings up, they were putting them down."Kyun seeti beeti gul hogai hai kya"said someone from the side.They were celebrating already dancing around at the victory.

Oh hello stop this dancing of your we are ready for the challenge the claws looked around as to where this voice was coming.The a girl who was around 5'3 came and stood by face to face with their leader the great Maan Singh Khurana.

Maan stared at the girl who belonged to wings group her face held up with pride.Maan looked at her and went to roll his eye."Kya Handa you again hum bachonse nahin ladte"Oiii Khurana seede say kah na daar gaya faltu ki nautanki kyun kar raha hai" she said deadly threatening.
Maan and claws decided to be lenient on geet as she was a girl of course they were trying to earn bonus point as they said.They decided that she has to purpose to one of the nerdy guy of their school.They had flowers ready for geet, the wings were reluctant but did not have much of a choice.
She hold the flowers close to herself and start walking towards the guy who's name was satya, she was not at all glad as to how this was turning out to be.She wanted to purpose to a guy who she was hand over hell in love with and first time she wanted to make it special now it was ruined and because of claws.I am so not letting them go for this they are in for trouble she hissed.

I have to do it I really have no choice she walked as slowly as possible her heart in her mouth.It was a opportunity and she was not letting it go.She picked herself up nervously and start moving towards the direction.Yes she knew where she was heading but still she had butterfly in her stomach.Her hands were dipped with sweat as the tension mount.
Geet there is no turning back, aaj toh tujhe yeh sab karna padega" Babaji please maddat karna she kept repeating to ease of the tension but it was not helping much and she knew it very well.Her heart was thudding as it will pop out of her chest.
As the destination was nearing her feet became jelly and refused to slide through.There was a time when she wanted to back off but seeing the person infront of her eye with the most magnificant smile she knew she had to do it.It was now or never"Geet now or never she said to herself"
Once she was close to the person she went down on her knees, startling the person infront of her by now everyone was staring at geet."Will you be my boyfriend" Geet said out in one breath.
What? was all the person infront could mutter
I really love you, and it has taken alot of courage to say this geet went on, the guy was scared as it was his first time and he did not knew how to react.
Geet handa was on her knees for him, she was one of the mst beautiful girl f the college and here she was on her knees for him.He just ran away from there and did not even look back, geet cursed him for being such a phattu.
Geet was embarrassed like anything she slowly stood up and saw everyone in the college staring at her, she wanted to ran and hide somewhere but she would not do that and let those annoying bunch of animals have the satisfaction.She was cursing under her breath we she saw all the claws n the floor laughing hard."Kaminay kahin kay" She was fuming by now.
Her gang walked up to her and ask her if she was ine she merely nodded, the Wings and Claws were back at their positions infront of the fountain."Hey losers humne kar dikaya" Geet said to them it was more o directed to maan, he lifted his brows at the word losers.
Is it us who are losers or you he taunte, waise i feel for you handa you are not that bad looking but even satya is not interested in you. He hi fived with one of his friends and gave a victorious look.Geet was not going to take this nonsense lying down."You know what Khurana meri chodo apni kaho waise har ladki tumhare saath 2 weeks sey zayada tikti nahin kya tum mein koi default hai nw it was the turn of wings to rejoice all of the were making loud noises.
Maan came forward geet with fury in his eye she has hurt his male ego, he pointed his finger at geet threatening her but the girl did not move and stay rooted at her place, they got into verbal dual again accusing one another like there was no tomorrow.
The tension was mounting with each and every word being said and the situation got really worse when geet get hold of maan's hair she was pulling them really hard.Maan was nt far behind also he too get hold of her hair and in no time they were into a catfight.The Claws and Wings stood there clueless not knowing how to react.
Maan was on floor and geet on top of him pulling his hair and hitting him with one jerk maan was on her top he was doing exactly what geet was doing.The kept rolling from one side to other, they were not in that sense to see what demage they are doing to themselves.It was a free show for the students some were making videos with their mobiles.
Precap : aa dekhe zara kis mein kitna hai dum
P.S - The names Claws and Wings is from a telugu movie called due credit also the the start is somewhat inspired...
Now imagine MSK in catfight ROFL

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SahSah IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 23 May 2011 at 8:52am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ajenn

This is really interesting.
Geet went on knee...
Did she really confess or it was jst a prank game.
Actually am coming out with many conclusion.
Really interesting... cont soon Embarrassed
OMG...Jen...i was like u had it right...
it was a dare...but u made it so close...Big smileBig smile
Thanks dear
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Posted: 23 May 2011 at 9:11am | IP Logged
ROFLROFLROFL Hey Babaji what a hilarious start lol...
loved the update...

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Posted: 23 May 2011 at 9:12am | IP Logged
ROFLROFLROFLloved it loved it a lotROFLROFL
thanks for PMBig smile

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Posted: 23 May 2011 at 9:18am | IP Logged
luved it ansah
wings n clawsSmile
im confussed whr i belong??????Confused
maan n geet in cat fight 
want 2 see 1 vm on tht surelyyy

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Posted: 23 May 2011 at 9:19am | IP Logged

Claws & Wings LOL
Gosh! they made Geet confess to a nerd .
Geet & Maan @ loggerheads Thumbs Up
Whenever they don't like each other ;*ahem ahem* becomes more intense Evil Smile Embarrassed

Loved it 

  flower flowers

Thanks for pm ...

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