Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee

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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice start . Loved d intro. Of d Handas👍🏼
geet is gonna b working as secretary in singapur interesting 😃 im curious to knw who ll b her boss...Hmm... kahi woh dd i mean dhak dhak, dust danav toh nahi 😲 😉 .Pls cont. Soon n pls pm me ur nxt update 😳 Edited by siroilily - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome part
love it
update soonnn
thanks 4 pm

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Posted: 12 years ago
awsome yaar continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thank you Everyone who is supporting me and liking my FF.
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice description of d family
n wowww sounds interesting
plz pm me
n update soonnn
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Posted: 12 years ago
Chapter 2
 
January 2nd 2011

5:02

Mood: Missing

This is not a story…………….. This is the Truth of my life

This is very difficult for me because everything here is like

A stranger for me…..

Because of new places and new people…….

I am from India…..

I'll never forget my family that loves me so much

I don't have any real sisters

But I have my cousin sister

We are very close

Shes knows about everything of my life

She is just like my best friend

I am still waiting for her

Like the thirsty earth is waiting for rain

I remember her voice

She sings so beautifully

Like a nightingale

When she smiles, her cheeks look like a red apple

Now I am praying like a

Priestless prays to god

That he sends her to me as soon as possible

I'm waiting..

XOXOXOXOXO

Geet Handa

She is my cousin Nandini. Her parents died when she was 2 years old.

So my family took care of her. I had no sister but I took her as my

Sister. I told her all my feelings and dreams to her. Because she

Understood me. Until my family separated her. By getting her

married. She was only 18 years old. In my family, girls live

your life but when you turn 18 you just get married.

Girls have no rights or freedom in my family. No one

In my family has the strength to fight for my family.

And who can not forget me. I am Geet Han…. I mean just Geet.

I still love my family a lot. Even if they don't. I am a bubbly,

shy girl. I love poetry. If you get on my nerves and make me

mad. I would be an annoying loud girl that you never saw. I

Respect my culture a lot. So I don't wear western clothes. I

am Indian. I am proud to be an Indian.

You guys may think why I am awake early and why I am not excited for my first job. I told you before I have a heart but it stopped beating. I cant feel anything. My heart is solid. I am waiting for someone to break it. So I could start a fresh life. Someone who can understand me. Someone that will make me free. I am trapped like a caged bird. And I'm awake because in my house we had to wake up at 5 in the morning. To do puja in my house. And I still do it. Darji told me whenever you have a big important day and you do puja in morning it will give you strength. And this is what I need. Anyways its late, I better go and get ready. Don't wanna be late for my job. I got ready and left my house. Ah! Transportation. That was my worser nightmare. Worser than Punjab. I knew I was going be late today. Babaji! Please help me.

At Khurana Constructions:

Adi: Pinky!!!! Boss??

Pinky: I don't know? Im busy eating.

Adi: You and your food. Anyways Geet Handa better come before boss comes.

Sasha: Wait…. Who??

Adi: Im not talking to you

Sasha: Well I am so speak up and my name is not Sasha

Adi: Sor…ry…. Ma'..am

Sasha: Okay, whos coming?

Adi: Geet Handa

Sasha: For what position?

Adi: Secretary

Sasha: Finally at least that Sameera will leave

Adi: Why do you care?

Sasha: She stares at M.S.K a lot

Adi: What if Geet Handa does too

Sasha: I'll take care of her later but right know that Sameera has to go

Pinky: Sasha ma'am fries?

Sasha: No thank you I don't wanna be fat like you

Pinky: Kya? Im fat, adi am I fat

Adi: um….. No your…. Um….

Sasha: See pinky you are and try to lose weight

Adi: Im out before pinky does something here

Pinky: Come back here ADI!!!!!!!!!!!

Sasha: Don't worry in 4-5 months your be skinny as a pea

Pinky: Kya? I need to wait.. NO!!!!!!!!!

Precap: I heard doctors talking. I couldn't feel my legs. Was I dead?

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Posted: 12 years ago
yippe me first to comment
poor geet i'm sure maan
i'll break her out of the cage
uff that sasha to much
the precap sounds scary
awesome part
love it
cont soonnn
thanks 4 pm
 
Edited by sharmake11 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: sharmake11

yippe me first to comment
poor geet i'm sure maan
i'll break her out of the cage
uff that sasha to much
the precap sounds scary
awesome part
love it
cont soonnn
thanks 4 pm
 

 
* congrats for the first comment *
you will have to see whos breaks geet cage
yes i had to add sasha I did not want to introduce a new character lol
yes the precap is scary
your welcome for the PM
Thank you!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: shah10

awsome update.

Thank you! Keep reading for more.

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Posted: 12 years ago
 
 
Thank you for your support =)