Fan Fictions

India-Forums

   
Fan Fictions
Fan Fictions

Ripped Apart ~5~ (Maaneet) teaser ;) pg 130 (Page 91)

euphoric IF-Rockerz
euphoric
euphoric

Joined: 30 August 2005
Posts: 8064

Posted: 08 June 2011 at 4:11am | IP Logged
Originally posted by maneet1985

soni...
'>http://zaazu.com"][/url]
 
please update karo...
 
Deepz... ek din aur... pleaaseeeEmbarrassed

TheBrat IF-Dazzler

Joined: 28 May 2010
Posts: 4508

Posted: 08 June 2011 at 4:16am | IP Logged
THE ACCOUNT OF THE MEMBER WHO POSTED THIS MESSAGE HAS BEEN TEMPORARILY BANNED.

If you think this is an error please Contact us.

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

euphoric

euphoric IF-Rockerz
euphoric
euphoric

Joined: 30 August 2005
Posts: 8064

Posted: 08 June 2011 at 4:46am | IP Logged
Originally posted by namita25

thakku...you are the light of my lifeHug

me running put of words to praise you dear...kya karoon lawaz nahi mil rahei...
  
ekdum jhakkas update likha hai tune...
 
 
me loving Geet's attitude...I am glad Geet didn't tell Maan anything...good going Geet...tadapne do ab use...pehle bolne se pehle sochna chahiye tha na...lekin nahi...ise aagbagula hone mein der kahan lagti hai...Angry
 
loved the way pinky stood for her...wah waha..chaaa gayi kudi...Clap
 

So pinky knows the whole truth know...me happy...Embarrassed

arjun...uff ...koi gal nahi...aane do use ...mein bhi taiyaar hoon...Angry
 

loved Dev in this part...chalo iska muuh to khula...loved the way he reprimanded NTClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClap

me loved these lines...:
Vicky looked upwards and gave a thumbs up as he said, "Great going! Oh my Great good Lord, Gusse pe discount offer chal raha tha ya kisi aur ingredient ki shortage thi that you stuffed my Veerji with what was readily accessible?" he said making a face when he heard a roar, "VICKY!". He immediately held his hand to his heart as a reflex and looking up again said, "Unko angry young man banaya toh at least you could have spared us humans around him with a stronger heart na!" with that he hurried to follow his Veerji's trail.
and ending...phir se cliffhanger...tujhe samjhaane ka koi faayda nahi...tu nahi sudhregi AngryAngryAngryAngryAngry AngryAngryAngryAngryAngryAngryAngryAngryAngryAngryAngryAngryAngryAngryAngryAngryAngryAngryAngryAngryAngryAngryAngryAngryAngryAngryAngryAngryAngryAngryAngryAngryAngryAngryAngry
babu  ab jaldi se update dena...plzzz
 
NamuuHugHug
 
Me so so humbledEmbarrassed
 
you too liking DevWinkLOL... and achchak se tera animal love kahan se jaag uthaLOL
 
Ok... glad u liked Vicky's silly dialoguesLOL... Arjun has to come to Mumbai na... woh toh hona hi tha... toh he'll be here but i can see tu hunter leke ready haiLOL
 
Thank youu so much BabuEmbarrassed
euphoric IF-Rockerz
euphoric
euphoric

Joined: 30 August 2005
Posts: 8064

Posted: 08 June 2011 at 4:48am | IP Logged
Originally posted by jyoti_l

awesome part...

at least now maan n vicky can talk abt what is to be done...

pinky now also knows...she will also b able to help her...in case she needs any...

maan will not let this go...n geet knows that...

waiting for the next part...

continue soon...
 
Thanks Jyoti
 
glad u enjoyedEmbarrassed
 
Pinky will play an important part like VickyBig smile
 
Originally posted by sonali_N

Thanks SonaliBig smile
euphoric IF-Rockerz
euphoric
euphoric

Joined: 30 August 2005
Posts: 8064

Posted: 08 June 2011 at 4:52am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -Parisa-

Aww Sonia finally you updated LOL

Maaneet scene was verrry well  written...Geet and maan's feeling were just wow..i love Angry Maan..Day Dreaming... I know geeet wont tell him anything  but we have Pinky the great who surely wants to see her sis in law Happy agin Wink she can help right ?Wink


Vicky is such an antic piece LOL  after Geet only he has the courage to tell the truth on  Maan's face LOL...Glad Maan saw Geet with gurvindar...grrr he considers him as Geet's hubby??ErmmLOL
uski tu khair nahii LOL...Loved the update...and id i ever told you Hoe much i hate Cliff hangers Angry

Update soon EmbarrassedEmbarrassed

Angry
 
err.. Pari i guess u told me whn we were travellin thru Maahi VeLOL but old habits die hard u seeWinkLOL
 
the angry Maan is out to set things right... bechara GurvinderOuchLOL but fikar not things would be sorted sooner than u think...
 
Glad that u enjoyed... thank u soo muchEmbarrassed
 
Originally posted by sindu555

nice update ...
 
 
Thanks dearBig smile
Saams IF-Sizzlerz
Saams
Saams

Joined: 09 March 2011
Posts: 12170

Posted: 08 June 2011 at 5:20am | IP Logged
Sonia yaara...any plans of updating??

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

euphoric

euphoric IF-Rockerz
euphoric
euphoric

Joined: 30 August 2005
Posts: 8064

Posted: 08 June 2011 at 6:03am | IP Logged
Originally posted by --Shika--


*Edited after Ages*
Lazy me!LOL
So here comes the dissection Part..Big smile
Aakhir aa hi gaya akal Sadu Sinh Khurana ko..he asked she ignored..
he pleaded..she didn't answer..
am loving it..Evil Smile
Ab samajh mein aayega what it'll feel like, when you throw out ppl, without giving them a chance to explain themselves..
The almost kiss or the kiss...what do you call it..was like an oasis in a desert..
it was not only some fantasy for us,..it is just to strengthen our hopes, to strengthen their bond.. OMG i loved itHeart

"This is wrong! You have no right!"
these words can be misleading.. but am glad that his brains didn't overwork this timeLOL

Maan caught the right point asking who the man was.. wow what a brilliant move!!
i was on edge reading it!Big smile
Vicky oh Vicky !! I love this Vicky!!LOL
jale pe namak chirakna koi aapse seekhe..LOL
And then Pinky got to know the truth..am glad someone got to now the mysterious truths of Geet completely..apart from that, there is someone atleast now, who understands Geet totally, without any missing parts in her story!!
FAB!! just FAB!!
And then comes my favorite part..
yes you heard it right Arjun anu's conversation was something i liked so much..
you may think am a gone case but let me explain why..
coz i always wondered wat would be anu's reaction once the truth is out..
i know she loves Geet more but i really wondered if she would doubt him?
not that she doubts Geet of course she can't but i wondered if she believes Arjun if he makes up some cock and bull story but now i have clarity..
she WON'T.
Anu's breath caught in her throat by the implication of what it meant. She looked at the picture of her best friend and than at her fianc. Arjun laughed at her expressions and then taking it from her hand placed it on the near-by table. Anu was staggered and wary at the sudden change of his expressions and then mustering up some courage she asked, "What are you doing with Geet's pic?"

i loved this! Seriously! you are slowly planning everything, linking ur story neatly with one another.. and making strong points for the D-Day, when the truth is out..
aww am loving this!!Big smile
NT-Dev had a point too..
i really loved the development of Dev's character here!
it's true that he's a biwi's pet but u showed us that he can stand against all odds when time comes..
.. I'm still a Khurana... and if you dare... dare try to mess up with my sister's happiness... then I won't spare you! I WILL NOT SPARE YOU! Get that straight aur Mumbai jaane ki taiyari shuru karo"
i must tell you khurana men are on a roll!LOL
and then the next day arrives with a lot of expectations for us..
I love Visha.. Vicky is the comic relief in the serious story line..yet he's adorable and cute..
And then..
someone's feeling guilty..
"You don't have to worry about me! This is not the first time you have hurt me anyways! And I'm quite used to this pain now"
well said Geet.LOL That would definitely hit the right nail..
the more guilty he feels, the more his mind works fast,..so am up for itApprove
And the end.. could it be any better?
Jealousy Maan!
Gurwinder bhai kuch toh kaam aaye humare..LOL
Jokes apart, am more worried about the other strange person, whom Geet is going to meet..
all and all wonderful updateBig smile
Please Please do continue soon
Hey Shika... its no probs dear...
 
thanks a bunchBig smile
 
as he came back to his senses... he asked for truth but owing to his past mistakes thts becoming more difficult now... coz she's not going to relent to him!
 
they would be together to keeo ur hopes high on tht dear... and now since he wants answers he's not backing down without itBig smile
 
hmm since Geet has had her share of troubles she needed someone to sort her own thoughts na,,, its good at times to just be abke to share ur grief with someone... so Pinky would step in hereBig smile
 
Anu will never doubt Geet... she's the one who has been defending her and thts the strength of their friendship... they trust each other immensely and trust me when the D-day will arrive they'll fight for each otherEmbarrassed
 
Ofcourse he's jealous and possessive and guilty... but guilty accept karne ke liye time lagegaAngryLOL

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

TheBrat

euphoric IF-Rockerz
euphoric
euphoric

Joined: 30 August 2005
Posts: 8064

Posted: 08 June 2011 at 6:04am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Saams

Sonia yaara...any plans of updating??
i m not too sure abt today... kal pakkaEmbarrassed

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

TheBrat

Go to top

Related Topics

  Topics Author Replies Views Last Post
A new ff on Siddhima-Kaise Batau (Teaser page 9)

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 10 11

Author: mabel   Replies: 81   Views: 14339

mabel 81 14339 28 January 2011 at 7:16am by sonia1000
llSamrat-Gunjan SS~Till Death Do Us Apart...ll

2 3 4

Author: -Sanjana-   Replies: 31   Views: 4859

-Sanjana- 31 4859 07 July 2010 at 8:08am by hazra66
l Loving you l Teaser Page 1 02/04

2 3 4

Author: curledup   Replies: 31   Views: 2769

curledup 31 2769 24 April 2010 at 6:04am by topsyturvy23
l The others l PH AK AR FF l Teaser page 1 7/01

2 3

Author: curledup   Replies: 22   Views: 2309

curledup 22 2309 18 February 2010 at 5:52am by topsyturvy23
New A-R FF / *teaser*

2

Author: .driftingaway   Replies: 10   Views: 1444

.driftingaway 10 1444 21 November 2008 at 7:29pm by arddima

Forum Quick Jump

Forum Category / Channels
Forums

Fan Fictions Topic Index

Disclaimer: All Logos and Pictures of various Channels, Shows, Artistes, Media Houses, Companies, Brands etc. belong to their respective owners, and are used to merely visually identify the Channels, Shows, Companies, Brands, etc. to the viewer. Incase of any issue please contact the webmaster.

Popular Channels :
Star Plus | Zee TV | Sony TV | Colors TV | SAB TV | Life OK

Quick Links :
Top 100 TV Celebrities | Top 100 Bollywood Celebs | About Us | Contact Us | Advertise | Forum Index