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Ripped Apart ~5~ (Maaneet) teaser ;) pg 130 (Page 81)

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Posted: 03 June 2011 at 10:42pm | IP Logged
Nice update. So now Maan hath dho kar Geet ke peeche pad gaya he sach jaanne k liye. May be he will over hear Geet taliking to Guruvinder.

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Posted: 04 June 2011 at 4:13am | IP Logged
Originally posted by euphoric

is speed main i wonder teri OS main Maan ki kitni behene hongiConfused ROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFL
 
Maan the Maan Singh Khurana se... Maan the communal BhaiOuch 
 
waise why was Deepz mad at uConfused ab kya kiya tune?LOL
 
and Deepz... i got ur msgEmbarrassedHug
ROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFL
 
communal BHAI!!ROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFL
 
 
auru ka pata nahi...meri anu-cum-soni ka...deepu ka...aur huner ka to pakka pakka hai!!
 
ROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFL
 
 
ARE she is angry coz i dint dedicate my update to her...jiu wali story yaar...OuchOuchOuchOuch
 
but in dono ko kaun samjhaye...sabar ka phal meetha hota hai!!!!!!!WinkWinkWinkWinkWinkWink
 

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Posted: 04 June 2011 at 4:22am | IP Logged
Unreserved my comment on page 77 Smile
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Posted: 04 June 2011 at 4:35am | IP Logged
Originally posted by aashluvsmaan

Originally posted by euphoric

is speed main i wonder teri OS main Maan ki kitni behene hongiConfused ROFL
 
Maan the Maan Singh Khurana se... Maan the communal BhaiOuch 
 
waise why was Deepz mad at uConfused ab kya kiya tune?LOL
 
and Deepz... i got ur msgEmbarrassedHug
ROFL
 
communal BHAI!!ROFL
 
 
auru ka pata nahi...meri anu-cum-soni ka...deepu ka...aur huner ka to pakka pakka hai!!
 
ROFL
 
 
ARE she is angry coz i dint dedicate my update to her...jiu wali story yaar...Ouch
 
but in dono ko kaun samjhaye...sabar ka phal meetha hota hai!!!!!!!Wink
 


Communal bhai!! ROFL
Ae looo!! Aivayi Behn bana Diyaa .. Chal hat!  Main kisi ki behn nahin . . Aur woh bhi Mr. HOT-Sexy-Hansome-Gorgeous-cute-strong-stylish-goodlooking-adorable hunk ki toh BILKUL bhi nahin . .
Tujhe shonk hai toh tu ban . mujhe nahin banna. . LOL

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Posted: 04 June 2011 at 4:36am | IP Logged
Originally posted by aashluvsmaan

communal BHAI!!ROFL
 
auru ka pata nahi...meri anu-cum-soni ka...deepu ka...aur huner ka to pakka pakka hai!!
 
ARE she is angry coz i dint dedicate my update to her...jiu wali story yaar...OuchOuchOuchOuch
 
but in dono ko kaun samjhaye...sabar ka phal meetha hota hai!!!!!!!WinkWinkWinkWinkWinkWink
 
 
teri chittar parade karani hai maineAngry
 
Kamini Kahin kiAngryAngryAngryAngryAngryAngryAngry

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Posted: 04 June 2011 at 4:48am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Teenage.dream

Communal bhai!! ROFL
Ae looo!! Aivayi Behn bana Diyaa .. Chal hat!  Main kisi ki behn nahin . . Aur woh bhi Mr. HOT-Sexy-Hansome-Gorgeous-cute-strong-stylish-goodlooking-adorable hunk ki toh BILKUL bhi nahin . .
Tujhe shonk hai toh tu ban . mujhe nahin banna. . LOL
Wohi toh Huner ainve zabardasti main Bhai chipka rahi hai...
 
humare sir pe kya seend nazar aate hain jo Maan ko bhai banayeAngry

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Posted: 04 June 2011 at 1:52pm | IP Logged
Hiii Dear...
 
Super awsum FF...Just read it in last 2 days.,..It is so so so gud...U r an awsum writer...Beautiful Concept, Beautifully presented...Completely in luv wid it...
 
Thnk God Maan is knowing sumthing now..He must rush to Hoshiarpur to find all d details afterall he is MSK...nd plz dont ruin Anu's life.. I wish nd hope truth cums out before engagement only, though i doubt u'll reveal the truth at engagement only nd will end up Anu getting engaged wid Yash.. dats completely my guess though lets c where the story goes...I even hav a doubt dat the character cming in party with Gurvinder to help Geet is not a helper but a traitor...Brij's goon or  maybe sum old character... Plz remove my suspisions by updating soon;...
 Nd plz do add me to ur PM list...I'll send u a buddy request...
 
Thnx in advance...SmileSmile
 

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Posted: 04 June 2011 at 2:57pm | IP Logged
so...my coworker (who I got hooked onto Geet) asked me if i read the update yesterday...i said no...not yet...she said "its good"...then this morning...my best friend (who doesnt read this ff but knows about it cuz of me)...asked if i read it so i could give her the details...i said no...not yet...she ordered me to read it and tell her what happened...im like..dear lord woman...hold your horses!! Confused...so...its Saturday afternoon...i just did three admissions at work...now...i have my chinese for lunch...my sobe cranberry/grapefruit drink...and now im read to read!! Big smileBig smileBig smile...what a process its become...LOL...so lets go!
 
"reminding her of her once apon a time..."...wow...Maneet truly are faiytales for us arent they...cuz just like after watching a disney movie you want your prince charming...here...after maneet...you want your MSK Embarrassed...i LOVED Geet's reaction...i knew that she wasnt going to turn into a blubbering slob and open her dil ki bhadas in front of Maan...but i wasnt sure how you'd handle it...im glad that you showed that Geet remembered that when she needed him...she had turned her away ClapClapClap...he didnt give her a chance...and now...she shouldnt either...well...not yet any way...Maan's reaction to Geet's reaction...(wow) ...was just amazing...something snapped ruining the harmony of his spirit...because it was the first time he was seeing Geet as worn out and defeated...superb!! just...awesome!! ShockedShocked...i loved it!! im so confused!! i mean...ek taraf...im with Geet...she is right in her place to push him away after what he did/didnt do...then...seeing Maan somewhat repenting for his actions or lack there of, i feel for him...but...i think...at the end...im with Geet more on this one...at least for now...she needs to hold a grudge! Tongue...i do however want to see Maan kick Arujns butt!! i want to see his reaction when he finds out the whole truth!! EmbarrassedEmbarrassed...i swear...seeing Pinky standing up to Maan...i LOVED it...our sweet si, innocent si Pinky...haye haye...sherni nikli!!! StarStar...ok...i agree...forget MSK...Geet can have him...i want VIcky!! you tell ms sasha that she has competition!! WinkWink...i loved how he tells it to Maan like it is !! fabulous...just...fabulous!!! Big smileBig smile...i loved his talk with Babaji!! he he...ROFL...the Arjun scene...umm...need i say...eww!! Dead...chalo...finally Dev has found his...errm...spine Wink...good to see that he is finally standing up to that chudail of a wife he has...bleh!!! that comment Geet made about Maan hurting her before...and her being used to the pain...omg...dead...im dead...flawless!! ClapClapClapClap...
 
cant wait for next part!! eee!!
JAZ

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