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Ripped Apart ~5~ (Maaneet) teaser ;) pg 130 (Page 73)

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Posted: 02 June 2011 at 5:32am | IP Logged
REALLY GREAT PROGRESS
I'M LOVING IT
THNX FR D PM

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Posted: 02 June 2011 at 5:38am | IP Logged
awesome update, plz maan know the thuth before it's to late!

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Posted: 02 June 2011 at 5:38am | IP Logged

thakku...you are the light of my lifeHug

me running put of words to praise you dear...kya karoon lawaz nahi mil rahei...
 
 
 
ekdum jhakkas update likha hai tune...
 
 
me loving Geet's attitude...I am glad Geet didn't tell Maan anything...good going Geet...tadapne do ab use...pehle bolne se pehle sochna chahiye tha na...lekin nahi...ise aagbagula hone mein der kahan lagti hai...Angry
 
loved the way pinky stood for her...wah waha..chaaa gayi kudi...Clap
 

So pinky knows the whole truth know...me happy...Embarrassed

arjun...uff ...koi gal nahi...aane do use ...mein bhi taiyaar hoon...Angry
 

loved Dev in this part...chalo iska muuh to khula...loved the way he reprimanded NTClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClap

me loved these lines...:
Vicky looked upwards and gave a thumbs up as he said, "Great going! Oh my Great good Lord, Gusse pe discount offer chal raha tha ya kisi aur ingredient ki shortage thi that you stuffed my Veerji with what was readily accessible?" he said making a face when he heard a roar, "VICKY!". He immediately held his hand to his heart as a reflex and looking up again said, "Unko angry young man banaya toh at least you could have spared us humans around him with a stronger heart na!" with that he hurried to follow his Veerji's trail.
and ending...phir se cliffhanger...tujhe samjhaane ka koi faayda nahi...tu nahi sudhregi AngryAngryAngryAngryAngry AngryAngryAngryAngryAngryAngryAngryAngryAngryAngryAngryAngryAngryAngryAngryAngryAngryAngryAngryAngryAngryAngryAngryAngryAngryAngryAngryAngryAngryAngryAngryAngryAngryAngryAngry
babu  ab jaldi se update dena...plzzz


Edited by namita25 - 06 June 2011 at 7:23am

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Posted: 02 June 2011 at 5:49am | IP Logged
awesome part...

at least now maan n vicky can talk abt what is to be done...

pinky now also knows...she will also b able to help her...in case she needs any...

maan will not let this go...n geet knows that...

waiting for the next part...

continue soon...

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Posted: 02 June 2011 at 5:54am | IP Logged
Aww Sonia finally you updated LOL



Maaneet scene was verrry well  written...Geet and maan's feeling were just wow..i love Angry Maan..Day Dreaming... I know geeet wont tell him anything  but we have Pinky the great who surely wants to see her sis in law Happy agin Wink she can help right ?Wink


Vicky is such an antic piece LOL  after Geet only he has the courage to tell the truth on  Maan's face LOL...Glad Maan saw Geet with gurvindar...grrr he considers him as Geet's hubby??ErmmLOL
uski tu khair nahii LOL...Loved the update...and id i ever told you Hoe much i hate Cliff hangers Angry

Update soon EmbarrassedEmbarrassed

Angry

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nice update ...
 
 

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