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Ripped Apart ~5~ (Maaneet) teaser ;) pg 130 - Page 59

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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome part...
loved it...
vickys was refreshing in so much emotional turmoil...
his subtle humor was very inviting and effective...
i loved it...
geet and pinky's relation was heart felt...
al in all a great part...
hoping next time we will get to see some revelations for maan
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Lovely update!!!!
Poor Geet...Poor Maan...Hope Maan figures everything out soon!
Great work!πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing update
cont soon
thanks 4 the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
You know what...your updates always leave me with a bittersweet sensation. Sweet because I get to read your update and bitter because I have to wait for another week for the next one. Aaj kya shaam ko update kar di. Usually I see it in the morning (IST) and so I would let it seep in my mind and do all the emotional effects on my senses the whole day and by night the effect will somewhat disappear giving me a good sleep. But today, I am most unlikely to have a peaceful sleep since there is no much time left to recover, although I should say the part was not as emotionally traumatic as some of the previous parts.
 
Anyways, I am kind of enjoying the payback time Maan is experiencing (how cruel of me). And love Vicky for those boundaries and sixers he thrashes on Maan reminding how badly he took out his frustration on poor Geet. I also love this sensible, loving and caring Pinky. So is Gurvinder coming? Liked Dev standing up for his sister. How long should I wait to see Arjun getting thrashed by Maan?
 
 
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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: maneet1985

that was wow soni!! loved it!!! maan and his problems...

geet trying to escape maan!!! scared of that rat arjun!! his mind is cruel.. really cruel!!!
god help anu!!!
*****lol this time u didnt give me a chance to make aashu maan's sister, I am angry at her😑*****
geet has got a saviour in pinky!! loved pinky today!! the way she replied to maan was just wow!!!!
geet is meeting gurvinder rt...
this time maan will do something!!! i want him to know she is not married... poor geet loves him so much still!!!

😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑
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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: aashluvsmaan

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OMG!! πŸ˜†
Sorry to interrupt .. But I was just passing by and I saw This! !
🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣
TOO Good !! 🀣
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Posted: 12 years ago
beautiful update...continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: Teenage.dream


OMG!! πŸ˜†
Sorry to interrupt .. But I was just passing by and I saw This! !
🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣
TOO Good !! 🀣

 
has bacchi has...
 
tujhe meri OS me maan ki behan banati hu rukhAngryAngryAngryAngry
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thanks a looot for the pm.the update was quite intense,i hope maan can follow geet with gurvinder.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: aashluvsmaan

 
has bacchi has...
 
tujhe meri OS me maan ki behan banati hu rukh😑



Ae Loo .. Maine kya kiyaa .. Main to gussa ho rahi thi .. sacchi .. Ki aash ko Maan ki SISTER bana diya .. πŸ˜†πŸ˜†