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Ripped Apart ~5~ (Maaneet) teaser ;) pg 130 (Page 44)

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Posted: 31 May 2011 at 1:30am | IP Logged
Originally posted by heermeher

so maan ki dimaag ki bathi jalgayee

thank god
 
thanks Rakhi...
 
yes finally batti jaliLOL
 
Originally posted by swetha10

Awesome!!!!!! continue soon
 
thanks Swetha
will update soonBig smile

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Posted: 31 May 2011 at 1:35am | IP Logged
Originally posted by smj1977

I started reading when the pages were 33 and when finally I finished its already 37th page

am I a slow reader or your updates make me crazy that I read them agagin and again finally I make up my mind to write...LOL

few things that I liked today
 
VICKY - SASHA bonding
VICKY - ANU bonding
GEET - PAMMI bonding
ADI - PIKY - GEET trio
even NT - Arjun was nice (partners in crime)  ... how far will NT be able to fool Dev... some day or the other he will come to know the truth
 
but what I adored was
VICKY - MAAN convo
 
I felt needles peirceing in my heart
I felt each and every thud of his heart
 
what will Geet do when she will come to know that when she was calling Maan desparately ...he was in hospital?
 
will she tell him the TRUTH now?... each and every word...?
will he listen to her patiently with out interfearing?
 
waitng eagerly for another heart touching journey to their hearts
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Shruti
 
 
 
 
Hey Shruti...
 
Thanks a bunch dear... i m glad u enjoyed and humbled tht u enjoy the reading so much tht u end up reading more than once... thnks a bunch for the appreciationBig smile
 
aww i m glad tht revelation wala convo had the desired effect... 
 
well he was not exactly in hospital then... he was drinking in his agony and later met with tht accident...
 
he'll find the truth but not from demanding it from Geet... thts not going to take him anywhere... now he wud have to make his pathSmile
 
will update soonEmbarrassed

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Posted: 31 May 2011 at 1:36am | IP Logged

are u updating today soni???

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Posted: 31 May 2011 at 1:37am | IP Logged
Originally posted by mrk_1

awsome yaar..
ll geet say the truth now ??
thats gonna be fun 
 
Thanks a bunch dearBig smile
 
he'll find the truth soon nowEmbarrassed
 
Originally posted by jyoti_l

gr8 part...
loved it..
hope geet tells him the truth...
but i feel like she will shout at him n run away..
anyways...continue soon...
 
Thanks Jyoti
I m glad you enjoyedEmbarrassed
he'll have to work harder nowSmile

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Posted: 31 May 2011 at 1:38am | IP Logged
Originally posted by maneet1985

are u updating today soni???

 
Not today Deepz...
most probably tommBig smile

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Posted: 31 May 2011 at 1:40am | IP Logged
Originally posted by suprise007

wow, had tears when vicky was telling Maan what he knows, although i also had tears when geet was crying over the newspaper that had Maan's pic many chapters back,
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Thanks a bunch dearBig smile
yea i know tht newspaper wala part a become a little sentiConfused
glad u enjoyedEmbarrassed
 
Originally posted by sweet scorpio

finally vicky was able to knock some sense in maan!
 
wonder how will geet react when she'll get to know that anu is getting married with arjun...
 
i hope that geet will tell maan the truth!
 
continue soon!
 
Thanks Dear
I m glad u enjoyed... but he would have to put in some hard work here
don't worry both Anu and Geet would be safeBig smile
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Posted: 31 May 2011 at 1:47am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Teenage.dream

WoowWw!! This part was like Beyond Brilliant . . Omg! Finally He's out after the truth; Finally He's believing in Anu's faith in Geet. Sonia! Hands down because This was like the awesomest part .. Clap
Starting off with Vicky and Sashaa .. They are the cutest ouyt there .. Adorable! Coming up is the Maan vicky convo .. Totally understaning Vicky's frustation on Maan and hence being harsh on him . . And Finally comes the truth part . . Such amazing and powerful dialogues . . Such a depressing Maan's monologue .. Cry Yeah Yeah !! See . . How much you made her suffer .. OK! I dont wanna be evil but hey he deserves it! ok maybe not that much but a lil bit naa..
Aahh .. Coming back to subject .. I simply ADORE Anu's letter .. That's pure friendship, I soo miss Geet Anu moments. . and I'm sure We'll be getting more of them later .. Embarrassed
and The last scene! I'm not sure whether Geet will be able to tell the truth but oh man! I'm DYING for the next update .. like DYING for it!! Hey It's not my fault that you end it on the cliffhanger .. I'm just greedy for your updates.. Tongue so please please pleeaasseee Update soon ..
But AMAZING Update !!
 
Hey Huner...
 
Thanks a bunch dearieEmbarrassed 
 
with instrospective Maan in picture... how could he miss out on the nuances... so now he's seeing things in the right lightEmbarrassed
 
Glad u enjoyed the Visha starting... poor guy needs some time for his love story too naWinkLOL and then the convo was coming... uff... thnk god the impact was delivered rightBig smile
 
O i miss writing Geet-Anu too... we all need a anu in out lives naEmbarrassed
 
and don't worry everyone will get wht they deserveWinkLOLLOL
 
Originally posted by Dansindiadans

You love cliff hangers na, but still lovely part
 
Thanks dearEmbarrassed
cliffhangers and me? oh it was a chance encounterLOL

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Posted: 31 May 2011 at 1:50am | IP Logged
Originally posted by amzu32

awesome update soniaClap

finally maan know some clues about geetSmile.Loved the maan rection when he find out the truth of geet parents

vicky n sasha scene r cute.Vicky Anu conversation r superb
anu's note was cuteStar
Please update soon.
 
Thanks a bunch Amzu...
 
I m glad u enjoyed it... Maan may try to push Geet away but he would never be able to stop himself from loving her na... so it came his reaction... an instinct in himBig smile
 
Will update soonEmbarrassed
 
Originally posted by janu_2006

hey
gr8 part..
hope maan gets to knw the truth nw..
cont.,sooon
 
thanks for pm dear..
 
Thanks Janu
He'll find the truth soon nowBig smile
 
 

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