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Ripped Apart ~5~ (Maaneet) teaser ;) pg 130 (Page 134)

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Posted: 16 June 2011 at 2:10am | IP Logged
Originally posted by cutee987

omg! both updates were awesome...

finally maan got to know the truth...

thanks for pm.
 
Thanks dearBig smile
 
glad u enjoyed itEmbarrassed

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Posted: 16 June 2011 at 2:24am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sweet coco

Part 33 

WHOA!! Double update'.so awesome'Love ya Sonia'you're the best!!

thanks a bunch HetuLOL

Okay loved this part'.the song sequence was beautiful and so perfect for the situation. So finally Maan is asking the right questions, YES!

some thinking in place... munda using his akal u seeWink... thts one of my fav numbersEmbarrassed

I love that line that Geet said'what a backbone this girl has'so impressive! Jealous and sad Maan'.oh but it's getting good!

she finally gave him the piece of her mind... she's compatible to Maan... how can she be any lessBig smile

Arjun'.when will he die'can someone strangle him! I hope Maan, Geet and Anu get to slap him'he totally deserves it!

soon enuf... maan and geet and anu won't spare himApprove

Vicky-Sasha'.so uber cute and I love the protective nature of Pinky-Adi'.Geet in such safe hands!

Pammi and her family whole heartedly took Geet as their own na... it wud have been so difficult for her to otherwise stay by herselfSmile

Hoping for some beautiful Maneet moments and soon!!!!!

sureWinkLOL

Excellent work babe'love this FF so much, you always exceed expectations!!!

thanks a loads sweetieEmbarrassed

Part 34 

 My favorite line in the whole part: "his insides blazed causing his blood to boil. Responsively, his fingers curled to fists as he fought the urge to tear her apart from that man's hold"'OMFG! His possessiveness over her'.me so dead!

ohh i know... i love his possessive instincts too... tht just adds spark to his him, his love and his passionSmile

And then the ripped the world apart line'.classic!! Loved it!

thanks dearBig smile

 And he knows now'YES!!! So happy more of the truth is coming out'finally!!!

 he had too... i promised a roller coaster, didn;t i?WinkLOL

Maan crying'.OMG'this is getting better and better'.so glad this happened'he knows and he regrets!

 though he'll regret more... Khurana papad company in makingLOL

 EMBRACE'.YIPPPEEE!!!!! This was one of my most favorite chapters'.I'm dead again! Thank you for something good'now she has to spill the truth'I'm so happy!!!!

oh it had been the most crucial ones and the difficult to write as wellSmile glad u enjoyedEmbarrassed

YOU ROCK BABE!!!!!!!

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Thanks HetalBig smile
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Posted: 16 June 2011 at 2:29am | IP Logged
Unreserved on page 119

Coming to the teaser .. Ouch Yaar Jitni bhi water ki problem hai na India mein, Tell them to come to me! Mere tears se water ki problem solve ho jayegi . . LOL
Yaar When will they unite.. jab main bhuddi ho jaoongi tab? LOL



Edited by Teenage.dream - 16 June 2011 at 2:35am

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Posted: 16 June 2011 at 3:03am | IP Logged
Originally posted by aashluvsmaan

Hiya kamini!!!Hug

HugHug aao ji aao... ji aaya nuLOL
 
Le mai aa gayee teri gaaliyaan sunke finally!!CryCryCryCry
 
AngryAngryAngry bina gali sune kaam nahi hota tujhseAngryAngryAngry

Kamini tu merese double triple hw kara rahi hai!!!!!!! But moi still wuwwwsss juu'''AngryAngryAngryAngryAngryAngryAngryAngry

toh aur kaun karegaTongueTongueTongueTongueTongue me too wuwwss juuEmbarrassedLOL
 
umaaahhh!! WinkWinkWinkWinkWinkThat's what u promised me..dont forget kaminiAngryAngryAngryAngryAngry

haan pata haiAngryAngryAngry

PART 31:

(thats part 32Angry... mujhe confuse kiye begair koi kaam nahi hote tujhseAngryAngryAngry)
 
Okies me loved the pain in the first para!! Just beautiful!! U r handling the lifeless geet really well!! Kudos!ClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClap
 
thankuus ji... ur discreetion and contribution makes it just betterEmbarrassed

Maans pain also is almost palpable throughtout..the guilt the sefl hatred..the whole range of emotions!! Wow Sonia u rock baby!! ClapClap

Aakhir kamini hai..rock to tujhe karna hi padhega! HeheCool
 
le ja le ja... le ja mera creditAngryLOL waise baat toh hai... kaminis are insanely ishmartLOLLOLLOL
 
Vicky ka babaji wala dialogue was a cracker! Loved it!! ROFLROFLROFL
Lekin wo sasaha ko sad line maari'hehe'.tune ye nahi bataya baad me kyaa hua?? Ahem ahem'.ROFLROFLROFLROFL
 
geet ke saamne pehle maan ki chalti thi ke sasha ke saamne Vicky ki chalegiWinkLOL aage ka tu imagine kar leWinkEmbarrassedLOL
 
The grt MSK pinky se darr ke bhagg gaya''..wow!ROFLROFLROFLROFL
 
8th wonderROFLROFL

Angry jealous maan coming up! Wowww'cant wait!!Day DreamingDay DreamingDay DreamingDay DreamingDay Dreaming

the j maan... i love himDay DreamingDay DreamingDay DreamingEmbarrassed
 
No comments about that *^*&^*&^8 arjun!!AngryAngryAngryAngry I hope anu n yash get close now'as frnds at least!!EmbarrassedEmbarrassed
 
yes thy r... futuristic coupleEmbarrassedLOL

Dev finally got a backbone!!ClapClapClapClapClapClap

for a changeWinkLOL
 
Maan has taken up eavesdropping!! Hehe..one more achievent!! Bas abhi apni ahem ahem bimari ka ilaaj nikaal le to perfect ho jaaye!!ROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFL

ROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFL oh how i wish... cot ko chod ke cot ke upar wali pe dhyan detaROFLROFL

Over to u!!

 
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Posted: 16 June 2011 at 3:07am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Teenage.dream

Unreserved on page 119

Coming to the teaser .. Ouch Yaar Jitni bhi water ki problem hai na India mein, Tell them to come to me! Mere tears se water ki problem solve ho jayegi . . LOL
Yaar When will they unite.. jab main bhuddi ho jaoongi tab? LOL

 
ohh Huner... u r going to be so blessed for thtLOLLOLLOL
 
but i wud say... wait till tonight babyWinkEmbarrassed

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Posted: 16 June 2011 at 3:38am | IP Logged
sonia sonia sonia...
 
cheering karu kya... zabardast maaneet scene dalna ok..
 
aaj kal humare maaneet show se huye hai paraye...

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Posted: 16 June 2011 at 3:40am | IP Logged
DEEPU YAHA SIRF OPTION  2 KA NAARA LAGA!!!!!!!!!
 
DONT ASK WHAT IT MEANS.
 
JUST NAARA LAGA!!
 
 
 

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Posted: 16 June 2011 at 3:43am | IP Logged
Originally posted by euphoric

Originally posted by esha143

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Hellooo...good morning Ji...How r u today...???Big smileHug
bery bery good...
 
as i told jiu yest... ready for a marathonWinkLOLLOL

achcha...marathon,ha??chalo ho jaaye...ye...kya bolthi tu..???WinkLOL

 
haan chal...
tu hyderabad se shuru kar main mumbai se shuru karti hoon
kahin toh raste main mil hi jayengeROFLROFLROFLROFL
 
wait lemme fetch ashu as well kamini akele mumbai main kya karegi... atleast raste main pyar hua ikraar hua toh kar hi sakte haiWinkROFLROFLROFL... angrezan ka kya kare?Confused
 
 
MAI AA GAYI APNI CHAATA LEKAR...AUR SONI MAINE BLACK N WHITE BHI PEHNA HAI AAJJJEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
ROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLV

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