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Ripped Apart ~5~ (Maaneet) teaser ;) pg 130 (Page 122)

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Posted: 13 June 2011 at 9:42am | IP Logged
Soni, so when do we get the next updatd.

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Posted: 13 June 2011 at 11:47am | IP Logged
hey plz...update fast we r waiting..
i want dat B****** naintara and arjun to be caught for dere doings...
hate dem to the core..

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Posted: 13 June 2011 at 1:51pm | IP Logged

Hiya kamini!!!Hug

Le mai aa gayee teri gaaliyaan sunke finally!!CryCryCryCry

Kamini tu merese double triple hw kara rahi hai!!!!!!! But moi still wuwwwsss juu………AngryAngryAngryAngryAngryAngryAngryAngry

umaaahhh!! WinkWinkWinkWinkWinkThat's what u promised me..dont forget kaminiAngryAngryAngryAngryAngry

 

PART 31:

 
Okies me loved the pain in the first para!! Just beautiful!! U r handling the lifeless geet really well!! Kudos!ClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClap
 

Maans pain also is almost palpable throughtout..the guilt the sefl hatred..the whole range of emotions!! Wow Sonia u rock baby!! ClapClap

Aakhir kamini hai..rock to tujhe karna hi padhega! HeheCool
 

Vicky ka babaji wala dialogue was a cracker! Loved it!! ROFLROFLROFL

Lekin wo sasaha ko sad line maari…hehe….tune ye nahi bataya baad me kyaa hua?? Ahem ahem….ROFLROFLROFLROFL
 
The grt MSK pinky se darr ke bhagg gaya……..wow!ROFLROFLROFLROFL
 

Angry jealous maan coming up! Wowww…cant wait!!Day DreamingDay DreamingDay DreamingDay DreamingDay Dreaming

No comments about that *^*&^*&^8 arjun!!AngryAngryAngryAngry I hope anu n yash get close now…as frnds at least!!EmbarrassedEmbarrassed

Dev finally got a backbone!!ClapClapClapClapClapClap

Maan has taken up eavesdropping!! Hehe..one more achievent!! Bas abhi apni ahem ahem bimari ka ilaaj nikaal le to perfect ho jaaye!!ROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFL

 

Over to u!!

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Posted: 13 June 2011 at 1:57pm | IP Logged

PART 33

 
No thanks needed darling……..i will take interest ke saath wapas as n when needed!! Tu tension le abhi ke mai kyaa maangoongi!!LOLLOLLOLLOLLOL
 

Soni song was fab!! The way u managed to involve each sentence on maaneet n one para on Visha….loved it!! HehehehehheWinkWinkWinkWinkWinkWinkWinkWink

Maans jeoulousy was apt n to the pt! I cud almost see the smoke come thru his ears hehe…u kno I alwaz see maan wherever I see,,,in what state wo bhi tujhe pata hai!WinkWinkWinkWinkWinkROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFL

Ye maan bakwaas mauke pe chukka kyu maarta hai???????? Smart hai no doubt!! Lekin thoda action bhi maangta hai na baby!!ROFLROFLROFLAngryAngryAngryAngryAngryAngryAngry

Finally arjun is being questioned!! But looks like log khusiyon me aur apni problems me itni busy hai ke answer sunne ka time hi nahi hai!! Cant dadi blurt this out to maan?? This will get maan thinking!...remind me about this later..wanted to tell u something about this!OuchOuchOuchOuchOuch

The whole "maan ki geet" wala scene…fab!! Loved her verbalization of her feelings!ClapClapClapClapClap

Again the pain n passion was portrayed awesomely!! Loved it to the core!EmbarrassedEmbarrassed

I hope gurvinder helps her out! Me waiting for the drama to unfold!EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed

wuwww juuuBig smileBig smileBig smileBig smile
 
and acc to jiu.."over to u!"ROFLROFLROFLROFLROFL
 
moi is waitingAngryAngryAngryAngryAngry

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Posted: 13 June 2011 at 10:23pm | IP Logged
sorry for late  was busy a little

part 33 :

hmmm...loved the initial lines "" ..The concept of time and its pace can rather be subjective than objective as it can never be the same for the two people, no matter if they stayed in opposite parts of the globe or were present in the same room occupying opposite corners""


then i like vicky vry much ... he is such a jovial person ...vry romantic and at the same time serious also ,...!!1

maan toh jealousy main mara ja raha hai...abhi bhi itna gussa hai ...
and then this sick cheap @#%^%$$#$%% arjun agar yeh mujhe mile toh main hi ise maar dalon...and then the song was vry nice i loved aptly suited the situation...tumhe kya prob hai hamesha cliff hanger par chodti ho...!!!!!!!!!!!


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Posted: 13 June 2011 at 10:31pm | IP Logged
part 34
oho maan is the limit ...usne gurvinder ko pakad hi liya...omg

loved the way pinky adi and pammi takes care of her ...

chalo babaji ka shukar hai maan babu ko pata to chala uski shaadi nahi hui hai...ab uske andar ka saara pyar jagega...!!!11

huh yeh brij to hai hi kamina ...kissi ko nahi bakshta ...chalo sonia mata iska aur us arjun ka kaam tamam kar do tab hi hamein shaanti milegi ...!!!!!!!!1

geet bechari ka kya haal ho gaya hai ...chalo her man is to the rescue...par soniaaa...i hate u yaar aise cliff hanger par koi story chodta hai kya...mere toh dimaag main chemical locha ho jayega soch soch kar aage kya hoga >>>>>>>>>>>>>!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



ppplllzzz jaldi nxt part do na i m dying to read wat happens nxt

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Posted: 14 June 2011 at 10:32pm | IP Logged
Gud morning every one

Edited by 20tullip2000 - 15 June 2011 at 1:07am

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Posted: 15 June 2011 at 6:00am | IP Logged
Originally posted by libra25

res
great parts...
still waiting for fireworks..
no truth revealed to maan yet...
plz ab to mujhe us par bhi taras aa  raha hai...

and he is still unaware that geet thinks he is engaged to sameera...
waiting anxiously to see what part b brings...
 
Thanks dearBig smile
yea... coz it was comin in the followin partWinkLOL
 
don't worry... he'll find everythingEmbarrassed
 
Originally posted by luvabbybaby

OMG . . . I SENSE ANGRY KISS COMING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! LOL U PROMISED!!!!!!!!!!!! Could you possibly give an estimate of time? PWEEZ waiting impatiently Big smileWink

Thanks so much!!!!!!!!!!

Love

Liz
 
Hey Liz...
 
yea i know...  and i m plannin to incorporate in the next one... i hope it suits fineConfusedLOL
 
thanks dearEmbarrassed

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