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Ripped Apart ~5~ (Maaneet) teaser ;) pg 130 (Page 121)

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Posted: 12 June 2011 at 12:43am | IP Logged
 dear...Smile
 
 
1stly ...4 PM me hunn...
 
u really done  n
 
...ClapClapClapClap.
 
4 that  to u..Thumbs Up.
 
... ......n really  .Big smileWink...
 
 
  4 donn't comment regular but also late n short.becouse of my exam..Ouch...
 
 
 
 4 ur update tons of  n ..Hug.
again  4 ur update..Big smile..
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lovely FF, great work Clap

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Posted: 12 June 2011 at 1:14pm | IP Logged
hey ...it is really awesome..
luved the part 33 and 34...
maan ko 60 % truth pata chal chuka hai ..rest all his left about arjun and geet parent's were murdered ...

plz...pm me when u will update it next ...Big smile

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he he...so...todays menu...salad / avocado ranch dressing, chicken kabob, rice, humus, coke, and for dessert...caramel apple parfait...Big smile...its Sunday afternoon, lunch time at work...he he...best time to read!! lol...
 
Chapter 33
i had totally forgotten that you'd left off with Gurinder coming to Geet and Maan being all...well...Maan like...ha ha...LOLLOLLOL...i bet its KILLING him!! ClapClap...that prolonged exposure line that Geet said...ha ha...that was too funny...it was awesome!! lol...loved it!! ROFL...i wish Dadi was more like Dadi on the show...not that her concern for Maan is unwarranted...but...after knowing some of what happened...how can she not side with Anu and Vicky? bechari Geet Cry...my hear broke when Maan said "Geet toh Maan ki thi"...Broken Heart...but then when she went off on him...omg...that was beyond awesome!!! i was all sorts of cheering...ha haClapClapClap...oooh!! defiant tears! Shocked...im so gonna steal this line from you!! that was awesome!!! StarStarStar...
 
Chapter 34
i knew it was bound to happen...it was only a matter of time before Maan kicked or attempted to kick someones butt!! bechara Gurvinder phas gaya...Confused...and bechara Adi!! LOL...Maa aur biwi ke beech mein phas gaya...tauba!!! LOLLOLLOL...PInky my luv!! i loved how she told Maan Geet wasnt married...at least someone did!! that was awesome!! been waiting for that for ages!!! EmbarrassedEmbarrassed...im actually giddy now!! ahhH!! "nothign will happen to her"...haye...Knight in Shining Armor syndrome!! of course...he' can pull it off as well!! WinkWinkWink...omg...the part that KILLED me...was when Maan gulped the lump in his throat...his reaction to Geet being in tears...wow!! flawless!!!
 
great updates luv...cant wait for next one!
JAZ
ps: about how i came to read your ff...well...you'd been PMing me...and the title seemed good...but i kept putting it off...but then my coworker told me about it...she uses like three id's so not sure which you'd know...but her name is Raman...once she told me...i read it...
pps: still waiting for a reply to my first SUPER LAMBA comment Tongue
 

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Posted: 12 June 2011 at 7:55pm | IP Logged
good mooorning every one

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Posted: 13 June 2011 at 1:22am | IP Logged
omg! both updates were awesome...

finally maan got to know the truth...

thanks for pm.

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Posted: 13 June 2011 at 9:23am | IP Logged
updateee????????????????

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Posted: 13 June 2011 at 9:35am | IP Logged

Part 33 

 

WHOA!! Double update….so awesome…Love ya Sonia…you're the best!!

 

Okay loved this part….the song sequence was beautiful and so perfect for the situation. So finally Maan is asking the right questions, YES!

 

I love that line that Geet said…what a backbone this girl has…so impressive! Jealous and sad Maan….oh but it's getting good!

 

Arjun….when will he die…can someone strangle him! I hope Maan, Geet and Anu get to slap him…he totally deserves it!

 

Vicky-Sasha….so uber cute and I love the protective nature of Pinky-Adi….Geet in such safe hands!

Hoping for some beautiful Maneet moments and soon!!!!!

 

Excellent work babe…love this FF so much, you always exceed expectations!!!

 

Part 34 

 My favorite line in the whole part: "his insides blazed causing his blood to boil. Responsively, his fingers curled to fists as he fought the urge to tear her apart from that man's hold"…OMFG! His possessiveness over her….me so dead!

 

 

And then the ripped the world apart line….classic!! Loved it!

 

 

 And he knows now…YES!!! So happy more of the truth is coming out…finally!!!

 

Maan crying….OMG…this is getting better and better….so glad this happened…he knows and he regrets!

 

 EMBRACE….YIPPPEEE!!!!! This was one of my most favorite chapters….I'm dead again! Thank you for something good…now she has to spill the truth…I'm so happy!!!!

 

YOU ROCK BABE!!!!!!!

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