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Ripped Apart ~5~ (Maaneet) teaser ;) pg 130 (Page 109)

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Posted: 09 June 2011 at 2:41pm | IP Logged
awesome parts soni... loved it!! lets see wht happens now...

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Posted: 09 June 2011 at 2:46pm | IP Logged
finally the fireworks...we were waiting for...
ohh so the next update probably would be some talk or consoling each other...
i really liked the way how he got to know the truth about her marriage and the rest hopefully geet will tell him...
i am curious to see how will maan react on revelation about arjun and is it going to happen at the time engagement...as you have set the stage for the engagement to take place in mumbai...
two updates was a treat and itni dhamakedar was the icing on the cake...
both the parts were awesome...

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Posted: 09 June 2011 at 2:49pm | IP Logged
Omg! Double update Shocked *jumping wid joy*
wow! Big smile
yippy Party
thanks 4 double dose Embarrassed

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Posted: 09 June 2011 at 2:52pm | IP Logged
so finally it's over. they both know they can trust eachother...aahhh

thank u for a nice update. geet crying in maan's arms was very satisfying. they've been hurting for so long.

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Posted: 09 June 2011 at 2:55pm | IP Logged
I know this will soung rude...but, please please please update another part

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Posted: 09 June 2011 at 2:57pm | IP Logged
thank you sooo much for a super long and a wonderrrful update!

SO maan finally knows!I 

cannot believe How evil Brij is!Shocked... He murdered them himself! his aunt and uncle! Cannot begin to imagine what Geet must be going through right now... the pain of losing her parents, her PARENTS in such a cold and violent manner! 

The mere thought that somebody could have such rancor towards someone you love is terrifying  in itself.. but to actually know that they were successful in their horrible intent and ... god.. I could soo feel her pain and heartbreak.

You wrote this part brilliantly.. Maan and Geet both were restless today though for different reasons, both in their quest for finding their truths..  could feel every accelerated heartbeat, the nervous tension from anticipation.. The shock , of knowing the one thing that turned  their world on its axis.. 

I was also taken by how Sasha picked up on the angst of the lovers, the tension, and felt insecure about her own love, hugged Vicky closer. That was such a natural reaction.

A very well written update, both parts. Please please do update soon.


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cant wait to see maan's reaction
eagerly waiting to read next part

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