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treaser is good..Geet still deniel mod..I hope Maan tell her that he don;t engege..They still love eachother...
waiting for next part..
Originally posted by: basicquestion1
so finally it's over. they both know they can trust eachother...aahhh
thank u for a nice update. geet crying in maan's arms was very satisfying. they've been hurting for so long.
thank you sooo much for a super long and a wonderrrful update!
SO maan finally knows!Icannot believe How evil Brij is!😲... He murdered them himself! his aunt and uncle! Cannot begin to imagine what Geet must be going through right now... the pain of losing her parents, her PARENTS in such a cold and violent manner!The mere thought that somebody could have such rancor towards someone you love is terrifying in itself.. but to actually know that they were successful in their horrible intent and ... god.. I could soo feel her pain and heartbreak.You wrote this part brilliantly.. Maan and Geet both were restless today though for different reasons, both in their quest for finding their truths.. could feel every accelerated heartbeat, the nervous tension from anticipation.. The shock , of knowing the one thing that turned their world on its axis..I was also taken by how Sasha picked up on the angst of the lovers, the tension, and felt insecure about her own love, hugged Vicky closer. That was such a natural reaction.A very well written update, both parts. Please please do update soon.
Originally posted by: millie_maaneet
cant wait to see maan's reaction
eagerly waiting to read next part
thanks😊
just about 13-14 hours of wait sweet pies🤔😆
but surely aaj update karungii😳bery bery good...Hellooo...good morning Ji...How r u today...???😃🤗
Originally posted by: Miss-Riz
Hey awesome updates both updates were really good plz continue soon :)
Originally posted by: Myra.nelly
Great parts!finally he knows she is not married!!continue soon...
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