Originally posted by basicquestion1
so finally it's over. they both know they can trust eachother...aahhh
thank u for a nice update. geet crying in maan's arms was very satisfying. they've been hurting for so long.
the crime is out not the culprit😆
glad u enjoyed... i knw it was sort of a breather
thanks Arzoo😳
Originally posted by ninand
thank you sooo much for a super long and a wonderrrful update!
SO maan finally knows!I
cannot believe How evil Brij is!😲... He murdered them himself! his aunt and uncle! Cannot begin to imagine what Geet must be going through right now... the pain of losing her parents, her PARENTS in such a cold and violent manner!
The mere thought that somebody could have such rancor towards someone you love is terrifying in itself.. but to actually know that they were successful in their horrible intent and ... god.. I could soo feel her pain and heartbreak.
You wrote this part brilliantly.. Maan and Geet both were restless today though for different reasons, both in their quest for finding their truths.. could feel every accelerated heartbeat, the nervous tension from anticipation.. The shock , of knowing the one thing that turned their world on its axis..
I was also taken by how Sasha picked up on the angst of the lovers, the tension, and felt insecure about her own love, hugged Vicky closer. That was such a natural reaction.
A very well written update, both parts. Please please do update soon.
Thanks a bunch Ninand😃
I agree... Brij is a pure evil here... no humanity or relations could stop him for getting what he wanted... so when Geet finds out tht her parents were killed by such a cold blooded monster... she broke and reliving those memories definitely got her on the vulnerable part... and so even though they found what they were seeking for the puzzle is yet to be completed
glad tht u liked Sasha's reactions... at times just its just the realizations of someone else's pain tht catches up to our demons!