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Ripped Apart ~5~ (Maaneet) teaser ;) pg 130 - Page 85

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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing updates!!!! Loved them! Maan finally knows that Geet's not married! Waiting :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!awesome  updates👏  dear...
finally  maan  came  to  know  the  truth🥳🥳...
am  really  happy  n  maan  comforting  geet😳...nice...
jaldi  update  karo  next  part...plz...
looking  fwd...

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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome...update soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
How much ever she convinces herself that they were never meant to be, how much ever she tries to go away from him, she finally understands that no matter how much ever he has hurt her in ignorance, she belongs to him and the much needed consolation to her sorrows, only the warmth of his embrace can provide. Awesome Sonia.
Posted: 12 years ago
First of all i thank you with all my heart for two updates!!
The first part was really heart wrenching!
his pain, her persistence, his jealousy, her not opening up, his misconceptions and her declarations wow! in short it was painful! Visha are really cute. The part where she catches Vicky's hand, showing her insecurities, can anything be much real?
And then Maan getting drunk, or manhandling Gurvinder or anything everything was next to perfect!😳
Not to forget Anu-Arjun-Dadi conversation. I can see truths slowly revealing or setting the stage. Every little scene including Arjun is my favorite now-a-days as it is setting up his destruction!
And then comes the part where Pinky told Maan about Geet's marital status.
I really wonder how you use each and every character of yours!
Even though we know that Geet's parents passed away in an accident which is truly a murder, i didn't expect brij to stoop so low! that was pathetic!
But still i hate Arjun more... no Brij.. actually both! those two are two disgusting people! ugh😡
the last part !! wah!!
i prefer a hug more than a kiss as a hug always comforts you.. and it did! am really glad she hugged him.. hope she opens up and gives him a little hint..and even if it doesn't happen, let them be there together for a while..
those were simply mindblowing updates! please please continue soon!!
Edited by --Shika-- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb part, thanx 4 update
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Posted: 12 years ago
wonderful update, wow finally maan knows that she is not married!
hope that now she will tell everything to him...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved it, yaar Amazing update and thanx for 2 updates back to back and happy to see man knowing at last that geet is not married. plsss update soon dear.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow!!!absolutely astounding update!i can't believe u posted 2 parts!it was so nice of u!the updates were soo much gripping to say the least!atlast maan came to know that she is not married and pirtially realized his mistake,it was soo much relieving.now that arjun needs to be exposed,that bas***d needs to get his full due.thanks again for making ths a pleasure read and thnks sooo much for the pm,u're definitely a star!
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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely... 😊

be it single or double update, we can't get it enough... 😉