thank you sooo much for a super long and a wonderrrful update!
SO maan finally knows!I
cannot believe How evil Brij is!😲... He murdered them himself! his aunt and uncle! Cannot begin to imagine what Geet must be going through right now... the pain of losing her parents, her PARENTS in such a cold and violent manner!
The mere thought that somebody could have such rancor towards someone you love is terrifying in itself.. but to actually know that they were successful in their horrible intent and ... god.. I could soo feel her pain and heartbreak.
You wrote this part brilliantly.. Maan and Geet both were restless today though for different reasons, both in their quest for finding their truths.. could feel every accelerated heartbeat, the nervous tension from anticipation.. The shock , of knowing the one thing that turned their world on its axis..
I was also taken by how Sasha picked up on the angst of the lovers, the tension, and felt insecure about her own love, hugged Vicky closer. That was such a natural reaction.
A very well written update, both parts. Please please do update soon.
Edited by ninand - 12 years ago
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