~CONTACT~THREAD 2//ch-23-A/Updated pg-75(26/8/11) - Page 4

hey khushi...I didn't know abt ur ff...I always enjoy reading ur various posts...& today after reading ur ff I must tell u that u hv a very good writing skill...adding th vm makes it more enjoyable...I really really luved it... waiting fr next update...thnx fr th pm ...I'm gonna start reading ur 1st thread  now...keep writing..😊

Hey Sneha,

4 new thread

Intro is good but why  in past tense?

About the 15 (A) part, loved it.

Geet has reached the final decision. Let's see how long it takes 4 Maan 😉

Sasha back 🤓 means twist

Waiting eagerly though might not be able to comment in time 😳

AMAZING

Congrats 4r new thread. . . . So r they in anykind of relation or not. . . . Ur Msk have a commitment phobiya i guess . . .
This story is going great i jst loved it i know one day he'll take this relation a step ahead. . . . Hope so!!

like the story..

Originally posted by: LadyArwen

loved it very much... Maan does love Geet but he does not know it himself... in the last update whatever he said was actually his confession of love in a positively negative manner... Maan carries an attitude which is harsh from outside just like what he said then but there is a promise to love for eternity in what he said and what he does... a totally grounded human lover who does not know he is an eternal lover neither he belives himself to be... this is true love...

Originally posted by: katterpiller

hey khushi...I didn't know abt ur ff...I always enjoy reading ur various posts...& today after reading ur ff I must tell u that u hv a very good writing skill...adding th vm makes it more enjoyable...I really really luved it... waiting fr next update...thnx fr th pm ...I'm gonna start reading ur 1st thread  now...keep writing..😊

Originally posted by: sldeeps

yar introduction part is nice, plz provide the links for the previous and next parts as well for every part in the previous thread so that we wont be searching for the links all the time.

nice part no doubt in it, i am also confused like Dips - he want her to be with him for the time being and wants to throw away after he comes out of the trance ... this thought is very much disturbing me ... may be this ur story line, i don't want to intervene i just want to follow the way u r narrating.

good going story appears to be gripping looking forward how GEET is going to melt the rock hearted KHURANA saheb.
 

Originally posted by: serenelove

Hey Sneha,

4 new thread

Intro is good but why  in past tense?

About the 15 (A) part, loved it.

Geet has reached the final decision. Let's see how long it takes 4 Maan 😉

Sasha back 🤓 means twist

Waiting eagerly though might not be able to comment in time 😳

Loved the part congrats for the thread