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FF-Eternally Waiting 4 U Update 25 Sept pg 142 (Page 87)

Cute_Gal IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 01 August 2011 at 11:49am | IP Logged
awesome update Aysha.. dis was superb.. loved it.. carry on.. thanx for d

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Posted: 02 August 2011 at 12:56pm | IP Logged

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Deepi20 Goldie

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Posted: 02 August 2011 at 9:03pm | IP Logged
Super awesome update! It was cute to see Abhay jealous about Jay and Piya! Eagerly looking forward to the next update! Continue soon Smile
shivanirajput Goldie

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Posted: 03 August 2011 at 1:46am | IP Logged
hey that was really a nice update
abhay saved pia and she kissed herEmbarrassed thats just gr8
lets see uptil how long abhay can ressist pia
thanks for pm and update soon

-SnowKid- IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 07 August 2011 at 11:14pm | IP Logged
Great part...thnx for d pm
sushups IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 08 August 2011 at 1:10am | IP Logged
i sooo in love it ...sorry no laptop thats why no comment...but once its back i wont give delayed comments so lved it yaaa...and happy friendships day...plzzz update soon...

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crazzy-girl Senior Member

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Posted: 08 August 2011 at 4:07am | IP Logged
it was a really good update...i likedd the way all of venti's mates all stood up for abhay!!! :D :D 

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matwamango IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 09 August 2011 at 12:53pm | IP Logged

:::Precap 15:::Sweet Pain Of Mine:::

Jay tracked the traitor amongst his ranks and made sure he was punished for attacking Pia and exposing their clan to Abhay. Right now the advantage was in their favour and Pia being used as bait was nevr part of the plan. Jay could never hurt her even if he had intended to do so in the past. He'd developed a soft corner in his heart. He'd been stupid enough to fall in love with his job. Never a good combination. They were nearly there. Jay glared inhumanely at Rana for daring do compromise their very existance. Abhay would be searching for the culprit and their necks would be on the line. 

Jay to Rana beating  him up whilst chained to the wall-This is where you'll spend the next few days as your punishment U will have no visitation rights from your pack.
Rana pleaded bloodied up shackled to the chains struggling to move-I had to do something. I smelt his presence. I was ready for him with silver nitrate. I could have easily injected him.
Jay bellows raoaring-Pia was there. An innocent in the crossfire isn't part of this plan.
Rana howled-It hasn't stopped us before.
Jay ran back punching Rana to shut the hell up-My rules. I am the leader of the pack so U will obey me. (Holds his face tightly) Got it! (To the guardian) Make sure he stays put and if he moves put him down permanently.

Soon morning came and Pia woke feeling sore all over. She checked the long mirror in her bathroom to see purplish, bluish bruises appear all over her back and her ribs hurt. Pia rushed to the bathroom cabinet for an aspirin to take away the edge only to realise she was fasting for Abhay. She shut the bathroom draw and took a while getting ready to go to College. Pia kept her pain and the events of last night from her family members. She didn't want to worry them.

Pia had spent most of the morning jotting down notes while Jeh gave Pia a few concerned looks seeing her colour was off. Pia wasn't in the mood to speak to anyone. She was too busy in her own little world with Abhay in her thoughts. Pia was full of questions and no plausible answers. How did Abhay save her? He was always there. Why did she attract danger? She was always in the midst of either being toast or being crushed. Abhay was always there as her shadow protecting her. Why did he display so much hate in front of others? Why was he doing this? He was making her go crazy. 

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