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FF-Eternally Waiting 4 U Update 25 Sept pg 142 (Page 62)

matwamango IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 06 July 2011 at 12:18pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Artemis678

Jay's Mom Hitting On Abhay????. Wow Hehe Thats A First.
Deepanita thinks she can land Abhay into her trap and get him to fess up but she will be a huge flop

Edited by matwamango - 06 July 2011 at 12:19pm

matwamango IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 06 July 2011 at 12:21pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by aamirkhanfan

awesome update...that was one h*ll of a party...too many things but i loved piya knowing that abhay runs in her soul
They are amazing!!!! Their unspoken words are what speaks volume yaar

Sunnipwincessx Goldie

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Posted: 07 July 2011 at 11:39am | IP Logged
Awsome update luved it thnx for the pm cant waite for the next part xx
mangona Senior Member

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Posted: 07 July 2011 at 12:52pm | IP Logged
so who s jk downfall wd u revel his past
karantakiar Goldie

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Posted: 09 July 2011 at 4:56am | IP Logged
amazing nd super part plz cnt soon.
luv u
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Posted: 11 July 2011 at 10:35am | IP Logged
i liked it dear very much 
matwamango IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 11 July 2011 at 2:10pm | IP Logged

:::Precap 11:::The Competition:::

Pia spilt Jay's drink accidently lover her dress cursing under her breath for her clumsiness. It was that stupid guy who'd made her get all frazzled  Abhay Raichand and his many string of merry women. Pia felt like ripping them all apart and hiding Abhay somewhere far where they couldn't reach him. Abhay saw Jay trying to clean Pia's stain with little success. Her face was thunderous and wanted to wipe away all her anxieties but keeping her away from him was the safest option.
Haseena Raichand didn't want to see a distraught Pia so offered to help her out with a few of her gowns that she'd never wear in a million years due to the colour taking her upstairs-There U go Pia! (Places the gown on her bed) Its Alexander McQueen gown designed by Sarah Burton Pia. Lilac isn't my colour and nor is the styling with the pleats and the sparkling belt not to my taste but its very elegant for U. U are into this kind of attire right? I know its not very low cut or very revealing but sometimes less is more.
Pia eyed the gown feeling like a 50's style icon loving the feel of the fabric on her skin-Thanks.

Pia comes downstairs this time her eyes focussed on Abhay's reaction. The guy was playing hard to get with her yet with everyone else he was so easy. Well fine thought Pia i can play this game with U. Venti was her target as she extended her arm for a dance and gladly swayed with him on the floor while Abhay now moved on to her sister. What game was he playing thought Pia? He was now getting groovy with Misha yet stayed miles away from her. Something was black in this picture.

Misha giggled at something Abhay had said like it was funny while Abhay appeared like he was having too much of a good time with Misha as his hands moved very slowly across Misha's shoulder making Pia very jealous. Pia had competition from her own sister forget about Abhay's girlfriend Tina. 

There was a change of partners in the middle of the hall and Pia finally got her shot with Abhay fitting into his strong arms as he moved with her in sync like they've done this a thousand times before only Pia never remembered it. It was so frustrating to feel but not remember. Pia and Abhay got lost in each others eyes as their intensity almost burned each other. Finally the music stopped but Pia and Abhay continued to dance to their own tune lost in each other whole everyone else faded away. Arnab, Misha, Madhoo, Haseena, Chand, Venti, Kabir, Jay, Neel, Panchi and even Deepanita Khurana were taken back by Abhay and Pia's blatant chemistry all applauding snapping the magical moment as Abhay realised what just happened letting go of Pia abruptly.

Abhay found keeping Pia away from him was going to be much harder than he'd anticipated. Their connection was too strong. Pia had still not forgotten him and she'd still clung on to him in her heart. Abhay couldn't do anything supernatural to remove himself from Pia's heart but he could make her loathe him so much that she'd spit on him if he ever walked passed her. Misha's plans might sound a little crazy but she had a point. A sister never exploited another sister for her love and Pia was a giver not a taker.

Edited by matwamango - 12 July 2011 at 2:45pm

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SheDevil IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 11 July 2011 at 2:26pm | IP Logged
wow nice precap.Update soonSmile

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