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Posted: 30 May 2011 at 10:47am | IP Logged
Mikan dear...gud job...M&M's are downright evil...and precap is interesting..update soon sweets

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Posted: 30 May 2011 at 5:46pm | IP Logged
good part. very interesting. update as soon as you can . Smile

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Posted: 31 May 2011 at 2:39am | IP Logged

CHAPTER #8

the 30th day...the last day of the challenge...
 
 
MD stealthily goes into Gunjhun's room...no one inside...searches for the preg reports...finds a file inside the cupboard...steals it...
[in her room]
 MD : (burning the file) everything is over...our love...my faith...n the kid too...(Broken Heart...weeps) it was my fate...but i wont let this ruin Runjhun's life too...
MD sinks down on the floor...cries...CryCryCry
 
[in gunjhun's room]
 
R goes inside their room...opens the almirah...sees the chit in which G had signed the agrrement to the challenge...R takes it out n wonders how hav things gone so wrong...Cry...she keeps it close to her heart n weeps...CryCry
G takes a bath n comes...sees all this...but misinterprets the chit to be abhigyan's letter...
Broken HeartBroken HeartBroken HeartBroken HeartBroken Heart
 
[afternoon...]
 
R, while taking off a suitcase from the top of almirah...slips down the stool n hurts herself...OuchOuch
guddu cums n tries 2 comfrt him...calls out amma...amma...but amma not @ home...Big smilesome pilgrimage progrm wid hr frnz u knw...Big smileWink
 
G puts balm on her feet...and arms...(n probably waist too...Wink)
 
[BG: chalte chalte title song...]
 
{during d song: R pretnds 2 sleep...aur guddu uske pas baith k uske sar par pyaar se hath pherta hai..EmbarrassedEmbarrassed
den @ aftrnun, G brings lunch...but R hs hurt hr right hand...so..EmbarrassedEmbarrassed...guddu usey khana khilata hai...n uski bohot dekh bhaal karta hai..}
 
G sitting in the room...R comes...
 
R: i wanted to say something to you...i hav a last wish...
G: wat is it..???
R: please forgive me...
G staring at R...
 
R: now, how much time wil you take to say "its okay"...???WinkWink
 
G: i was just wondering wat to say...u knw wat, i hav never seen such a shameless girl like you...you haven't committed a mistake...but a sin..!! how could you play with someones emotions..???AngryAngry
 
R: 'YOU' are saying this..?? playing with my amma's emotions is your hobby...not mine...!!Angry
G: oh just shut up...!! you n your amma...have u ever thought of me..?? my emotions..?? you know, you deserve nothing...but hatred...!!!AngryAngry
 
R: (weeps..CryCry) yes...u r absolutely right...it was all my mistake...
i wanted you to transform into a good human...i wanted you to care for my amma...i wanted you to apologise for your mistakes...i wanted you to overpower your anger... but you know wats my biggest mistake..??
"I REALLY WANTED YOU"...
 
G dumbstrcuk...on hearing this...
everything comes to a still...only except the clock...
it strikes TWELVE...the day is over...the CHALLENGE is OVER...!!!
 
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Edited by mikanS - 31 May 2011 at 3:14am

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Posted: 31 May 2011 at 3:25am | IP Logged
Awesomeee part Sanju  Clap Clap Star Star
loved ittt ...Fab work dear Thumbs Up
can't wait for the part  !!!
update sooon Smile

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Posted: 31 May 2011 at 3:38am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -salma-

Awesomeee part Sanju  Clap Clap Star Star
loved ittt ...Fab work dear Thumbs Up
can't wait for the part  !!!
update sooon Smile

thnx a lottt...dear...Heart
i wil try my best 2 make it upto ur expectations...

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Posted: 31 May 2011 at 5:14am | IP Logged
Hi Sanjana wat an update AwwwStarStarStar
Finally the challenge is over.
I guess MD has burnt the divorce papers instead of the pregnancy report.
Really like R's confession.
Plzzz update soon waiting eagerly
 

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Posted: 31 May 2011 at 5:23am | IP Logged
Originally posted by pri01

Hi Sanjana wat an update AwwwStarStarStar
Finally the challenge is over.
I guess MD has burnt the divorce papers instead of the pregnancy report.
Really like R's confession.
Plzzz update soon waiting eagerly
 
 
wat a gues...???? gud...gud...Wink
thnxxx...EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed...for liking...!!

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Posted: 31 May 2011 at 9:07am | IP Logged

Gud job Sanju sweets...the end was excellentClap..eagerly waiting for moreSmile

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