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FF: O re piya... (Page 2)

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Posted: 21 May 2011 at 10:34pm | IP Logged
nice story. update as soon as you can Smile

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thanx a lot, guys...Big smile
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CHAPTER #2
 
R closes her eyes n feels the musical air...G stares at R, steps one by one towards R...
comes closer n closer...
suddenly, R opens her eyes...Shocked
G: wo...ice cream...pighal jayegi (will melt)...
R looks at both d ice creams n gives one of it 2 G...they start eating...
G: this place has some magic in itself...it looks beautiful in day light...but at night, it turns heavenly...
R: hmm...(smilesSmile)
suddenly realises dat sumthing was wrong...the cup from which she was eating, had a crack at the top...it was actually guddu's...
at the same moment, even guddu notices a lipstick mark in a corner of the spoon...he realises dat it was R's...
the cups had interchanged...
R and G: (together..) yeh toh...Shocked...
 
G: wat...?? any probs..??
R: (thinks sumthing n then speaks..) no...nothing...u wanted 2 say sumthing...???
G: nothing...(slightly smiles..)
Day Dreaming
(BG: runjhun's happy tune..)
they continue eating from their cups...the changed ones...
(ewww...Dead // awww...Day Dreaming )
both seem smiling...TongueEmbarrassedTongue
 
[at pandey niwas~~]
 
mamas n mamis as usual at their round table conspiracy on how 2 separate GuNjhun...
 
mahadevi, stil weeping at her fate n regretting 4 not heeding 2 runjhun...
 
amma praying 2 d ram-sita statue..: hey bhagwan, keep my runjhun n guddu this way...happy n loving...4ever...!!!!Smile
 
R & G enter the house... runjhun straight away heads 2 amma's room...tells her about the earing n the place where G took her...amma very happy...blesses her...!!
G: (shouting) arrey...kisi ka daily diary report khatam ho gaya ho toh khana dene ka kasht bhi kar de...!!!! (lol..LOL)
R: cant u speak a li'l politely...lovingly (pyaar se...) to anyone..???
G: pyaar..???
R:Blushing
lolzz..LOLLOL
 
[after dinner, in bedroom...]
G: kukkan said there were many customers at d shop 2day...6 mobiles wer sold...cool na..??
R: hmmm...
G tired...sleeps on bed itself...fast asleep...
R looks at him...and (dilemma)...thinks: i dint really understand u yet...i nevr get 2 know wat u really are...sumtimes, ur so nice, loving, caring...n d next moment u change into an arrogant n sadist guddu shukla...!!!!Ouch
R sits beside him n puts her hand on his head...: kitne pyaare lagte hain...sote huye...Embarrassed
G, in his sleep, holds her hand...puts it under his head n sleeps...
R stirs...then thinks dat he was tired n lets him sleep...n she leans against the side wall...
 
(PRECAP:G sleeping on R's laps...and R's head on G's shoulder...Day Dreaming)


Edited by mikanS - 22 May 2011 at 12:57am

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Posted: 22 May 2011 at 1:25am | IP Logged
That was really lovely continue soon.

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Posted: 22 May 2011 at 2:38am | IP Logged

Nice update Sanjana, like it. Wat a beautiful n peaceful place for a dateEmbarrassed

Precap looks interesting
Update soon yaar

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Posted: 22 May 2011 at 3:28am | IP Logged
sanju yaar awwwesum prt yaar ...
n d precap looks sooo romantic ...
updt sooon plezzz
eagerly waiting

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Posted: 22 May 2011 at 6:34am | IP Logged
oh god...!!!!DeadDead i was geting so bugged up @ home 2day...Wacko so finished up writing 2 more parts...hope u guys like dem...Smile
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CHAPTER #3
 
(morning)
G gets up...finds his head on R's lap n R's head on his shoulder...Day Dreaming...smiles...then suddenly..
G: ohh...dharampatni...utho...kaise soyi ho...sharamLOL naam ki koi chiz hai ya nahi...???(get up...look at d way u r sleeping...dont u hav a li'l bit of decency..??)
R quickly gets up...
R (babbles): errr...wo, kal raat...
G: haan...thik hai...dont waste time now...go n get my breakfast...i hav an urgent work outside 2day...!!!
G leaves 4 bathing...
R seems a bit clueless, but then leaves...
 
(aftr a few hours..)
mamis leave 4 shopping...for marriage...MD says she isnt well n wud go some other day...mamis leave...
now, MD also stealthily leaves 4 hospital 2 get her preg. confirmed...
 
[afternoon]
 
R at kitchen...MD returns...tensed...R enquires...MD, about to tell...Bubbly (kalsanwali's daughter) comes with amma n assembles in her room...as she was getting bored, she thought of doing some masti...Wink
amma, MD, R and bubbly in her room...
passing the parcel...
amma's turn...
amma asked 2 sing...(simply...time pass...)
now, R's turn...
B: runjhun didi, dance karo na...remember, u used 2 dance so nicely before...please...dance, na...
R: me..??? wat if some1 sees me..???
B: stop giving lame excuses...evry1 is out...only we four are there...c'mon dance...pleeease...
R:(sighs..) okay...
MD tensed...gives a half smile...
 
(BG: paheli jaisa saiyyan...of u, me aur hum...Big smile)
 
(till 1:57...in d scene..)
 
R dances...suddenly in between, the other 3 are shocked...scared...ShockedShocked
{lines: chuna bhooton ki haveli jaisa saiyyan...step: turns...}
SHOCKED...both her eyes out...ShockedShockedShocked
Guddu behind...angry...AngryAngryAngryOH NO...!!!OuchDeadOuch
 
(PRECAP: R shocked reading MD's preg. reports...delivered...)


Edited by mikanS - 22 May 2011 at 6:36am

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Posted: 22 May 2011 at 7:25am | IP Logged

CHAPTER 4

G: kya hai yeh sab..??
R: i didnt wanna dance...bubbly forced me...dats y...
G: toh puri duniya mein bus yehi ek gaana mila tha kya..?? (CHOP...lolzz..LOL)
R: ummm...
G: i m hungry...
R: okay...yeah...come down...i shall serve u...
 
[downstairs]
R: (rudely) your lunch...
G: toh meherbaani kar rahi ho kya...????
R: depends on ur mentality...Wink
G: whaat...???
R makes faces at him...about to go...
G: waise dance achha kar leti ho...(smiles)
R: (smiles) sach...????
G: no...jhooth...!!!!Angry
R smiles...door bell rings...
R: i'll open...
MD's reports...R opens them...reads...meanwhile G finishes lunch n goes...
R shocked at the positiv report...n more shockingly the name of the patient..." Runjhun"...ShockedShocked
(OMG...heartattack...DeadShockedOuchDead)
AngryAngryAngry
 
MD enters...
MD: sorry Runjhun...i was about to tell u...
slap...thaaadh...OuchDead
R gives a tight slap on MD's face...Ouch
R: how dare u...???AngryAngry
 
MD cries n tells evrything 2 R...
R feels helpless...
suddenly amma n the 3 mamis pop up in the room...they see the reports n mistake it 2 be runjhun's...amma highly delighted...Big smile
 
(evening)
G enters...puzzled to find the whole new weird look of the family...
G: amma, any special occasion 2day...???Confused
amma: yeah...obviously...come, sit beside Runjhun...
R sits with her eyes down...
G still more confused...ConfusedConfused
 
amma: (putting tilak on G's forehead...prays..) may u live long...may this child bring happiness n fortune in ur life...
G: who's child, amma...???Confused... achha bubbly...???Smile
amma: no dear...ur child... runjhun maa banne wali hai...Big smile
Guddu thunderstruck...Shocked
G: whaaat...????Shocked (looks at R...R looks down...then G making an angry expression, heads 2wards the room...)
amma: arrey, sharma gaya...
vishnu pandey: guddu, "sharma gaya"...????Shocked
amma: guddu ab badal chuka hai... u people can never think straight...!!!Angry
(uh-oh...poor guddu...!!! lolzz..LOL)
 
[after a while...]
R enters the room...
G: (angrily) wats all this non sense..??
R: sab kuchh itna achanak hua ki...
G: shut up...i havent touched u ever...then from where did this child come...???...i had never imagined that u could fall down 2 such an extent...Angry
R: (angry..) wait...wait... now u'll ask me 2 giv a medical test, to prove whether this is ur child or not...isnt it...????ShockedShocked
G: "NO"...!!!! i'll ask u dat wats the need to lie to such an extent to make amma happy...???? why did u give dat poor woman a false hope...???
n by the way, how could u even think dat i'll force u for a medical test...??? as far as i know u, u can never do anything wrong, like that u can never betray any1...i trust u, runjhun...i trust u 4 that...
 
R gets carried away...she compares G with abhigyan...n realises how lucky, she is...
A tiny drop rolls down R's cheek...CryCry
 
...to be continued


Edited by mikanS - 22 May 2011 at 7:25am

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Posted: 22 May 2011 at 7:27am | IP Logged
ohhh sanju jaaaniii ...
luv u 4 d treat yaar ...
2 chp in 1 day ...wow ...
awwwesum prt yaar ..
n d song was tooo good ...ohhh god d lat line of d song n guddu cums ...Shocked super coool yaar ..cant wait to know guddus reaction ...
updt sooon plezzz
 intrstin...precap ...
 
ok... let me change my comment ...frm
2 cap now 3 in 1 day ...wooow ...
luv u this super surprise yaar ..Hug
it was a cute  prt ...but then now this misunderstandin ...evry1 think RJ preggy ...
thank GOD guudu dint misunderstand RJ...
updt sooon plezzz now it getting damn intrstin


Edited by tehzeeb25 - 22 May 2011 at 8:13am

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