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Posted: 12 June 2011 at 11:37pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by desisweetheart9

nice part.  looks like Runjhun is going to get some good training. update as soon as you can Smile
 
 
thnx desi...Hug
would try updatin' soon...EmbarrassedEmbarrassed


Edited by mikanS - 13 June 2011 at 1:55am

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Posted: 12 June 2011 at 11:40pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by niya2121

Wowww...what an awesome fanfic yaarBig smileBig smileBig smileBig smile
 
Truly all the chapters are simply fantastic, well thought and creative. I adore the dialogues but I admit since I don't know Hindi I made my friend read and translate it and now she's also hooked... I've been absent from the forum for awhile but honestly coming back and reading this beautifully written FF was such a wonderful gift and pleasure. So Thank you SanjuBig smileBig smileBig smile
 
As for the precap/promo...I was like "Yeah he said I love you Embarrassed" but then when Rj falls I was like ohhh noooCryCryCry hehe alll in all plz do update soon
 
arrey...Guddu standing on railing... why will Runjhun fall?????ShockedShockedShocked
okay...lemme make it clear... Guddu falls down the terace...n you see how...???
i will update it today itself...CryCryCry
sorry... for the misunderstanding...!!!!LOLLOL
nehow, thanx a lot...for liking it...!!!


Edited by mikanS - 13 June 2011 at 1:54am
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Posted: 12 June 2011 at 11:42pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by munam_13

itna achcha update deke u giv us that precap????? that too of 25th part?? kyun sanju kyun?? *sniffs*

Ab jaldi jaldi post the next part me waiting Big smile
 
chill...even i couldn't wait till 25th part...so, would write it in my 23rd part itself...Silly
nehow, thanx for liking...!!Embarrassed
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CHAPTER #20

 
 
[Next morning]

On the breakfast table...all the guys sitting...the women bring the food...

Inder: guddu bhaiya, i had given your proposal to my boss n he was so impressed that he wants to meet you... Clap

Dad ji: arey wah..yeh toh bohot achhi baat hai...guddu beta, if u r free today, then go n meet him...

Guddu agrees...

He goes in his room & finds a new formal dress on the bed...Runjhun already present in the room...dusting up things...n humming a song...

Guddu: who has kept it here..??

Runjhun avoids him.. Sleepy

Guddu: (angrily) tumne rakkha?? Angry

Runjhun still doesnt response...continues humming... Sleepy

Guddu: tumse baat kar rahe hain, runjhun...yeh tumne rakkhi hai..?? Angry

Runjhun: i guess bebey ne rakkhi hai...mujhe kya padi hai yeh sab faltu kaam karne ki..?? Confused

Guddu: Tum bebey ki kaam ko faltu bol rahi ho?? Shocked

Runjhun: aapke liye koi kaam karna faltu hi hai... Angry

Runjhun starts leaving...Guddu holds her hand tightly... Ouch

Guddu: tum shayad bhool gayi ho ki kisse baat kar rahi ho... AngryAngry

Runjhun: ek badtamiz aur unromantic aadmi se jiska naam hai Guddu... Angry

Guddu: ...Shukla...mind it...!! Hum Kannauj ke raja harshwardhan dwitiya hain... So, mind it..!! AngryAngry

Runjhun: yeh Delhi hai...yahan har gali mein ek-ek Harshwardhan dikhte hain... Ouch

Guddu: (angrily shouts) RUNJHUN... AngryAngryAngry

Runjhun: (shooing away his hand) ...Shukla...mind it..!! Hum aapki patni hain...so, mind it..!! LOLLOLLOL

Guddu gapes at her...Shocked N she leaves...

ClapClapClap
Guddu: waise toh muh bandh rakhti hai...Confusedpar kholti hai toh kitna bada muh kholti hai...(looks scared like never before)

Runjhun goes into the kitchen...sweating... ConfusedConfused

Bebey, Rajni & Payal come there...n start clapping... ClapClap

Bebey: tera future bada changa dikh raha hai, puttar... EmbarrassedEmbarrassed

Runjhun: unki kya hawa nikaalti...meri khud ki hawa nikal rahi thi, unke saamne... Dead

Rajni: par ek baat toh maanni padegi...you rock!!! StarStarStarStarStar

Runjhun smiles...then drinks some water n takes rest... Wacko

After some time...

Inder: bhaiya, ho gaya..??

Runjhun: inder bhaiya...

Inder: chill bhabhi...dont worry...

Runjhun goes back to kitchen...

Guddu comes out...

Runjhun (to mom ji): main inhe dahi khila ke aati hun...

Bebey: khabardaar yahan se hili bhi toh... Wo khud tujhse maangega... Angry

Runjhun: bebey... Embarrassed

Bebey: chup kar...bebey ki bachchi...khadi reh idhar... Angry

Guddu: (goes in the kitchen to seek blessings from elders) bebey, aashirwad do...

Bebey: jeeta reh puttar... Big smile

Guddu: bebey, wo bahar jaane se pehle humari aama kehti hai, ki dahi khani chahiye...

Bebey: haan toh tujhe kiske haath se khaani hai...

Guddu: kya?? Yeh kaisa sawaal hai...??

Bebey: bada aasaan sa sawaal hai tujhe kiske haath se dahi khaani hai...ab dekh, Rajni toh tujhe khila nai sakti...haath kaapte hai, na...buddhi ho gayi hai bechari...main khila deti, par Rajni ko lagega ki tu mujhe usse zyada pasand karta hai...Payal ki haath mein choth lagi hai...ab kya karein...

Guddu: dahi ko shubh maante hai...koi bhi khilaye, kya fark padta hai...

Bebey: toh Guddu ki madam "koi bhi" khila do isey... Party

Runjhun happy...but when Guddu looks at her, she makes a frustrated face...

Guddu about to leave...

Runjhun: sambhal ke jaana...

Guddu: kyun kuchh ho gaya toh kya hoga??

Runjhun (crosses her finger behind) kya hoga matlab?? Main apni baaki ki zindagi safed sari aur bina make-up ke nahi ghoomna chahti..!! AngryAngryAngry

Guddu frowns n leaves...

Bebey: chal meri sherni...shaam ke liye rehersal karte hain..!! LOLLOL

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CHAPTER #21

 
 
 
[evening]

Guddu returns with Inder...Guddu looks a bit disappointed...bcoz of which Runjhun gets scared...Inder looked very happy...he gave sweets to everyone...

Dad ji: pehle yeh toh bata, ki kya bola boss ne?? ConfusedConfused

Inder: arey dad ji...he was so impressed by bhaiya's repartee (quick & witty replies) that he offered him the post of astt. exports manager..temporary...till he finishes his crash course of management...n gets a fluent spoken english...the course is expected to get over in 6months... ClapClap

Dad ji: arey bilkul aamir bete ki tarah tu bhi phata phat seekh ja... Cool

Inder: aamir koun?? Aamir khan?? Shocked

Dad ji: phir??? Ghajini ke liye usko bhi to body banani padhi thi, na...he was so tensed...i said- beta u have the potential...u can do it...he got encouraged...n when ghajini was a hit, he... Cool

Bebey: o bandh kar apni bakwas... AngryAngryAngry

Dad ji: arey...aamir really mere bete jaisa hai... Shocked

Bebey: haan, aur Dilip Kumar mera baap hai..LOL..tu chup kar...!!! (to guddu) tu jaa ke fresh ho ja, puttar... Big smile

Guddu nods...

Runjhun goes behind him...

Runjhun: aap bilkul chinta mat kijiye...6 months bohot hota hai...

Guddu (holds her & gives her a jerk) samajti kya ho tum khud ko..?? Kya zaroorat thi, inder ko sab batane ki..?? Tumne toh usse yeh bhi bata diya hoga ki mujhe kyun rusticate kiya tha... AngryAngry

Runjhun (weeps): nahi... Cry

Guddu: oh shut up...(leaves her)..look, dont get on my nerve, m warning u...Inder shariff hai, thats why he didnt say it in details...u are just useless...

Runjhun (cries): meri baat toh... CryCry

Guddu: shut up, i say...AngryAngry

Guddu leaves n goes to the terace...

Inder comes...

Inder: bhaiya, r u fine?? Bcoz, i heard u shouting...

Guddu: kuchh nahi...m fine.. Stern Smile

Inder: bhaiya, aap bohot lucky hain...bhabhi ne mujhe bus itna kaha ki due to personal matter, u couldnt complete your graduation...par agar us jagah Payal bhabhi hoti toh wo sab kuchh details mein chilla chilla ke batati...that too adding some more spices...Runjhun bhabhi is very trust worthy...dont go for my words...ask your own heart...what does it say???...u shouldnt have done this...bhaiya..!!

Inder leaves...

Guddu regrets...

Goes back to the room...Runjhun crying... CryCry

Guddu: itne saare aansu..??...Delhi mein flood lana hai kya... Wink

Runjhun turns her face... Angry

Guddu: tumne pehle kyun nahi bataya..?? Embarrassed

Runjhun (shouts in crying voice): mouka diya, batane ka?? AngryAngry

Guddu: (boldly) achha sorry... Approve

Runjhun: meherbaani kar rahe hain humpe??? Aise bolte hain sorry..?? AngryAngry

Guddu: dekho, humne sorry bol diya...tum bhi maaf kar do...bus baat khatam..!!

Runjhun: ek kaam karna, kisi din gusse mein aake humein maar daalna...phir gussa thanda ho jaye, toh humari laash ke saamne jaake sorry bol dena...bus baat khatam..!!

AngryAngryAngryAngry
Runjhun leaves...

Guddu: arey...ruko...Runjhun...

Guddu (sits on the bed): itna kyun naraaz hoti hai..??

Runjhun in kitchen...working...Bebey & Mom ji staring at her angrily...

Runjhun: bebey... Unhappy

Bebey: mar gayi teri bebey... Angry

Runjhun: kya...kuchh bhi bolti ho...!! ShockedShockedShocked

Rajni: phir, aur kya bolein..?? Poore script mein kahin bhi yeh likha tha ki tu uske peeche peeche bhagegi?? AngryAngryAngry

Runjhun: toh improvise naam ki bhi toh koi cheez hoti hai na mom ji...(hugs them both) sorry.. sorry... sorry... sorry... EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed

Bebey: achha theek hai..!! Big smile

Runjhun (winks): thank u... Embarrassed

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CHAPTER #22

 
 
 
next day..

[at breakfast table]

Karan, Inder n Guddu sitting...cookie n goldy rush in...on Guddu... OuchOuchOuch

Guddu: arrreyyy...aankhen di hai, nai di bhagwan ne... AngryAngryAngry

Karan: aur kya..?? teen raaton se pareshan kar rakkha hai mujhe, in naalayakon ne... AngryAngryAngry

Cookie: aj chouthi raat hogi, daddy... Evil Smile

Karan: arey nai nai beta..CryCry..main toh yun hi gappe kar raha tha...arey, Guddu...mere bachhe toh itne laayak hain..baaki bachhe dusron ki gadi ke tyres puncture karte hain...mere bachhe toh meri hi gadi ke tyre puncture karte hain... OuchOuchOuch

Goldy: wo apni english ki nakchadi teacher bolti hai- "charity begins at home"...toh aap mechanic ko bulate ho...hui na, charity at home..!! WinkWinkWink

Guddu: par karan bhaiya, ek baat toh hai...bohot bright future hai in dono ka... LOL

Runjhun comes with plates...

Payal buttering the slices...

Guddu: by the way, aj khaane mein kya bana hai??

Cookie: jootey.. Angry

Guddu: kya??

Cookie: paav...bread, in english... OuchOuchOuch...humein bhagwan ne aakhen di hai...AngryAngry

Payal comes n slaps her... with her buttery palm...

Payal: yeh tareeka hota hai baat karne ka..?? AngryAngry

Cookie takes a piece of bread...wipes her cheek... Dead

Cookie: yeh tareeka hota hai maarne ka..?? AngryAngry

...n starts eating it... DeadDead

Every1 makes a yuckieDead face at her...she leaves...Goldy also takes a slice n leaves...

Payal: badtameez kahin ke...!! Angry

Guddu: jaane do, na...bhabhi...bachhe hain...

All of them start eating...

[Afternoon]

Guddu pareshan...Runjhun not speaking to him...

Guddu: hey bhagwan, koi toh aisa ho jo meri madad kare...m getting so damn pissed..!!

Guddu thinks n thinks...n gets an idea...

Next scene...on terace...Guddu, Goldy n Cookie...

Goldy: jaldi bolo...time nai hai...

Guddu: mujhe madad chahiye...

Goldy: guddu chachu, hum koi gair-kanooni kaam nai karenge...pehle hi bol rahe hain... WinkWink

Guddu: mujhe Runjhun ko manaana hai...

Cookie: poori baat batao...tab sochenge... Cool

Guddu tells them...

Cookie: bus itni si baat??...chill...main plan batati hun...

She tells a plan...

Guddu: itna risk?? Ek kaam karunga...pehle kood jaunga, phir zinda bacha, toh bol dunga..!! EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed

Cookie: aur nai bacha toh, bhoot banke idhar ghar mein ghoomega..!! Nahi baba nahi...pehle bolne ka, phir koodne ka... ShockedShockedShocked

Guddu: it will work, na?? ShockedShocked

Cookie: (in munnabhai type tone) are-e...mamu...tension nai lene ka!! Cool

Guddu: mamu..?? Par abhi abhi toh chachu bulaye the, na mujhe..?? ConfusedConfused

Cookie: yeh kitna pakata hai...bhagwaan... Runjhun chachi ka toh patience ka board exam liya rahega..!! AngryAngryAngry

Guddu: okay fine...ab aur nai pakaaunga... Tum log jaake sab arrangements karo... I would reherse my scenes..!! Embarrassed

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CHAPTER #23

HeartHeartHeartHeartHeart
 
 
[evening]

every1 out for the ancestral temple...except Guddu n Runjhun..(cookie, goldy n bebey also)

Runjhun reading a novel...suddenly hears a music playing upstairs...

[BG:

Ruth naa jana, tumse kahun to..

Main in aankhon mein jo rahun to..] EmbarrassedEmbarrassed

A happy Runjhun climbs up stairs...to the terace...rose petals on floor...she looks up...Guddu standing on railing... Shocked

The song is still goin on... Heart

Guddu: I Love You Runjhun... Heart

Runjhun (to herself) i waited for this moment for ages together... Day Dreaming

(to Guddu) thank u... Embarrassed

N suddenly Guddu falls back...down the building...

Runjhun screams: GUDDUJI... ShockedShockedShocked

Runjhun frightened runs towards the edge...looks down...shocked...then frowns like anything... AngryAngryAngryAngry

Guddu lay on a bungee kinda thing...winking at her... Wink

LOLLOLLOLLOL
 
Runjhun (smiles): i hate you..!! EmbarrassedEmbarrassed

Then turns back n laughs...Guddu comes up...both stand close to each other...

Suddenly, it thunders...

Runjhun scared...hugs Guddu (1st time in my FF)... Heart

Guddu: hmm...toh, do u love me?? Embarrassed

Runjhun steps back : ek ladki apna poora family chhod ke aapke saath yahan bhaag ke aa gayi, aap neeche koode toh she got worried, a girl hugged u when heard thunder...abhi bhi batana padega??...u dont understand?? AngryAngryAngry

Guddu: i understood something but not sure whether its true... Embarrassed

Runjhun (blushes): its true..!! Blushing

Guddu: so, u admit, that u are "darrpok" ...LOLLOLLOL

Runjhun: darrpok??? Angry

Guddu: yeah...the three cases u mentioned...in the 1st one, u were scared of M & Ms...2nd one, u were scared of my separation...3rd one, u were scared of thunder...so, u are a darrpok...isn't it?? WinkWinkWink

Runjhun turns other side...Guddu goes near her n kisses (1st time in my FF) her on cheek... Day Dreaming

Runjhun looks at him...n kisses him on his cheek... Blushing

Bebey, goldy n cookie clap... ClapClapClap

 
 
 
 
 
...to be continued

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Sanju...it was fab...Guddu ki to hawa hi nikal gayi...ye sherni kam thi jo ab plannners bhi ghus gayi hain...it was hilarious but where is kukkan ji...yaar uske liye bhi koi lao na...update soonSmile

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