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FF: O re piya... (Page 14)

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Posted: 09 June 2011 at 7:57am | IP Logged
ROFLHaste haste pet me dard ho gaya...Ram aur Lakshman magar Meghnad (kukkan) Kaise Ramsena me ghus gaya...Sanju...I became fan of your comic timing...please update soon...ROFL

Edited by sur001 - 09 June 2011 at 8:22am

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Posted: 10 June 2011 at 12:30am | IP Logged
Originally posted by rshree1182

Nice FF dear...pls continue writing..
 
thanx...Big smile
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Posted: 10 June 2011 at 12:32am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sur001

ROFLHaste haste pet me dard ho gaya...Ram aur Lakshman magar Meghnad (kukkan) Kaise Ramsena me ghus gaya...Sanju...I became fan of your comic timing...please update soon...ROFL
 
LOL...thnks...gues wat my admission procedures will start soon so i need to finish off the FF asap...!!! hope i finish on a good note...Confused
anyways thanx to all who liked my FF...Big smileBig smileBig smile

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Posted: 10 June 2011 at 12:43am | IP Logged

CHAPTER #16

 
 
Rajju pandey speaks to a person kinda his business partner n tells them that Gunjhun coming to Delhi n asks to keep the house ready...

[In the bus]

Kukkan had already occupied a seat...

Guddu looks at Runjhun... Embarrassed

Runjhun: i wanna sit alone.. Wink

Guddu: bus tumhare baap ka nahi hai.. Angry

A man in pink shirt: can i sit, ma'am..?? EmbarrassedEmbarrassed

Runjhun: yeah sure..!! Big smileBig smile

Guddu frowns...about to leave... AngryAngry

Runjhun coughs... Wink

Guddu: (worried) want water..?? Shocked

Runjhun: spill it on yourself, my cough will go... LOL

Guddu: huh?? Confused

Runjhun: aap jal rahe hai na..?? WinkWink

Guddu: (shouts) hum kannauj ke raja harshwardhan part 2 hain... StarStar

Runjhun: terms and conditions apply... LOLLOL

Guddu: mazak uda rahi ho?? Angry

Runjhun: wo bhi batana padega..?? Embarrassed

Guddu: get lost... Angry

Guddu leaves...

The man in pink shirt: aapko get lost bolke, khud hi chala gaya..!! LOLLOL

Guddu: o gulabboLOL, tujhe bola...chal phut... Angry

He kicks the man off...n sits...

ClapClapClapClap
 
Runjhun had to sit beside Guddu...

The bus leaves...

Runjhun angry with Guddu...simply, bcoz she likes to get angry...so, even Guddu starts showing off...avoids RJ... Ouch

Runjhun feels sleepy...starts to doze...and keeps her head on Guddu's shoulder... Day Dreaming

Guddu stirs... Embarrassed

[BG: jashne bahaara..of Jodhaa Akbar...Heart ]

 

Guddu smiles...Embarrassedso does Runjhun...Embarrassedin her dream...she dreams of Gunjhun moments... Day DreamingDay Dreaming

Kukkan loves them together...so, he is also happy... Big smile

Suddenly kukkan's mobile rings... Ouch

Billo: aapki yaad aa rahi thi..toh humne Jhabbuwa ke cell phone se aapka number chura liya...Ouch

Kukkan: (out of his lovely Gunjhun scene) koun?? Shocked

Billo: hum Billo hain... Embarrassed

Kukkan feels helpless.. Dead

Billo: waise hum abhi mobile centre ke saamne khade khade, family planning kar rahe the..."hum do, humare do"...hum apne bachcho ka naam kya rakhenge... EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed

Kukkan: (irritated) Bukkan aur Killo..!!Day Dreaming Khush..??(puzzled)...by the way, wat r u doin outside the shop?? Angry

Billo: i have stolen all my jewelleries n money...we'll elope today itself... Ouch

Kukkan: (giggles) tau, ive already eloped.. LOLLOL

Billo: without me???...akele akele kaise elope, kukkan ji..?? CryCry

Kukkan stops giggling...(thinks hard n says): do one thing...u stay at pandey niwas, for the time being...i m outa station for an urgent work...alr8?? ConfusedConfused

Keeps the phone...

Kukkan: what do i do now..?? (tensed) yeh toh peechhe hi padh gayi...!! i will have to exchange this simcard... CryCry

[Next morning]

Buntu & Vishnu's professions running into great loss... They search for Gunjhun but in vain...Jhabbu more angry at this... Mahadevi gets a discharge...but surprisingly to all, Rajju did not lose anything... M & Ms confused at this... DeadDead

[In MD's room]

Jhabbu shouting at mahadevi for spoiling his plans..

Jhabbu: bcoz of you i lost another chance of ruining runjhun's life...

Maha: she is my sis, remember that...u can be ungrateful to her but i love my sis n bro-in-law...so shut up..!! Angry

Jhabbu: she had slapped me...i can never forget that...she will have to pay for it... Angry

Maha gives a tight slap on his face... OuchOuchOuch

Maha: now take a revenge on me too...what will u do..??..kill me??...i dont mind...bcoz i have been living like a dead ever since i met you...you have spoilt my life...i know you dont love me...nor will you ever do...but I lost my child bcoz of you...realise that, Jhabbu... CryCryCry

Jhabbu stands quite.. Ouch

Maha: you said you love your guddu bhaiya...isnt it?? This is how u love him...u wanna destroy his life, his wife..?? Girte girte itne gir gaye aap..??? AngryAngry

This line goes round Jhabbu's head n he gets flashbacks of Guddu pampering him, hugging him...Runjhun bringing food for him...smiling with him...worried for him when she hears that he was sick... DisapproveDisapprove

Jhabbu: today, i realise why bhaiya preferred Kukkan over me...bcoz i m not worthy of it...kukkan deserved it...i never understood bhaiya-bhabhi...i m sorry...(weeps)...this time it was real...he had actually realised his mistakes... CryCry

Jhabbu: i will never be able to get bhaiya's love back...but would keep his dignity alive...by running his mobile centre successfully... Stern Smile

On the other hand, Rajju Pandey calls Gunjhun...they reached delhi...rajju gave them the address...

They reach the house...Guddu rings the bell, an old lady comes n hits him hard with her walking stick, right over his shoulder,

OuchOuchOuchthinking he was a robber..!! CryCryCry

[PRECAP: house on rent...owners of the house complete namunas...LOL]



Edited by mikanS - 10 June 2011 at 12:49am

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Posted: 10 June 2011 at 2:30am | IP Logged
sanju yaaar
awwwesum prt yaar ...
amazing ...
hilarious...
gunjun fight was just tooo cute ...
precap looks gr888
updt sooon plezzz

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Posted: 10 June 2011 at 2:35am | IP Logged
Originally posted by tehzeeb25

sanju yaaar
awwwesum prt yaar ...
amazing ...
hilarious...
gunjun fight was just tooo cute ...
precap looks gr888
updt sooon plezzz
 
thanx yaar...Big smile
 
i m looking forward to finish the FF within a week's time...due to my admission procedures...n after that i'll be busy with my work...by july...no time...Disapprove
i hope i finish it on a good note...!!Wink
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Posted: 10 June 2011 at 3:33am | IP Logged
Great update Sanju
Enjoy Gunjhun scenes
Bechara Kukkan kahan paas gayaLOL
Precap sounds interesting
Updt soon n thx u
 

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Posted: 10 June 2011 at 4:44am | IP Logged
awesome part sanju... loved the gunjhun part a lot.. guddu loves her mano ya na mano LOL

now billo has gone mad !!!! bechara kukkan!!!!

Jabbo is a good guy now! wow! waiting for the next part Smile

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