Posted: 12 years ago
itna achcha update deke u giv us that precap????? that too of 25th part?? kyun sanju kyun?? *sniffs*

Ab jaldi jaldi post the next part me waiting πŸ˜ƒ
Posted: 12 years ago

promo reminds me of Choti Bahu(season 1)'s theme song...

"Aadhi Aadhi Meri Saari Khushi"
Posted: 12 years ago
Guddua ka screw dhila ho gaya hai to screw mat lana...wu sab bekar hai...hammer hi ab kuych kar sakat hai...Ka promo hai bascha khucha jaan nikal liya...update soon SanjuπŸ˜ŠπŸ€— 
Posted: 12 years ago
nice part.  looks like Runjhun is going to get some good training. update as soon as you can 😊
Posted: 12 years ago
Wowww...what an awesome fanfic yaarπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ
 
Truly all the chapters are simply fantastic, well thought and creative. I adore the dialogues but I admit since I don't know Hindi I made my friend read and translate it and now she's also hooked... I've been absent from the forum for awhile but honestly coming back and reading this beautifully written FF was such a wonderful gift and pleasure. So Thank you SanjuπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ
 
As for the precap/promo...I was like "Yeah he said I love you 😳" but then when Rj falls I was like ohhh nooo😭😭😭 hehe alll in all plz do update soon
Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by desisweetheart9


nice part.  looks like Runjhun is going to get some good training. update as soon as you can 😊
 
 
thnx desi...πŸ€—
would try updatin' soon...😳😳
Edited by mikanS - 12 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by niya2121


Wowww...what an awesome fanfic yaarπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ
 
Truly all the chapters are simply fantastic, well thought and creative. I adore the dialogues but I admit since I don't know Hindi I made my friend read and translate it and now she's also hooked... I've been absent from the forum for awhile but honestly coming back and reading this beautifully written FF was such a wonderful gift and pleasure. So Thank you SanjuπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ
 
As for the precap/promo...I was like "Yeah he said I love you 😳" but then when Rj falls I was like ohhh nooo😭😭😭 hehe alll in all plz do update soon
 
arrey...Guddu standing on railing... why will Runjhun fall?????😲😲😲
okay...lemme make it clear... Guddu falls down the terace...n you see how...???
i will update it today itself...😭😭😭
sorry... for the misunderstanding...!!!!πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
nehow, thanx a lot...for liking it...!!!
Edited by mikanS - 12 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by munam_13


itna achcha update deke u giv us that precap????? that too of 25th part?? kyun sanju kyun?? *sniffs*

Ab jaldi jaldi post the next part me waiting πŸ˜ƒ
 
chill...even i couldn't wait till 25th part...so, would write it in my 23rd part itself...πŸ€ͺ
nehow, thanx for liking...!!😳
Posted: 12 years ago

CHAPTER #20

 
 
[Next morning]

On the breakfast table...all the guys sitting...the women bring the food...

Inder: guddu bhaiya, i had given your proposal to my boss n he was so impressed that he wants to meet you... πŸ‘

Dad ji: arey wah..yeh toh bohot achhi baat hai...guddu beta, if u r free today, then go n meet him...

Guddu agrees...

He goes in his room & finds a new formal dress on the bed...Runjhun already present in the room...dusting up things...n humming a song...

Guddu: who has kept it here..??

Runjhun avoids him.. πŸ₯±

Guddu: (angrily) tumne rakkha?? 😑

Runjhun still doesnt response...continues humming... πŸ₯±

Guddu: tumse baat kar rahe hain, runjhun...yeh tumne rakkhi hai..?? 😑

Runjhun: i guess bebey ne rakkhi hai...mujhe kya padi hai yeh sab faltu kaam karne ki..?? πŸ˜•

Guddu: Tum bebey ki kaam ko faltu bol rahi ho?? 😲

Runjhun: aapke liye koi kaam karna faltu hi hai... 😑

Runjhun starts leaving...Guddu holds her hand tightly...

Guddu: tum shayad bhool gayi ho ki kisse baat kar rahi ho... 😑😑

Runjhun: ek badtamiz aur unromantic aadmi se jiska naam hai Guddu... 😑

Guddu: ...Shukla...mind it...!! Hum Kannauj ke raja harshwardhan dwitiya hain... So, mind it..!! 😑😑

Runjhun: yeh Delhi hai...yahan har gali mein ek-ek Harshwardhan dikhte hain...

Guddu: (angrily shouts) RUNJHUN... 😑😑😑

Runjhun: (shooing away his hand) ...Shukla...mind it..!! Hum aapki patni hain...so, mind it..!! πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

Guddu gapes at her...😲 N she leaves...

πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘
Guddu: waise toh muh bandh rakhti hai...πŸ˜•par kholti hai toh kitna bada muh kholti hai...(looks scared like never before)

Runjhun goes into the kitchen...sweating... πŸ˜•πŸ˜•

Bebey, Rajni & Payal come there...n start clapping... πŸ‘πŸ‘

Bebey: tera future bada changa dikh raha hai, puttar... 😳😳

Runjhun: unki kya hawa nikaalti...meri khud ki hawa nikal rahi thi, unke saamne... 🀒

Rajni: par ek baat toh maanni padegi...you rock!!! ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Runjhun smiles...then drinks some water n takes rest...

After some time...

Inder: bhaiya, ho gaya..??

Runjhun: inder bhaiya...

Inder: chill bhabhi...dont worry...

Runjhun goes back to kitchen...

Guddu comes out...

Runjhun (to mom ji): main inhe dahi khila ke aati hun...

Bebey: khabardaar yahan se hili bhi toh... Wo khud tujhse maangega... 😑

Runjhun: bebey... 😳

Bebey: chup kar...bebey ki bachchi...khadi reh idhar... 😑

Guddu: (goes in the kitchen to seek blessings from elders) bebey, aashirwad do...

Bebey: jeeta reh puttar... πŸ˜ƒ

Guddu: bebey, wo bahar jaane se pehle humari aama kehti hai, ki dahi khani chahiye...

Bebey: haan toh tujhe kiske haath se khaani hai...

Guddu: kya?? Yeh kaisa sawaal hai...??

Bebey: bada aasaan sa sawaal hai tujhe kiske haath se dahi khaani hai...ab dekh, Rajni toh tujhe khila nai sakti...haath kaapte hai, na...buddhi ho gayi hai bechari...main khila deti, par Rajni ko lagega ki tu mujhe usse zyada pasand karta hai...Payal ki haath mein choth lagi hai...ab kya karein...

Guddu: dahi ko shubh maante hai...koi bhi khilaye, kya fark padta hai...

Bebey: toh Guddu ki madam "koi bhi" khila do isey... πŸ₯³

Runjhun happy...but when Guddu looks at her, she makes a frustrated face...

Guddu about to leave...

Runjhun: sambhal ke jaana...

Guddu: kyun kuchh ho gaya toh kya hoga??

Runjhun (crosses her finger behind) kya hoga matlab?? Main apni baaki ki zindagi safed sari aur bina make-up ke nahi ghoomna chahti..!! 😑😑😑

Guddu frowns n leaves...

Bebey: chal meri sherni...shaam ke liye rehersal karte hain..!! πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

Posted: 12 years ago

CHAPTER #21

 
 
 
[evening]

Guddu returns with Inder...Guddu looks a bit disappointed...bcoz of which Runjhun gets scared...Inder looked very happy...he gave sweets to everyone...

Dad ji: pehle yeh toh bata, ki kya bola boss ne?? πŸ˜•πŸ˜•

Inder: arey dad ji...he was so impressed by bhaiya's repartee (quick & witty replies) that he offered him the post of astt. exports manager..temporary...till he finishes his crash course of management...n gets a fluent spoken english...the course is expected to get over in 6months... πŸ‘πŸ‘

Dad ji: arey bilkul aamir bete ki tarah tu bhi phata phat seekh ja... 😎

Inder: aamir koun?? Aamir khan?? 😲

Dad ji: phir??? Ghajini ke liye usko bhi to body banani padhi thi, na...he was so tensed...i said- beta u have the potential...u can do it...he got encouraged...n when ghajini was a hit, he... 😎

Bebey: o bandh kar apni bakwas... 😑😑😑

Dad ji: arey...aamir really mere bete jaisa hai... 😲

Bebey: haan, aur Dilip Kumar mera baap hai..πŸ˜†..tu chup kar...!!! (to guddu) tu jaa ke fresh ho ja, puttar... πŸ˜ƒ

Guddu nods...

Runjhun goes behind him...

Runjhun: aap bilkul chinta mat kijiye...6 months bohot hota hai...

Guddu (holds her & gives her a jerk) samajti kya ho tum khud ko..?? Kya zaroorat thi, inder ko sab batane ki..?? Tumne toh usse yeh bhi bata diya hoga ki mujhe kyun rusticate kiya tha... 😑😑

Runjhun (weeps): nahi... 😭

Guddu: oh shut up...(leaves her)..look, dont get on my nerve, m warning u...Inder shariff hai, thats why he didnt say it in details...u are just useless...

Runjhun (cries): meri baat toh... 😭😭

Guddu: shut up, i say...😑😑

Guddu leaves n goes to the terace...

Inder comes...

Inder: bhaiya, r u fine?? Bcoz, i heard u shouting...

Guddu: kuchh nahi...m fine.. 😳

Inder: bhaiya, aap bohot lucky hain...bhabhi ne mujhe bus itna kaha ki due to personal matter, u couldnt complete your graduation...par agar us jagah Payal bhabhi hoti toh wo sab kuchh details mein chilla chilla ke batati...that too adding some more spices...Runjhun bhabhi is very trust worthy...dont go for my words...ask your own heart...what does it say???...u shouldnt have done this...bhaiya..!!

Inder leaves...

Guddu regrets...

Goes back to the room...Runjhun crying... 😭😭

Guddu: itne saare aansu..??...Delhi mein flood lana hai kya... πŸ˜‰

Runjhun turns her face... 😑

Guddu: tumne pehle kyun nahi bataya..?? 😳

Runjhun (shouts in crying voice): mouka diya, batane ka?? 😑😑

Guddu: (boldly) achha sorry...

Runjhun: meherbaani kar rahe hain humpe??? Aise bolte hain sorry..?? 😑😑

Guddu: dekho, humne sorry bol diya...tum bhi maaf kar do...bus baat khatam..!!

Runjhun: ek kaam karna, kisi din gusse mein aake humein maar daalna...phir gussa thanda ho jaye, toh humari laash ke saamne jaake sorry bol dena...bus baat khatam..!!

😑😑😑😑
Runjhun leaves...

Guddu: arey...ruko...Runjhun...

Guddu (sits on the bed): itna kyun naraaz hoti hai..??

Runjhun in kitchen...working...Bebey & Mom ji staring at her angrily...

Runjhun: bebey... πŸ˜”

Bebey: mar gayi teri bebey... 😑

Runjhun: kya...kuchh bhi bolti ho...!! 😲😲😲

Rajni: phir, aur kya bolein..?? Poore script mein kahin bhi yeh likha tha ki tu uske peeche peeche bhagegi?? 😑😑😑

Runjhun: toh improvise naam ki bhi toh koi cheez hoti hai na mom ji...(hugs them both) sorry.. sorry... sorry... sorry... 😳😳😳😳😳

Bebey: achha theek hai..!! πŸ˜ƒ

Runjhun (winks): thank u... 😳

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