Posted: 12 years ago
Thanks Sanjanna for the update.
I so hope the Cvs solve Neelu mystery in a similar way. Love your humour.

Posted: 12 years ago

hey sanju...

awwesum prts yaar...πŸ‘
 
kya family hai...
hilarious ...
 
poor guddu ...
 
updt sooon plezzz
 
Edited by tehzeeb25 - 12 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago
Awww...plz CVs use this as your Neelu track!
Posted: 12 years ago
good part. good way to solve the Neelu mystery. update as soon as you can 😊
Posted: 12 years ago
Excellent job with the Neelu  part...and Guddu's real name is superb...I liked that Rhunjun went in search of G's past...update soon
Posted: 12 years ago
they were not solving the mystery...so, i had to take the initiative...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
thnx for liking guys...
n 1 more announcement..."the 25th chapter of this FF will be the last 1..."
would update a promo regarding the closure...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
wish me luck...πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ
Posted: 12 years ago

CHAPTER #19

 
 
Guddu sits in the room, worried for Runjhun...Runjhun comes in...exhausted...🀒..she is supposed to have walked all the way back home...(no.., it didnt rain...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†)

Guddu: where were u since afternoon...its dusk...tum ko pata hai humein kitni chinta ho rahi thi.....humein matlab hum sab ko...!! Inder told us that you went for some urgent work...u could have asked me or kukkan to accompany you...you must be very tired na??...want some tea..??😲

Runjhun stares at Guddu... πŸ˜ƒ

Guddu: do 1 thing...get afresh...n make some tea for yourself, okay...

Runjhun gives a slight smile... 😊

Guddu: arey, i didnt tell you...today morning i was chatting with bebey...u know, both of us are jobless...she told me about her husband...(etc..etc..)...hence we became such nice friends...and once in between, she was off her hearing-aid...(laughs)...πŸ˜†

Runjhun: itna khush kaise reh lete hain, gaurav ji..?? 😭

Guddu stops laughing n shocked when he hears the name...turns...n stares at Runjhun in horror...😲😲

Runjhun: hum aj APIM gaye the...humein sab kuchh pata chal chuka hai...

Guddu: oh...to tumne humari jasoosi yahan bhi shuru kar di...

Runjhun: (fimly) u wer so loyal to her, then why did neelu lie...?? 😑😑

Guddu: bcoz i asked her to...she was the 1 who had requested me the favour...but she was so conscience-stricken that...😭😭But tum mere peeche haath dho kar kyun padhi ho???...hum hi pagal the jo tum jaisi aurat ke saath yahan bhaag kar aa gaye...tum trust ke layak hi nahi ho...!!...you deserve nothing but hatred...!! 😑😑

Runjhun: you are right, i deserve hatred...so, u hate me??πŸ˜•πŸ˜•

Guddu gazes at her n leaves...😲..bebey standing outside with a glass of juice for the tired Runjhun...Guddu looks at her...Bebey frowns😑 at him n goes inside to Runjhun...

Bebey: arey arey, meri sherni ro rahi hai..??😲..wo bhi kiski baat ka bura maanke...us bevakoof ki.??? 😑😑

Runjhun: bebey, humne guddu ji ko aj tak bohot galat samjha...wo bohot achhe hain...par humne unhe kitna criticise kiya...😭

Bebey: wo isi layak hai... 😑😑

Runjhun 😲...😲..

Bebey: munda hai toh bada pyaara, par dimaag ka bohot kachcha hai... Aur tu ro mat!! Phata-phat ye juice pi aur chal..

Runjhun: kahan???? 😲

Bebey: payal aur rajni se patiyon ki haalat tight karne ki training lene... πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

Runjhun: r u sure, ye sab inpe chalega..?? πŸ˜•

Bebey: doudega bachche..!!..apne baalon ko maine dhoop me thode hi safed kiye hain..?? πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰

Runjhun twinkles... 😳

Finishes up the juice n goes to meet payal n mom ji... πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ

Edited by mikanS - 12 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago
******************************************
 
FF Promo

 
 
 
[BG:

Ruth naa jana, tumse kahun to..

Main in aankhon mein jo rahun to...] 😍

 
A happy Runjhun climbs up stairs...πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ
to the terace...rose petals on floor...she looks up...Guddu standing on railing...❀️❀️❀️

The song is still goin on...

Guddu: I Love You Runjhun... 😳😳😳

N suddenly falls back...down the building...

Runjhun screams: GUDDUJI... 😲😲😲😲😲

 
 
 
 
...FF: O re piya...Chapter #23
...coming soon...only on india forums...😳
Edited by mikanS - 12 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago
sanju yaar ..
awesum prt
luvd bebe n RJ prt
waiting for training ...of  patiyon ki halat tight  kese karte hain...πŸ˜†
loooks reaaalllyyy veeeryyy interestinggg...
updt sooon plezzz yaaar ...
promo looks scaryyy ...
updt ASSSAP ...intezaaar maat kara na plezzz jaldi jaldi updt karo na plezzz
Posted: 12 years ago
πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘
Guddua tho lagtha hain bahut root gaya hain...ab kaise manayegi Rhunjun...Bebey tussi great hon...Guddu ka screw thoda loose hain usse tight karne ka waqt aa gaya
Lekin precap ne humain bechain kar diya hain...jaldi update karna jaan

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