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Posted: 12 years ago
great part. Amma and Guddu's conversation was nice. update as soon as you can 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: sur001

Sanju yaar ...kya likha hai...yaar...billo and kukkan part was muaah...

πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘...Just hoping Billo's ev il eyes don't see Gunjhun😑...Sweety update soon...

 
pyaar andha hota hai...you know...!!😳
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thnx 4 liking...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

i m getting really very bugged up these days...so, trying to complete the FF soon...😊

thanx 2 evry1 for liking my prev. updates...!!!πŸ˜›
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CHAPTER #15

 
Billo: tau, kaash ye kukkan hamari life mein 7-8 saal pehle aya hota...toh humko is buntu naam ke bull😑 ke saath adalat mein naa tanghna padta...!! Why didnt i notice him before...tall, dark, handsome... 😍

Guddu comes out n takes kukkan in... Billo also leaves...

[In Gunjhun's room]

Rajju pandey, amma, kukkan n gunjhun inside...

Kukkan: ye dekhiye bhaiya, kaisa ekdum 1st class badhiya costume laye hain... πŸ˜Ž for you and bhabhi... πŸ˜‰πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ

Guddu takes them out...πŸ˜• N shocked...😲

Guddu: (angrily) yeh sab kya utha laye..?? 😑😑

Kukkan: arrey bhaiya, yeh ram-leela ki costume hai raja ram aur sita maiyya ki... Aur yeh mukut & wig bhi toh hai...πŸ˜† Isme koi bhi aapko nahi pehchan payega... πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜Ž

Guddu: (hits him on his head) saala dimaag bech ke aaye ho kya... 😑

Kukkan: nahi bhaiya, rent pe laye hain... & dimaag toh khopri mein hi hai...aur yeh costumes october mein chahiye honge...tab tak toh hum return bhi kar denge, na..?? 😳😳

Guddu: hum yeh pehen ke jayenge toh logo ki nazaron mein kam nahi ayenge, log humein aur zyada ghoorenge...idiot!! 😑😑

Kukkan cuts his tongue...

Kukkan: sorry...yeh baat to dimaag mein aaya hi nahi...

Guddu: dimaag hoga tab na... 😑😑

Kukkan: Ab?? πŸ˜•

Amma: u guys get a jaipuri make-over...u will be able to conceal your identity easily... πŸ˜›πŸ˜‰

Kukkan: (gets emo) bhaiya.. 😭😭😭

Guddu: (hugs him) arrey, bachche ho kya...why are you crying..??

Kukkan: bhaiya-bhabhi...even i wanna accompany you both...please...what will lakshman do here without his ram..?? 😭

Amma: (smiles) okay beta...you also accompany them.. 😊

Guddu: what "okay"..?? Aise toh kisi ko bhi shak ho jayega... 😑

Rajju: hoga toh hone do...i dont care...waise bhi u guys just need to run away...ppl will come to know this, some day or the other...now, i got to go...or else all of us would be in trouble...

Rajju pandey leaves..

Kukkan: okay bhaiya...i m also goin to get jaipuri dresses for us... πŸ˜‰

Guddu: o hero 😎, yeh ram-leela koun leke jayega..?? 😑😑

Kukkan: oh sorry...(picks those costumes) bye... πŸ˜ƒ

[In vishnu pandey's room]

all of them tensed for rajju pandey...rajju enters...

Mittho: aye haye pandey ji...where wer u..?? πŸ˜•πŸ˜²

Rajju: i was here only...why, need anything?? 😑😑

Mittho: pandey ji, please forget whateva happened before...arey, i tell you, mahadevi has chosen such a worthy groom for herself...just the perfect guy... 😈

Jhabbu stands smiling there... 🀑

Jhabbu: ab sasurji, saasu maa ne toh humein maaf kar diya...ab aap bhi kar dijiye so that we can plan further... 😈

Rajju: so, whats next, my loyal son-in-law...??? 😳

Jhabbu: i will go & put a string along the third stair...as soon as runjhun steps down, she would roll n hurt herself badly...poor runjhun bhabhi..!! 😈😈

Rajju: (😲tensed; in mind) i will have to tell this to runjhun...but how..?? 😲😲

[In the hall]

While kukkan is leaving... Billo comes on his way...

Billo: kabhi toh nazar milao...kabhi toh kareeb aao... 😍

Kukkan: ji..??

Billo: dekha ek khwab toh yeh silsile hue...😳

door tak nigahon mein hai gul khile hue..  πŸ˜

Kukkan: aapko kuch chahiye, mami ji... πŸ₯±

Billo: abhi na jao chhod kar ki dil abhi bharaa nahi... 😍

Kukkan gulps in utter confusion...

Billo: yeh ladka haye allah, kaisa hai deewana, kitna mushkil hai tauba isko samjhana, ki dheere dheere dil bakarar hota hai...hote hote pyaar hota hai... ❀️❀️😍

Kukkan: pyaar, mami ji..?? 😲😲 

Billo: tau, for the 1st time in life, ive got someone whom i like...warna, in aankhon ki masti ke mastane hazaron hain... 😎

Kukkan: but we have such a huge age difference..."pachpan (55) ki laila, aur pachchis (25) ka chaila..??" πŸ˜†

Billo: i m only 30... ☺️ πŸ˜³πŸ˜³

Kukkan: since how many years..?? πŸ˜† πŸ˜‰

Billo: look, i dont wanna live here...so, lets elope...i wud collect all my jewelleries...n come...okay?? 😍

Kukkan: (in mind) ek baar chori to karo...phir pata chalega...buddhi... 😑

(to Billo) okay, Billo ji... πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰

Kukkan runs away... πŸ˜•

[In the evening]

Runjhun about to come down the stairs while mahadevi rushes down from the terace...pushes runjhun away n falls into jhabbu's trap...she rolls n rolls...everyone frightened...mahadevi falls unconscious...

Jhabbu: saali, phir bach gayi... 😑

All of them take her to the hospital...

Rajju: thank god that you are alright...now, this is the best time...elope...

Runjhun: but MD..?? 😲

Rajju: no runjhun...now you cant miss this chance...just leave...take care...my blessings will always be there with you both... πŸ˜ƒ

3 of them put on the costumes n leave for delhi...amma hugs them...n bids them a goodbye...amma very happy... πŸ€—

On the other hand...in the hospital, the docs say that mahadevi has had a miscarriage... 😭😭

Jhabbu kinda guilty...shocked... 😲

Jhabbu: (angry) runjhun & guddu will have to pay for this...😑😑

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Posted: 12 years ago
🀣🀣🀣
Aur ka kahe hum...humaari halat tho yeh thi...
Jabbu ko hum zaroor maar dalenge🀬😑
Ab Delhi mein hoga pyaar😍
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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: Nidhsara

🀣🀣🀣

Aur ka kahe hum...humaari halat tho yeh thi...
Jabbu ko hum zaroor maar dalenge🀬😑
Ab Delhi mein hoga pyaar😍

 
hopefully...
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m sending even a kabab mein haddi with GuNjhun...❀️
nehow...thnx for liking...!!!!πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 12 years ago
awwwesum prt yaar sanju...
 
hilarious...55 ki laila ...25 ka chaila...🀣
pooor kukkan...
 
kukkan kabba me haddi ...
amazing
updt sooon
intezaaar mat karana
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Posted: 12 years ago
great updates, mikan!
The scene between billo and kukkan were hilarious! 🀣
Omg, i can't believe this jabbo! How can he do this?
Continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
great part. the billo and kukkan scene was really funny. update as soon as you can 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Correction Kukkan :its Raavan and Vibhishan not Ram and Lakshman!...jk jk
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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: NaiiNa1

Correction Kukkan :its Raavan and Vibhishan not Ram and Lakshman!...jk jk

 
LOL...πŸ˜†
but would soon become that...(hopefully..)
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