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Posted: 12 years ago

😲CHAPTER #9

 

G doesn't say anything…..Quietly goes to sleep….in a dilemma of whether he should trust R or not…😕

R sad…but at the same time kinda relieved dat she has confessed her feelings….worried of what would happen next…

[MORNING]

R gets up and finds the room full of flowers….lovely smell all around….❤️

but it was so hot….she was sweating….she went to switch on the fan….n rose petals showered on her….😍 Then she notices the mirror….on her reflection, it was written… (with lipstick)..."WINNER"…n there was a small chit below that…R came closer…picked it up….it contained the words,"…of the challenge as well as my heart…" Runjhun looks up…sees G behind her…smiles…😳 ❤️ 😳

[BG: R's happy tune…]

 
Suddenly she hears some sound…as if something fell down…she opens her eyes…(yes)…she was dreaming…G's mobile phone had slipped off his hand…then she gets up n notices that his bag was all packed…n he was ready to go…

R (adjusting herself to the hostile reality...😔):  so, you are going…?? 🥺

G (firmly): YES…n u have lost the challenge…😵

(to himself): then why am I not happy…??..Did I really want her to win this time..???🤔

(to R) M going….our marriage strands have snapped off…you are no more my dharampatni nor can u call me your pati parameshwar…😡

G leaves the room…R closes her eyes n prays to god…"please stop him…save my marriage…do some miracle god..!!" 😭😭

G about to leave….but suddenly stops….his eyes wide open…😲

he drops down his bag…surprised…😕 rather shocked…😲😲
 
His mom n dad standing at the doorstep…Poor Mr. Harshwardhan (part II)…😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
That was really good now i think guddu wil stop continue soon dear.
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Posted: 12 years ago

CHAPTER #10

 

Amma: arrey…aap log aa gaye…they had already informed me….n had also asked not to tell this to you both…Guddu surprised…goes n hugs his mother…🤗

The M & Ms come down…

(Whisperings…)

Mittho: Aye haye pandeyji…our plan has flopped before even getting started…😒

Buntu: Billo rani, now what do we do with those ittar bottles of kerosene..??🤪

Billo: tau, you can do 1 thing, buntuji…go n take a bath with it…waise bhi, when did you take bath last..??(huh..😡)

Buntu: just 4 days ago…😳

Amma welcomes mom n dad…

Mom: beta, where is bahu..???😕

Guddu (in mind; 😭over his fate): kya panauti hai…🤢

Mom: n u were going out somewhere or wat..???😲

Guddu: NO..!! (Oh NO…😭 )…ermm actually amma, me n runjhun were doing some cleaning of the room…thats why…

Amma: (to guddu) beta, Go n bring Runjhun out…

(to guddu's parents): what did the docs say..??

Dad: they said she is fine now…but should remain away from any kinda stress or shocks…as far as possible…!!

Kalsanwali grins…😈

Vishnu: whats wrong..??

KW: abe-e, guddu's mom has to stay away from shocks…

Vishnu: (grabs her point..) yes, so lets give her some good time…guddu ki amma out, guddu out…n our fortune in..!!!!😈

G and R come out…

Mittho and KW run to Gunjhun's room n start searching for divorce papers…

R bends to touch mom's feet n gets a sprain….

Mom: kya hua, beta..??

Guddu: wo mom, she had fallen from a stool yesterday!!

Mom: (😡) n you made her clean your room today..?? how senseless could you be…I never expected this from you..!!!

Guddu😭😭

KW: your son has done many things beyond your expectations…!😈

KW gives the papers to guddu's mom-dad…both of them shocked….

Guddu n Runjhun frightened…😕

Mom staring at guddu angrily…. Dad frowning at him…😡😡😡

Dad: I knew that you are a useless person…but never knew that you wer such a sadist too…😡

Guddu: I m sorry….😒

Mom: bahu is in such a "haalat" n you asked her to do all your work…? N how careless n stupid could you be…bahu fell down yesterday...sprained her waist…??

Runjhun: ankle and elbow also…😳😉

Mom: (to guddu) I will never forgive you for this…!!😡😡

(to Runjhun) thank you so much dear…for giving me my world..!!!😃

R still confused…😕 G totally fused…🤢

R sees those papers… Runjhun's aka Mahadevi's preg. reports…😆

Dad: arrey, why is everyone so quite…hamari bahu maa banne wali hai…yippee…party..!!!

(to guddu) and yeah, you (pointing at him..😡) will take care of Runjhun from today onwards…understood??😵

R embarrassed….😳 looks at guddu….Guddu frowns at her…😡😡

 
 
{PRECAP:
 
G: (shouting at R) I m senseless..??😡..useless..??😡..sadist..??..n wat else??😲
 
R: careless and stupid...(giggles..😆 )
 
G: you will have to pay for this…very soon..!!😡😡
 
R gets a sprain again n sinks down…🤢
 
G: I didn't mean that soon, also…!😳
 
[BG: tere mast mast gunjhun music..😍]  }
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesomeee too good  👏 👏 👏 
loved it  ...  the precap looks great  
waiting for more  😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
Hi Sanjana I like both chapters AWWW
Precap sounds interesting
Updt asap
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Posted: 12 years ago
Sanju...what a fab update...you made my mood ...love you for this update...every flavour was there...Sadist...arrogant...lol...shukla papa ne to bete ki acchi class li😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
both parts were great. update as soon as you can . 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
really liked both chapters.

Continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey sanju ...
both d prts were ,,faab
awesum
updt sooon plezzz
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Posted: 12 years ago
Aww Sanju...Kannauj ke Raja Harshwardhan ka bahut hi bura haal hain...🤣...bechaare ko kya kya sunna pad raha hain...ab yeh kaise apne patni ko chodenge *giggling*...KW aur Mittho ka chehra dekhne layak hoga...loved it thouroughly...update soon