Bhagonwali - Baante Apni Taqdeer


Bhagonwali - Baante Apni Taqdeer
Bhagonwali - Baante Apni Taqdeer

FF: O re piya...

MikanSakura Senior Member

Joined: 06 April 2011
Posts: 399

Posted: 21 May 2011 at 4:24am | IP Logged

SmileFanFiction: O RE PIYA.. indexSmile

Chapter 2, 3 and 4 on pg 2

Chapter 5, 6 and 7 on pg 4

Chapter 8 on pg 5

Chapter 9 and 10 on pg 7

Chapter 11 on pg 9

Chapter 12 and 13 on pg 10

Chapter 14 on pg 11

Chapter 15 on pg 12

Chapter 16 on pg 14

Chapter 17 on pg 15

Chapter 18 on pg 16

Chapter 19 on pg 17

Chapter 20, 21, 22 and 23 on pg 18

Chapter 24 and 25 on pg 19

hope you enjoy them...Smile
[PREFACE: 20th may episode..Smile]
R goes out with G..
the whole time, R wil b thinkin of wat might hav been troubling Mahadevi, so badly...Confused (she hasnt overheard the conversation..)
G stops the bike at the market...jewellery market...and asks R to go and select sum 4 herslf...
R confused..!!!Confused
G: what happened..?? any probs..??
R: no...ermm...its just dat...
G: shut up...didnt u hear what ur beloved "amma" said, hum dono ko saath mein time spend karna chahiye...ghoomna phirna chahiye...!!!!
R: (completely jumbled up...raises her eyebrows) huh..???Shocked
G: umm...i...i...dont lik d earings u wear...dey dont luk, i was thinking dat u might be thinking of changing dem...Embarrassed
R: par mobile...
G: arrey, mobile gaya bhaad mein, tum jaldi se...
R: (pretends 2 be serious) bhaad mein...???...dont tel me u really meant it...
G: (tactfully) at all...i just wanted u 2 shop 4 urself... n den we'll go ,na...(angrily) to get mobile...
Guddu gives a BIIIG smile...Big smile
n 2wards the shop...
Runjhun smiles slightly...Embarrassed
[ (BG: piya, na rahe mann...from tanu weds manu)
1st stanza (antara)...G keeps staring at R, while she selects some earings n shows dem to G, one by one...Day Dreaming
2nd stanza...(1st mukhra){asuwann sang mora beh gaya kajra..Cry}: MD weeping in her room...after jhabbu refuses 2 accept her...Cry]
song ends with R leaving on the bike with G..
now R forces G 2 stop at a mobile shop...for getting some idea about the customer's current taste...
R watches everything very keenly...G reluctantly stands n stares at the shopkeepers while they xplain things 2 R...Wink
they cum out of the shop...R luks at G...G pretends 2 avoid her...
R: mujhe pyaas lagi hai...(m thirsty..)...Stern Smile
G: (angrily) so..???...u cud hav asked 4 a glas of water from dat "sasura" dukaandaar(shopkeeper)
R: ice cream chahiye wale dukaandaar ke paas nai thi...Embarrassed
G: toh hum tumhare baap ke naukar hain, kya...???Pinch
R: pata nahi...
G: what did u say...???..."pata" nahi...
R: i said only "nahi"...
G: do u think i m a fool or sumthing...Do i seem like a dumb from any angle...??
R keenly observes his face...(moves left)
R: yahan se toh thik hi hai, par...
(moves 2 his right n luks at his face..)
R: yahan se...thode thode pagal...(looks into his eyes inquisitely)Wink
G:(in his grave tone..) which flavour..???
R: mango...
(BG: the tere mast mast wala cute Gunjhun tune...)
G gets 2 cups of mango ice cream (plastic cups)
both of dem start having it...
suddenly, guddu seems 2 remember sumthing...
G: (giving the cup 2 runjhun) hold...!!! (rides the bike) come, i'll show u a place...not many people know of dis place...i usualy go there alone...wenever m depressed or very happy...
aur haan mera ice cream sirf pakadne ke liye diya hai...understood...???
R: (annoyed) how m i suppose 2 eat it on bike...???
G: haan...haan...thik hai...!!!!
R notices that G's ice cream cup has a crack on the top...(may be while opening, it got cracked...)
they cum to the place...a beautiful heavenly place...calm, cool...dim light...lakeside...musical fountain at the centre of the lake...(remember, d place where G went after d fight at the inauguration ceremony..ive just added sum more details...Wink)
G: the place is so beautiful...
R: (as if in her dreamland...) truely...Smile be continued

Edited by mikanS - 20 June 2011 at 1:02am

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Ziva01 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 21 May 2011 at 4:36am | IP Logged
beautiful, do update soon plzzz
(if only we could see that on monday)
cheers Priya

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Brindha87 Groupbie

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Posted: 21 May 2011 at 7:09am | IP Logged
Nice starting yaar...
Keep it upClapClapClap...
Update soon...

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Sandrav Senior Member

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Posted: 21 May 2011 at 7:15am | IP Logged
That was really nice. Do continue soon.

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sur001 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 21 May 2011 at 9:10am | IP Logged was fab
          maza aa gaya yaar...keep it up...Gunjhun's dialouges were just superb
and the song was also nice...Do update soon
               Jaldi update karna ...haan

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-salma- Goldie

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Posted: 21 May 2011 at 9:21am | IP Logged
it was superbbb Clap Clap i loved it  !!! 
do update soon !! 

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Prabhkallu Goldie

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Posted: 21 May 2011 at 10:41am | IP Logged

That was awesome!

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tehzeeb25 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 21 May 2011 at 11:04am | IP Logged
hey sanju ...
amazing ff yaar ...
gunjun were tooo cute ...
updt sooon yaar plezzz

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