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Originally posted by: mayur_eternal

 
There is no need for giving a huge lecture dear๐Ÿ˜›..u r just writing a story..and we readers are here to read and enjoy..if someone gives a negative comment regarding the story,its the characters they bash and not ur creativity..

P.S:I luved this story.its very diff.And I need an update soon.This is an order.๐Ÿ˜†

dear tumhine poocha tha ki woh log itna serious decision aise kaise do second main le liya my answer was for you aur tu meri hi line mujhe hi suna rahi hain๐Ÿ˜† too much Edited by --unknown-- - 12 years ago
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who all want to know the reason behind gunur leaving their kids like that read the story till the end and i will clear all your doubts it will consist very few parts
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yes we do want to read the reason why they left thier kids...
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Originally posted by: arjun-forever

yes we do want to read the reason why they left thier kids...

i will surely clear dear all your doubts
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ok guys here is next part hope you like it
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tik hain majority wants past

part 3

shobha and shashi were worried for nupur shilpa calls and informs about the marriage listening to that they are completely shocked

they reach Sharma house and see gunur . Shobha was fuming with anger on gunur . Whole sayank family was there she cant say anything in front of them.Gunur have changed their dress so shobha feels nupur was wrong

Shobha main indono ko apne saath ghar lejaana chahti hun

Shilpa-par dono abhi toh aaye hain

Shobha-haan par kal sham ko dono ko waapas bejdoongi please mana mat kijiye mujhe indono ko apne saath lejaana padega bahut zaroori hain

Dadi-acha beta leke jao

Shobha-tum dono ghadi main jaake baito main abhi aayi

Gunur-but mom

Shobha-tum dono se jo kahaan woh karo

(they leave silently because they know there mom's anger is very dangerous)

Shobha-nupur ki harkat ke liye main aapse maafi maangti hun

Dadi-bache hain naadan hain kabhi kabhi galti ho jaati hain

Shobha-aap log bahut ache ho isiliye aapne meri beti ko maaf kiya par main aapse kuch kehna chahti hun\

Dadi-kaho beta

Shobha-bachpan se humne inhein kuch jyada hi laad se paala hain inki har zid ko puri ki hain par meri isi laad ne dono ko bigada hain dono bure nahin hain naasamaj hain bina soche samje kaam karte rehte hain maine inhein kabhi rote hue nahin dekha hain agar yeh koi bhi galti kare toh mujhe bata dena main inse baat karoongi. Aapki joint family hain indono ne aisa maahol kabhi dekha nahin isiliye inhein nahin pata ki kisse kaise baat karna hain agar indono ne koi galti ki toh apni beti samaj kar inhein maaf kardena

(she joins her hands)

Dadi-are beta yeh kya kar rahi ho hum samajte hain tumhari betiyan hamari bhi beti hain hum unka pura khayal rakhenge

Shobha- aur aap sab se zarooru baat kehni thi

(all are puzzled)

Shobha-dono ko jitna ek dusre se dur rakhoge usi main aap sab ki balai hain warna yeh shaitan pata nahin kya karenge pata nahin yeh dono is ghar ka kya haal karenge especially tum dono beta(looking at sayank)in dono se sambhal kar rehna inki koi bhi baat mat sunna

Shilpa-tum yeh kya keh rahi ho dono itne bure nahin hain bahut achi bachiyan hain

Shobha-inke bolepan pe mat aana aage aage inke harkato ka pata chalega

Shilpa-aaj ke zamaane ke bachiyan aise hi hote hain kuch nahin aata par deere deere seekh jayenge hum hain na hamari baaki bahu bhi aise hi the ab sab normal hain

Shobha 'main kiski baat kar rahi hun aap baad main samjengi philhaal main jaarahi hun bahut der ho raha hain

Shilpa-acha teek hain

Shobha(to herself)-hey bhagwan mere shaitano se in sab ko bachana

(shobha takes gunur to house)

Ghar pahuncte hi nupur ko tappad gift main milti hain

Shobha-tujhe aisa karne ki kya zaroorat thi humne teri kisi baat ko nahin maana kya tumhari har zid ko pura kiya pehle kyun nahin bola aur yeh ladka tujhe kahaan mila woh toh US se aaj hi aaya hain

N-mom flight main US se aate waqt mila tha

Shobha-flight main tera dimaag toh teek hain acha hua ladka ache ghar ka hain agar woh koi bigda hua ladka hota toh tu kya karti

N-jab maine use baat kiya mujher lagaa ladka acha hain agar bura hota toh meri badkismat waise bhi aap kisi bhi ladke ke bare main kaise guarantee de sakti hain har kisi ke paas achai ka certificate hota hain kya

Shobha-tujhe baatein banana ache se aata hain par har baa raise nahin chalegi tum dono ab tum dono kishaadhi hui hain toh apni ye stupid harkatein karna band karo warna sab tum dono ko nahin humein kahenge aaj ke baad tumhare sasural se tum dono ki koi bhi complaint aayi toh mujhse bura koi nahin hoga

Shashi-betiyan shaadhi ke baad ghar aayi hain tum unse aise baat karogi toh phir nahin aayenge unka sar khana chod do aur unhein aaraam karne do

Shobha-aap ab bhi unhi ki taraf daari kar rahe hain dekha nahin tumhari laadli beti ne kya kiya

Shashi-jo ho gaya so gaya ab sab teek hain na kyun bewajah lad rahi ho ab tumhare gusse se kuch badalne waala nahin hain

(gunur leave to their room shobha goes from there in anger)

Shashi- kyun unse bewajah behas kar rahi thi

Shobha-main behas kar rahi hun tumhari beti ne jo kiya

Shashi-agar main bhi tumhari tarah unse ladta toh dono hamare haath main nahin rahenge humare lad ka hi asar hain jo nupur ne aise harqat ki hamari kismet achi hain kuch bura nahin hua humein ab unhein gusse se nahin pyar se samjaana hoga

Shobha-bahut darr lag raha hain yeh dono pata nahin sasuraal main kya karenge kaunsi musibat khada karenge

Shashi-hum hain na unhe sambhaalne ke liye

 

In gunur room

G-nupur I am sorry meri wajah se tumhein kitna kuch sehna pada please mujhe maaf kardo

N-di aap mujhe sorry kahengi toh muje sach main bura lagega mom ki baatein toh roz sunte hain

G-waise tumne mujhe kyun rokha main mom ko sach bata deti thin a

N-aade sach ka yeh reaction hain toh socho jab pura sach paata chalega kya hoga hum dono ki murder kardegi waise mom bhi sahi hain agar sam bura hota toh pata nahin kya hota

G-maine sam ko jab pehli baar dekha hain tab hi mujhe samaj aaya ki ladka acha hain tumne bhi dekha tha na usdin us old couple se kaise help kar raha tha tab hi mujhe woh pasand aaya aur aaj itne din baad mujhse milne itna dur aaya isi main uska pyar dikhta hain

N-lagta hain di aap toh gayi

G-meri chod tera kya haal hain ladka kaisa hain meri wajah se tujhe use shaadi karni padi

N-ladka acha hi hain isiliye toh aaj ke zamaane main bhi bina ladki ko dekhe parents ke liye arrange marriage kiya hain

G-is hisaab se toh tu use bhi achi hain warna kaun aaj ke zamaane main kaun apni di ke liye anjaan ladke se shaadhi karega

N-di aap mujhe jyada sar pe chada rahi hain

G-acha woh sab chod itne bade tyag ka result kya hua ladka kaisa hain

N-dikhne main acha hain par bolta bahut hain maase bhi jyada par laga hain ladkiyon ka kuch jyada hi respect karta hain waise bhi life kitni funny hain kal main darr rahi thi mujhe aapse dur jaana hoga aur aaj dono hamesha ke liye ek saath hain

G-woh toh hain ab hum dono ko koi alag nahin kar sakta

Mayank was in his room sleeping on bed hugging his pillow

M-tumse milne ke liye tumhein dekhne ka kabse taras raha tha aur aaj tumhein dekh bhi liya par thodi der main tum mujhse dur ho gayi mujhe bahut bura lagaa par its ok kal se tum hamesha ke liye mere paas rahogi

(a smile appeared on his face)

S-pata nahin yeh sab kuch kya hua but in the end you are mine I loved you when I first time saw you in flight . Tumhein nahin pata yeh ek saal mere liye kitna mushkil tha maine tumhein har pal yaad kiya I was missing you like hell aur aaj tumne jab shaadi ki baat ki pehle main shocked tha fir tumhari zid ki wajah se haan kahaan par ab mujhe apni kismet pe yakeen nahin horaha tum hamesha ke liye meri ho yeh sach hain ya sapna job hi ho mujhe yeh sab kuch acha lag raha hain

Next day morning

Gunur come to know that sayank wil come to pick them

G-par mom hum chalejayenge na woh kyun apna time waste karenge

Shobha-muh band kar yeh riwaaz hain

N-pick karne ke liye bhi riwaaz I think puraane zamaane main ladki ko driving nahin aati isiliye ladka aake pick karta tha humein driving aati hain hum chale jayenge

Shobha-tum dono apna muh band karo aur kaam karo

N-mujhe packing karni hain di aap bhi chaliye mere saath

Shobha-woh kyun

N-meri help karne ke liye

(they go inside nupur locks the door)

N-di woh dono yehaan aarahe hain agar dono yehaan aayenge toh humara baanda phoot jayega

G-ab hum kya karenge

N-idea mom se kahenge ki humein hospital jaana hain woh humein wahaan se pick karein

G-idea acha hain par mom maanegi kya

N-aap try kijiye main aapke saath hun

G-mom humein hospital se call aaya hain humein abhi isi waqt hospital jaana hain

Shobha-reason acha hain par tum dono kahin nahin jaogi

G-mom sach main emergency hain

Shobha-lekin woh log aayenge toh

N-aap unse kehna hospital aake pick karne ke liye

Shobha-tik hain tum dono ki saari packing ho gayi hain

G-haan

Shobha-wahaan koi naatak mat karna sambhal ke rehna

Both 'ok mom

(both hug her she kisses both of them her eyes become teary)

N-aap toh aise darr rahi hain jaise hum hamesha ke liye jaarahe hain roz aayenge na aapse milne

Shobha-tum dono ko roz yehaan aane ki zaroorat nahin hain wahaan teek se raho wohi kaafi hain

(both hug their dad and say bye to him four of them have tears in their eyes)

(gunur leave to hospital)

Anjali-tum log yehaan kal hi tum dono ki shaadhi hui hain aaj hospital main

N-kyun shaadhi kiya toh hospital nahin aasakte hain kya koi rule hain kya

Ar-woh sab chod tune achanak kaise karli humein toh nahin bataya iske bare main

G-main batati hun pehle sab canteen chale

(they leave to canteen)

G-bhag ke isne nahin maine shaadhi kiya hain

R-phir nupur ki shaadhi

N-maine di ki jagah bait kar mayank se shaadhi ki

All-wat ghungat main tut hi

N-haan main hi thi

R-tu paagal ho gayi hain tune aisa kyun kiya

N-di ko bachane ke liye

R-agar sach saamne aayega tum dono maroge

N-jo hoga dekha jayega right now we are safe

R-kaise

N-mere sasural waale mujhe gunjan aur di ko nupur samaj rahe hain

Atul-wat tum log aaj humein doctor se patients banana chahte ho kya aise shocks de rahe ho

G-actually sam ko meri aur nupur ke naam main confusion hain

Suraj-pata nahin tumhare husbands ka kya haal hoga tum dono ladkiyan nahin shaitaan ho

A-haan yaar I pity them

(they leave to their duties)

Sayank reach home very excited to meet gunur

They ring the bell and are in full excitement to see gunur shobha opens the door

Shobha-tum dono aagaye beta tum baito main tum logo ke liye coffee laati hun

M-haan mom

(his eyes were searching for his better half jo already hospital bhag gayi)

(she brings the coffee)

M-dad nahin  hain

Shobha-unhe zaroori kaam se office jaana pada kya hua beta tum kuch bol nahin rahe

S-aunty sorry mujhe aise nahin karna chahiye tha

Shobha-mujhe pata hain galti tumhari nahin meri beti ki hain usine tumhein uksaya hoga aur tum mujhe aunty nahin mom kaho

M-mom mujhe aapse ek baat poochni thi

Shobha-poocho beta isme sochne waali kya baat hain

M-aap nupur aur gunjan ke liye itna kyun darr rahi ho dono bahut ache hain na

Shobha-main tumse kehne waali thi acha hua tumne baat ched li kal main kuch teek se isliye nahin kahaan kyunki main sabke saamne apni beti ki burai nahin karna chahti par tum dono ko yeh baat jaanna zaroori hain dono main bachpana abhi tak nahin gaya hain ab bhi dono bina soche samje kaam karte rehte hain unhein kisika darr nahin hain dono dil ke toh bahut saaf hain par bahut naadan hain woh wohi karte hain jo unhe acha lagta hain future kki bilul bhi parvah nahin hain bahut irresponsible hain pata nahin tum dono inhein kaise sambhaloge har waqt apne liye nayi nayi musibatein kadhi karte hain

S-dono ghar pe nahin hain

Shoba 'dono nahin hain isiliye itne aaraam se baat kar rahi hun warna yeh dono mujhe nahin chodte unhein yehi lagta hain ki main unki sar kha rahi hun waise tum dono ko late ho raha hoga

M-nahin mom we are free aur bataiyen aapki laadli betiyon ke bare main

(she smiles and brings some albums she says them everything about nupur and gunjan there hobbies there friends everything even about how they come through balcony which suprises sayank as they have never done such thing listening to their stories sayank understand gunur more nicely its almost 7 in the night)

Shobha-tum dono ko late horaha hoga tum dono jao yeh baatein toh hoti rahegi

M-ok aunty hum phir zaroor aayenge humein aur stories sunna hain bolengi na

Shobha 'pucca beta

(they go towards the car with gunurs luggage)

S-yeh gaadhi kiski hain good model

Shobha-in dono ki market main koi nayi model aayi toh zid pe bait the hain ki unhein woh model chahiye roz hospital isi main jaate hain aaj bhi jaate the par maine ubhein jabardasti unke dad ke saath beja tha yeh rahi iski keys ise le jao warna dono mujhe chain se nahin rehne degi

S-par mom yeh kaise le jaa sakte hain

Shobha 'agar nahin leke gaye toh meri betiyan mujhe nahin chodengi please mana mat karo unke dad ne unke liye bade pyaar se laaya tha

M-ok mom tik hain hum lejayenge

(sayank got a different opinion on gunur after talking to gunurs mom they are not like other girls they are different they wanted to know more about gunur they wanted to talk to them they just want to win their heart because they understood very well these girls are not so easy)

(they reach hospital in the reception)

M-nupur aur gunjan kahaan milenge

Receptionist 'nupur mam childrens ward main hain aur gunjan mam keerthi mam ko assist kar rahi hain

M-thanks (he turns someone collides with him she was about to fall he saves her from falling she is his sweet wife both have an eyelock )

Suraj-nupur ki bachi atlast maine tumhein pakad liya mera diary mujhe do

M(looks questioningly )-nupur

(she gets up)

N-main gunjan hun nupur nahin hamesha confuse hota rehta hain (looking at mayank)hum dono ek jaise dresses pehente hain na isiliye

M-waise tum yehaan kaise operation theatre main thin a

N-woh operation khatam ho gaya isiliye yeha hun

Suraj 'tum ho kaun

N-mera pati Mr.Mayank Sharma aur yeh mere jeeju Samrat Sharma he is suraj

S-nupur kahaan hain

Suraj-tumhare saamne hi toh hain

N-suraj yeh nupur ke bare main pooch rahe hain gunjan ke bare main nahin aap log wait karo main dim era matlab hain nupur ko lekar aati hun chale suraj

Suraj-tum jao main tumhare saath aake kya karoonga

N-tumhein kirti mam bhula rahi thi chale

Suraj-woh mujhe pager pe message kar sakti hain na(to himself)pehli baar jhansi ki rani ko kisise darte hue dekh kar mazaa aaraha hain

N-mam ka pager kharab ho gaya isiliye mujhse kahaan kitna questions poochte ho bevakuf

Suraj-tumne mujhe bevakuf kahaan how dare you tumhein toh

(he runs behind her mayank was looking lovingly at his sweet wife)

Nupur brings gunjan four of them leave

Sajan in gunur car and mayur in mayanks car

M-toh kaisa raha tumhara aaj ka din

(she doesn't listen she was busy chatting with gunjan on cell he moves hand infront of her she looks at him he sighs what she was doing)

N-kuch nahin bas aise hi tum kuch keh rahe the

M-lagta hain bahut busy ho

N-utni bhi busy nahin hoon bolo kya kehna hain

M-tumhein main pasand aaya ya bahut boring lag raha hun

N-sach bolun ya jooth

M-sach kahogi toh acha lagega

N-tum lecture bahut dete ho

(he doesn't say anything)

N-kya hua tumhein bura lagaa

M-nahin par hasi aarahi hain aaj tak maine tumhari jaise ladki nahin dekhi waise suraj kaun hain

N-mera boy friend

M-what(shocked and stops car)

N-haan he is a boy and he is my friend

M-tumhari mom sahi thi you are impossible

N-main hun hi impossible

M-main tumhein request karta hun please ainda kisi ladke ko boy friend mat kaho warna sab mujh par hasenge

N-acha teek hain pata nahin tum sab log boyfriend ka galat matlab kyun nikalte ho

M-hum paagal hain tum intelligent ho par please

N-ok

Gunjan was chatting

S-kisse baat kar rahi ho

G-nupur se

S-wat

G-mera matlab hain gunjan se

S-tum apne hi naam se confuse ho rahi ho

G-hum dono ek jaise hain na isiliye

S-tum dono ko ek jaisa rehna acha lagta hain

G-haan hamara favaourite actor bhi sharukh hain

S-toh saare ladkiyon ki tarah tum bhi sharukh ki deewani ho

G-haan

S-agar shahrukh aake tumse shaadhi karne ko kehta toh tum use karti

G-nahin mujhe second hand nahin chahiye

(listening to that sam smiles)

S-tumhari mom sahi thi you are impossible

G-yes I am impossible

 
 
Edited by --unknown-- - 12 years ago
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๐Ÿ‘awesome 
mind blowing yr
updates are superb๐Ÿ˜ณ
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Superb Update...!! ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘
Mindblowing...!! ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘
Just LOVED it to the core.
Please, Please write more OS's...!!

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lovely updt
thanks for the pm
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they are impossible osom update