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OS: Hogayi main aapki

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Posted: 20 May 2011 at 1:06pm | IP Logged
Hi Guys... a small attempt from my side...

OS: Hogayi main aapki

One day dinner time at beeji's house...

Everyone were sitting and having dinner and Geet was smiling at herself and playing with the food and thinking about maan's naughtiness the previous night...

Teji and beeji sees this and asks... Geet what happened why are you smiling... Geet shocked and embarresed looks at them... Nothing veerji... I am just happy today Veerji...

Teji smiles and looks at beeji... Beeji smiles and says... Geet we are happy that after so many days... u have smiled...

Geet smiles hearing that and looks at pammi and smiles...

Suddenly Teji says... woh balwant kahi chala gaya hai.. ab tak nahi lauta hai... suddenly Geet's face changes...

Beeji asks.. did he have dinner... lachi responds...no he said he will come and have food...

Geet becomes so sad... and thinks.. how can i eat withought knowing whether maan has ate or not...

geet gets up and teji stops her and she says... what happened to this girl till now she was so happy...

Pammi says.. I will take taali to her room.
Geet goes up and thinks... did he feel bad that i didnt allow him yesterday...

Maan... kahan ho aap...

after sometime.. she roams her and there in the room not knowing what to do.. she tried his fone and it is switched off... she gets afraid...

After sometime Pammi brings food and milk... Geet all tensed sees this and says bhabhi... mujhe nahi chahiye...

Pammi: Geet please drink the milk atleast.. please...
Geet: ok bhabhi...

Geet goes to her bathroom and changes to a new night dress a pink one...

and switches off the light...all tensed.. looks at her mobile for any message or call from maan...
suddenly someone touches her shoulder and she starts to scream... and a hand comes over her mouth and a small whisper...

Maan: Geet main hoon...

Geet: aap... hugs him tight... aap kahan chale gaye the main bahut darr gayi thi.. aisa ko karthe hai ki... batake tho jaa sakthe hai... hugs him even tighter...bahut bure ho aap...humesha mujhe rulathe ho...

Maan: Geet... main tho tumhare liye yeh laane gaya tha...

Geet: kya... mujhe sirf aap chahiye... aur kuch nahi...

Maan smiles and pats her head slowly... pagli... aur mujhe tum...

dekho na... kya hai...( its a beautiful boquet of red and whites roses... the colours both of them likes and the way geet likes a bit of read and a bit of white)...

Geet smiles and takes it from his hand and kisses the flowers... 

Maan: aur yeh bhi... (its gol gappe)... 

Geet smiles and eats it... suddenly looks at him and asks... aap ne kuch khaya...aap bhi na...

Maan: jab meri mishty bhooki hai.. tho main kaise kha saktha hoon...

Geet hugs him again... and eats one each and feeds him one too...

Geet then goes and takes and milk and asks him to drink... Maan makes faces and Geet forces him to drink...

Maan after drinking a bit makes Geet drink too... and they smile at each other...

Maan suddenly gets up to go and Geet says... Maan thodi der ruko na...

Maan: agar mein rukh gaya to pata nahi kya honge.. aaj tum bahut sexy lagg rahe ho

Geet( bluses): maan pleaseee

Maan: acha... he comes to the bed and he sits there with she resting her head on his shoulder...

mishty... i really miss your smiles... miss your smells... miss being with you...

lekin batana padega... mujhe yeh chupa chupi khel bahut pasad aa rahe hai...

Geet: acha.. aur yahan meri jaan nikali jaa rahi hai!! uska kya!!!

Maan: sorry.. and go to kiss on her forehead but suddenly geet looks up and maan kisses

Geet on her her lips...

Maan looks at Geet... she shies away... and gets up from bed before maan catches her hand...

Geet goes near the window...facing the balcony...

Maan gets up and comes near her...puts both his hand on her waist, hugs her from her back... and kisses her ears.. 

Aaj bahut khoobsurat lag rahi meri mishty ...kya bat hai...

Geet: to main roz khoobsurat nahi lagthi!!!

Maan: smirks.. roz tho tum khoobsurat lagthi ho...aaj kuch zyaadihi lag rahi ho... sexy.. meri misthy!!

Geet smiles... and blushes!!..

Maan: mishty... and he kisses her neck... geet blushes.. ... and maan turns her to face him...

Geet keeps looking down... and maan brings her face up... looks into her beautiful hazel eyes... geet looks at him with all the desire...

Maan: jaanthi ho mishti... kab se main is baat ki intezaar mein hoon... Geet brings her head down and asks... kis baat ki... 
maan doesnt say anything geet looks up.. and maan kisses her soft lips.. Geet shies and turns away...

Maan pulls her back to his chest kisses her neck and earlobes and geet tries to get off...maan doesnt leave her...

Geet turns and slowly strokes his cheek with her hand.. and he closes his eyes... and geet runs off..

Maan catches her and slowly opens the hook from her dress kisses each place her opens...geet turns and closes her face with her hands...

maan geet ko utakar.. bed pe leke jaathe hai... and removes his shirt and gts on the bed and kisses her forehead, eyes, her cheeks, slowly removes her kurta and pbrings the blanket on top of her... and keeps looking at geet blushing!!! he smiles and says... mishtiii

geet opens her and eyes and maan kisses her lips...and geet brings both her hand behind her head and hugs him tightly...

and they become one!!!!


Please let me know how it was...

please like and comment dears...

deepz

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Posted: 20 May 2011 at 1:15pm | IP Logged
lovely os... beautifully written!!

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Posted: 20 May 2011 at 1:35pm | IP Logged
beautiful os.
loved it.

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Posted: 20 May 2011 at 1:40pm | IP Logged
aesome update!!!!!

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Posted: 20 May 2011 at 2:04pm | IP Logged
fab job...enjoyed it!!!!!!!!!!!

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Amazing OS
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       Wow Great Yaar , you are awesome . Smile

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