Posted: 12 years ago
Hi friends, It's my first post In writer's corner. I used to write in Fan-fiction Forum but since I am more inclined towards poetry so posting my work here too...
Note: These poetries have been posted on my blog Words do matter too.

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Time has taken away the silent whimpers
Nagging presence of constant whispers

Deafening silence growling since forever
Fear and laughter existing together

Of shrieking sighs and suppressed cries
Silence is all in those mourning eyes

Silence is all, which floats to and fro
Mystifying reality of merciless truths

Expression out loud is a forgotten history
Fake smiles clutching unsolved mystery

Thousand words stuck in throat, helpless
Denying to betray their beastly mistress

Silence is artful,
If conceived it rhymes
If brushed off its nothing,
If penetrated can kill
Silence is pure
Silence is bliss

Speech of incoherent
Sanity of the fool
Bravery of the coward
Silence is nothing
Silence is all 

Silence is all being heard
Silence is all being felt
Wish there was a place where
Silence could be attained, understood and said...
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Let me know your views :)
Edited by deepikavasudeva - 12 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago
Deepu..ya am uninterested..dont u dare say that to me again!!!
Welcome back...Hugs!!!!!!!!
Am in love with your work..you write so true and magical hun!!!
Am missing u..fb ym?kaha kab?
Posted: 12 years ago
w-o-w! u r an artist gurl !
Firstly Welcome Back to IF =DD
I Loved the poem, very deep thoughts u have encompassed within these very few words, why thts the beauty of poetry and u have showcased ur talent so well..I truly applaud this very spell-binding attempt of yours to define silence and its effect, its necessity and its value.

Truly amazing hun 👏
Do write more n do PM me..

Luv
ZeeJay ! =)


Posted: 12 years ago
nice one...
thanks for the pm...
Posted: 12 years ago
Hi Dear
welcome back
Gosh- what a beautiful Poem
its really awesome
loved it so much
Do write more
Posted: 12 years ago
hii welcome back...
loved ur poem.
it's simply awesooome...
thanx for the pm.
Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing Mind  Blowing  👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
Posted: 12 years ago
ya mujhe aisa kabhi mat bolna ki not interestedi'm a literature student and m a Die hard poetry fan 😊
nice one...👏 i love it
keep writing these stuff 😊 m waiting for the next update

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