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Guilt vs Love.. Dev's mind... (Page 3)

Devika. IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 21 May 2011 at 6:46am | IP Logged
thank you radhika5, neerja, and august.
 thanks radhika5 for explaining the mind play behind his action.. very well said... yes it is his guilt.. and then it is her inner love.. and her trust .. mix of all, a complex charactor and avi is carrying it well..
neerja.. thanks much dear for ur kind words.. so nice to me.. , and august hopefully it iwll extend on monday,. or at some other point, but we can hope to see one scene ..maybe next week...

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ekta15 IF-Rockerz
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Posted: 21 May 2011 at 7:30am | IP Logged
WOOOW
so beautifully written
really am going to miss ur posts

and sia true now dev has to realize,question himself why he gets furious,this only can show the true image of dev.

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radhika5 Goldie
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Posted: 21 May 2011 at 11:13am | IP Logged
Hi Devika

I have been very intrigued by this whole track as to how one can react to guilt and sense of loss--
And you did really well putting a scene around this---

here is an attempt to put kavita around it---

Dev to Radhika-----


Chahate hai appko, Par jata nahi sakte

Koshish karte hai ki, app bhi bhula de hume

Har ek shabd me chupa, hai mere pyaar ka ehsaas

Par na jane kyun, suna pate hai sirf kadvi baate

 

Tumse juda rehana mumkin hi nahi,

Jaante hue bhi..koshish karte rahate hai hum

Es dastaan me na janne kya kya kahe gaye hum

Kya aap kabhi hume maf kar sakoge?

 


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Posted: 21 May 2011 at 11:44am | IP Logged
 Very good  attempt  Radhika5 , if you say so but it has the essence what Dev would have liked to tell her... 

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Devika. IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 24 May 2011 at 12:06pm | IP Logged
[QUOTE=radhika5
I have been very intrigued by this whole track as to how one can react to guilt and sense of loss--
And you did really well putting a scene around this---

here is an attempt to put kavita around it---

Dev to Radhika-----


Chahate hai appko, Par jata nahi sakte

Koshish karte hai ki, app bhi bhula de hume

Har ek shabd me chupa, hai mere pyaar ka ehsaas

Par na jane kyun, suna pate hai sirf kadvi baate

 

Tumse juda rehana mumkin hi nahi,

Jaante hue bhi..koshish karte rahate hai hum

Es dastaan me na janne kya kya kahe gaye hum

Kya aap kabhi hume maf kar sakoge?

 


[/QUOTE]
wow ! wow! wow!.. kavayithri Radhika!. kya bath hei!... superb.. thanks for sharing  your talent with us.. 
i think the last lien will be Dev's innder conflit now.. after seeing her unshaken love for him.. that "will she be able to forgive him for his deeds?"
 
Thank you ekta..  hope the upcoming track bring joy to our heart and satisfaction to our eyes, fill our ears with those comforting words.. then you won't miss me, nor my post and then  i can  fly away into the darkness of that coccoon...
 
just came  to send  the  one shot .. to NL team, and stopped by to check on this kavitha..
glad that i did...
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Posted: 24 May 2011 at 12:32pm | IP Logged
Verry beautiful dear,i wish i would have Seen these scenes with this possesive dev!

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