OS: The Journey (Safar) - Update Part 3 Page 7 - Page 6

Beautifully written, loved the lyrics and how u hav incorporated them in ur story...

beautiful OS...

👏wowww 👏👏Azz take a bow! 😊it was the most wonderful journey of Maneet i have ever read.😊...the way you captured all thoseintense  memories and the depth of all that geet felt for maan  remembering them  uff..if we had been lucky enough to see even a fraction of what you mentioned here our TRPs would have been going up the  roof.😃...but alas writers who understand their subject as much as you just did hardly get recognition...😭😭

pls update soon . i loved ur os . pls add me to your buddy list

PLS UPDATE SOON WAITING FROM SO MANY DAYS

azi twiny when do we get part 4

when are u updating part 4 

hey such a besutiful OS...

plzzz update soon i