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MG ff not that kind of love story part 11 pg 27 - Page 15

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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: avani_9

ahh nyc part bt y dadi didnt trust maan n precap ????

update soon

U will find out today!! 😊 πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: shah10

amazing update

tnx
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thank you friends for suporting me,i know i am not a writer but this idea came to my mind and i have to pen it down...and is nice to see that atleast few people take their time to read this and like it!
Part 9


Nite was never like this before for maan!
Far became near and the wrong turned right!
Ssh...dont be scared...its me...
Hmm...my dream was so real...the touch so soft...but suddenly became cold...i strugled to open my eyes...the window was opened...I didnt mean to scare u...
It was him...how he...the window...although she was wearing a long sleaves nite dress she pulled the sheet up to her shoulders and rised on sitting postiton...what are u doing here this late at nite?!asked geet puzzled!
I came to talk to u...i couldnt wait till morning...he aproched her again trying to get a sit near her in all that darkness in the room...his eyes only hoocked on her...he didnt see ...ouch...he hit the nite stand tham landing on top of geet hiting his already wounded head in the bed rest!! Just great...maan managed to say...Geet couldnt even breath after the shock,she looked at his face filled with pain...pain.,..?Arre aap,are u ok?!She pushed him slowly so she would have his head in her lap...he was a muscular man but there in her lap he looked like a injured kid...so vulnerable...so sweet...she started strocking his hair gently...massaging his scalp...taking his pain away... God,this felt so good...her little hands in my hair...her rosy perfume...heaven...so soothing that i didnd know when i fell asleap!Geet felt him at ease...her soul calmed too...holding a hand of his left part of his chest and one on his forehead...she leaned on the bed rest and slept.
Its 9am and maan,my son, its not up...hmm...lets check on geet too,she needs to eat to ,naa
Cuddled up to eachother...thats how dadi saw them!!Maaan...!!i knew i shouldnt have trusted u!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
hmmm great timing yaar. now what will Daadi do to them?
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Posted: 12 years ago
wwwooowww gr8... m in love with ur little sweet chit note...πŸ‘

doing really fab.. love it a lot...πŸ€—

take care... hv funπŸ˜ƒ
Edited by disha_maan - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved the update...
but y did maan come to geet's room...
but their moment was so cute...
pl cont soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome .. superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
wowww awesomeee
luved ittt
wonder wt will dadi do nw
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: kinju100

hmmm great timing yaar. now what will Daadi do to them?

read tomorows update and u will find outπŸ˜‰

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -dia-

Interesting ...loved it!!!

thank u dear